唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I really into songs' nên là 'I am really into songs'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó dùng các liên từ để nối các ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Hạn chế lặp từ và tránh câu quá dài không rõ ràng.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it allows me to express my emotions and inner thoughts effectively. For example, when I feel happy or sad, singing helps me release those feelings. Moreover, it is a great way to relax and connect with music.

建议: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'Are not actually'. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể với các liên từ để câu trả lời logic hơn.

示例: No, I have never formally learned how to sing because I was not very good at it when I was young. However, I did take piano lessons, which helped me understand music better.

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ như 'close one' nên là 'close ones' hoặc 'close friends'. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó dùng liên từ để bổ sung lý do cụ thể và mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I would prefer to sing for my close friends because I am not very confident in my singing skills. Singing in front of them feels more comfortable and less stressful.

建议: Bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'a effective' nên là 'an effective way'. Sử dụng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó dùng liên từ để bổ sung ví dụ cụ thể và chi tiết hơn.

示例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people express their emotions. For instance, many adults sing to relieve stress after a busy day at work.

× I really into songs and that's why I really like singing.

✓ I am really into songs and that's why I really like singing.

The sentence is missing the verb 'am' to correctly use the phrase 'really into'. The correct structure is 'I am really into songs'. This is a common error where the verb 'to be' is omitted before a prepositional phrase expressing interest.

× I feel like singing this one of the best way to express all my emotions as well my inner thoughts, which are, you know, quite in explainable fillings.

✓ I feel like singing is one of the best ways to express all my emotions as well as my inner thoughts, which are, you know, quite inexplicable feelings.

The phrase 'one of the best way' should be 'one of the best ways' because 'one of the' is followed by a plural noun. Also, 'in explainable fillings' is incorrect; it should be 'inexplicable feelings'. Additionally, 'as well my inner thoughts' should be 'as well as my inner thoughts' to be grammatically correct.

× Are not actually, I'm not quite vocally good when I was little and I have never had anything in courses too, even though I, you know, I took some some courses on how to play the piano but not not with the singing.

✓ Actually, I'm not quite vocally good when I was little and I have never had any courses too, even though, you know, I took some courses on how to play the piano but not with singing.

The phrase 'Are not actually' is incorrect and should be 'Actually'. 'Anything in courses' is incorrect; it should be 'any courses'. Also, 'not not with the singing' should be 'not with singing'. The sentence also has redundancy and awkward phrasing that needed correction.

× I think it's gotta be one of my close one because like I mentioned before, I'm not quite confident with my vocal abilities.

✓ I think it's gotta be one of my close ones because, like I mentioned before, I'm not quite confident with my vocal abilities.

The phrase 'one of my close one' is incorrect because 'one of my' should be followed by a plural noun. Therefore, 'close one' should be 'close ones'.

× So probably when it comes to one of my closest friend that I have the somehow I had the confidence to sing for them.

✓ So probably when it comes to one of my closest friends that I have, somehow I have the confidence to sing for them.

The phrase 'one of my closest friend' should be 'one of my closest friends' because 'one of my' requires a plural noun. Also, 'I had the confidence' should be 'I have the confidence' to match the present context. The sentence structure was also improved for clarity.

× Yes, like I mentioned before, I feel like singing is one of the best way to express your emotion and your inner thoughts and the vocal way.

✓ Yes, like I mentioned before, I feel like singing is one of the best ways to express your emotions and your inner thoughts in a vocal way.

The phrase 'one of the best way' should be 'one of the best ways' because 'one of the' is followed by a plural noun. Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match the context. 'And the vocal way' is awkward and corrected to 'in a vocal way'.

× And also, for instance, a lot of people, especially adults, when they have to deal with enormous workload, they often find singing to be a effective.

✓ And also, for instance, a lot of people, especially adults, when they have to deal with an enormous workload, they often find singing to be effective.

The phrase 'enormous workload' requires the indefinite article 'an' before it because 'workload' is a singular countable noun here. Also, 'a effective' is incorrect; it should be 'effective' without an article because 'effective' is an adjective here.