唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Try to directly state your opinion and support it with specific reasons using linking words for coherence.

示例: Yes, I like singing because it helps reduce my stress and is beneficial for both my body and mind. Moreover, singing makes me happy and serves as a great recreational activity.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Please respond directly to the question and use correct grammar. Also, clarify your intentions with specific details and linking words.

示例: No, I have never learned how to sing because I was not interested before. However, now I would like to learn singing in the future since my favourite singer is Adele.

建议: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Please answer the question directly and clearly. Use proper sentence structure and provide specific reasons or feelings to support your answer.

示例: I want to sing a song for Adele because she is my favourite singer. Performing in front of her would be a wonderful experience that I would really enjoy.

建议: Your answer has good intent but is unclear and contains errors. Please use clear and natural language, avoid redundancy, and support your opinion with specific reasons using linking words.

示例: Yes, I strongly believe that singing brings happiness because it is an easy and effective way to improve both the body and mind.

× Yes, I like singing songs because it helps me know reducing my stress level and also it it is or convenient and lucrative for our body and mind.

✓ Yes, I like singing songs because it helps me reduce my stress level and also it is convenient and beneficial for our body and mind.

The phrase 'helps me know reducing' is incorrect; after 'helps me', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'reduce' is correct instead of 'reducing'. Also, 'lucrative' is not appropriate here; 'beneficial' or 'convenient' fits better. The repeated 'it it' is a typographical error.

× Yes, I like singing songs because it helps me know reducing my stress level and also it it is or convenient and lucrative for our body and mind.

✓ Yes, I like singing songs because it helps me reduce my stress level and also it is convenient and beneficial for our body and mind.

The sentence has structural issues such as repeated words ('it it') and incorrect word choice ('or convenient'). Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× It makes me happy and. It is a. Recreation activity.

✓ It makes me happy and it is a recreational activity.

The sentence is fragmented with unnecessary periods. Combining the fragments into a complete sentence improves readability and correctness.

× No, I never learned how to sing songs be 'cause I didn't owe interest in sore singing songs before now.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing songs because I didn't have interest in singing songs before.

The phrase 'didn't owe interest' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'didn't have interest'. Also, 'be 'cause' should be 'because'. The tense 'have never learned' is more appropriate for experience up to now.

× No, I never learned how to sing songs be 'cause I didn't owe interest in sore singing songs before now.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing songs because I didn't have interest in singing songs before.

The preposition 'in' is correctly used with 'interest', but the verb 'owe' is incorrect here; 'have' is the correct verb to express possession of interest.

× But now I would like love to listen songs in future because my favorite sing singer is Adele.

✓ But now I would love to listen to songs in the future because my favorite singer is Adele.

The phrase 'would like love' is redundant; 'would love' suffices. 'Listen songs' should be 'listen to songs'. 'In future' should be 'in the future'.

× I want to sing song for Adele G dishonest because he's my favorite singer and I want I really want to a single song front of Diljit that that.

✓ I want to sing a song for Adele because he's my favorite singer and I really want to sing a song in front of Diljit.

The sentence has pronoun and word errors: 'song' should be 'a song'; 'G dishonest' is unclear and likely a typo; 'a single song front of' should be 'sing a song in front of'. Correcting these clarifies meaning.

× I want to sing song for Adele G dishonest because he's my favorite singer and I want I really want to a single song front of Diljit that that. Movement I rarely want to enjoy and I also.

✓ I want to sing a song for Adele because he's my favorite singer, and I really want to sing a song in front of Diljit. At that moment, I would really enjoy it.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases like 'G dishonest' and 'Movement I rarely want to enjoy'. Rewriting for clarity and correct sentence structure is necessary.

× Oh yes, I strongly believe that singing can bring happiness to people becauses singing is a very convenient and lucrative way to fruit to improve people's body and mind and it also can be fruitful for there.

✓ Oh yes, I strongly believe that singing can bring happiness to people because singing is a very convenient and beneficial way to improve people's body and mind, and it can also be fruitful for them.

The word 'becauses' should be 'because'. 'Fruit to improve' is incorrect; 'beneficial' or 'fruitful' is appropriate. 'There' should be 'them' to correctly refer to people.