唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ ngữ chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, thay vì nói 'our emotions put into that songs', bạn nên nói 'the emotions I feel when singing'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và câu bổ trợ.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it allows me to express my emotions freely. Singing helps me relax and feel happy. In the future, I hope to become a professional singer.

建议: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt cho tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, thay vì nói 'I'm just watch', bạn nên nói 'I just watch'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'learn singing' nên là 'learn how to sing'.

示例: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. I usually learn how to sing by watching YouTube tutorials and practicing on my own.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi như 'an advice' (đúng là 'some advice') và 'my friends needs all my requirements' không rõ nghĩa. Hãy tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể.

示例: If I have a chance, I would like to sing in front of my friends because they can give me honest feedback and help me improve my singing skills.

建议: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu văn mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, 'got debuted their positive life' không đúng ngữ pháp và nghĩa. Bạn nên nói 'feel more positive and happy'. Hãy dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời logic và rõ ràng hơn.

示例: Yes, I believe singing happy and energetic songs can make people feel more positive and joyful. Moreover, it can inspire them to adopt a healthier and happier lifestyle.

× Actually, singing is my cup of tea. The reason I love singing is that I can express our emotions put into that songs because it has resemblance to mind.

✓ Actually, singing is my cup of tea. The reason I love singing is that I can express my emotions put into those songs because it has resemblance to my mind.

The pronouns 'our' and 'that' are incorrectly used. 'Our' should be 'my' to match the speaker's perspective. 'That' should be 'those' to correctly refer to plural 'songs'. Also, 'to mind' should be 'to my mind' for clarity.

× The reason I love singing is that I can express our emotions put into that songs because it has resemblance to mind.

✓ The reason I love singing is that I can express my emotions put into those songs because it has resemblance to my mind.

The phrase 'has resemblance to mind' is incorrect. It should be 'has resemblance to my mind' to specify possession and clarity.

× In future, I also want to become a singer.

✓ In the future, I also want to become a singer.

The phrase 'In future' is missing the definite article 'the'. The correct phrase is 'In the future' when referring to a time period ahead.

× Honestly, I wasn't trained by any professional singers or attended any singing classes.

✓ Honestly, I wasn't trained by any professional singers nor did I attend any singing classes.

The sentence combines two negative past actions incorrectly. Using 'nor did I attend' correctly connects the two negative clauses in past tense.

× I'm just watch.

✓ I just watch.

The phrase 'I'm just watch' is incorrect because 'watch' should be in base form without 'am' when used with 'just' to indicate habitual action.

× I just learn singing from watching some YouTube videos or tutorials.

✓ I just learn singing by watching some YouTube videos or tutorials.

The preposition 'from' is less appropriate here; 'by' correctly indicates the method of learning.

× If I have a chance I will sing in front of my friends because I really need someone to give me an advice or some professional assessments about my singing levels an my friends needs all my requirements.

✓ If I have a chance, I will sing in front of my friends because I really need someone to give me advice or some professional assessments about my singing level, and my friends meet all my requirements.

'An advice' is incorrect because 'advice' is uncountable and does not take 'an'. 'Singing levels' should be singular 'singing level' for clarity. 'An' should be 'and'. 'My friends needs' should be 'my friends meet' to agree in number and meaning.

× If I have a chance I will sing in front of my friends because I really need someone to give me an advice or some professional assessments about my singing levels an my friends needs all my requirements.

✓ If I have a chance, I will sing in front of my friends because I really need someone to give me advice or some professional assessments about my singing level, and my friends meet all my requirements.

'Advice' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by 'an'. Use 'some advice' or just 'advice' without an article.

× Yes, of course, if people sing the energetic or happy songs, they got debuted their positive life which is full of happiness and optimism.

✓ Yes, of course, if people sing energetic or happy songs, they develop their positive life which is full of happiness and optimism.

'Got debuted' is incorrect and does not fit the context. The correct verb is 'develop' in present tense to match the conditional sentence.

× Yes, of course, if people sing the energetic or happy songs, they got debuted their positive life which is full of happiness and optimism.

✓ Yes, of course, if people sing energetic or happy songs, they develop their positive life which is full of happiness and optimism.

The definite article 'the' before 'energetic or happy songs' is unnecessary because it refers to songs in general, not specific ones.

× Plus they can take inspirations from singing that kind of song to change their lifestyle in a better way.

✓ Plus, they can take inspiration from singing that kind of song to change their lifestyle in a better way.

'Inspirations' should be singular 'inspiration' as it is uncountable in this context. Also, 'from singing that kind of song' is acceptable but could be improved for clarity.