唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に直接答え、なぜそう思うのかを簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、「I don't like singing because I am not good at it and I felt shy when I was a child.」のように、シンプルで明確な表現を心がけてください。

示例: I don't like singing because I am not good at it and I felt shy when I was a child.

建议: 答えが少し混乱しており、文法的な誤りもあります。質問に対して直接的に答え、その後に理由や希望を述べると良いでしょう。例えば、「I have never learned how to sing formally, but I want to learn more about it because I enjoy music.」のように表現してください。

示例: I have never learned how to sing formally, but I want to learn more about it because I enjoy music.

建议: 意味が伝わりにくい部分が多いです。質問に対して明確に答え、理由を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、「I want to sing for my mother because she has supported me a lot.」のように表現すると良いです。

示例: I want to sing for my mother because she has supported me a lot.

建议: 内容は良いですが、文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭な部分があります。質問に対して明確に答え、理由を具体的に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、「I think singing brings happiness because it allows people to express their feelings, such as happiness and sadness.」のように表現してください。

示例: I think singing brings happiness because it allows people to express their feelings, such as happiness and sadness.

× I don't like to think of because I'm not good at singing a when I was a child up.

✓ I don't like to think of singing because I'm not good at it since I was a child.

The phrase 'singing a when I was a child up' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The verb 'singing' should be followed by an object or context. Also, 'a when I was a child up' is nonsensical. The corrected sentence uses 'singing' properly as a gerund and clarifies the time frame with 'since I was a child.'

× I can't, uh, I couldn't think well and I was had stated and so I don't like to I don't I like to think I front of.

✓ I couldn't sing well and I was shy, so I don't like to sing in front of others.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'I was had stated' is incorrect; likely intended 'I was shy' or 'I was hesitant.' Also, 'I don't like to I don't I like to think I front of' is confusing and ungrammatical. The correction clarifies the intended meaning using correct past tense and sentence structure.

× I haven't ever learned about singing.

✓ I have never learned about singing.

The phrase 'haven't ever' is less common and 'never' is preferred for negative experience statements. Also, 'learned' is correct past participle here. The correction improves naturalness and clarity.

× I only learn how to think well in classes at elementary school, so I but I want to learn more about it.

✓ I only learned how to sing well in classes at elementary school, but I want to learn more about it.

The verb 'think' is incorrect here; it should be 'sing.' Also, 'learn' should be in past tense 'learned' to match the time frame. The sentence structure is improved by removing 'so' and correcting conjunction usage.

× I want you seeing for my mother, my mother glow.

✓ I want to sing for my mother; my mother is kind.

'You seeing' is incorrect; it should be 'to sing.' 'My mother glow' is unclear; likely intended 'my mother is kind' or 'my mother supports me.' The correction uses proper pronouns and verb forms.

× My mother have blown me up at this age so I I appreciate for her on I want to sing for my mother.

✓ My mother has supported me at this age, so I appreciate her and want to sing for my mother.

'Have blown me up' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'has supported me.' 'I appreciate for her on' is ungrammatical; 'I appreciate her' is correct. The correction fixes verb agreement and pronoun usage.

× I think singing is brings happiness to the paper because singing can express some kinds of feelings.

✓ I think singing brings happiness to people because singing can express many kinds of feelings.

'Is brings' is incorrect; only one verb is needed. 'The paper' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'people.' 'Some kinds' is better expressed as 'many kinds.' The correction fixes verb agreement and word choice.

× Of course I happiness sadness an part.

✓ Of course, happiness, sadness, and other emotions are part of it.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper quantifiers and conjunctions. The correction adds necessary words to express the idea clearly.

× I think our people can X place their feelings by singing.

✓ I think people can express their feelings by singing.

'Our people' is awkward; 'people' is sufficient. 'X place' is a mishearing or typo for 'express.' The correction fixes pronoun use and word choice.