唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了不喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有重复和语法错误。建议简化句子，直接表达观点，并用连词连接理由，使表达更流畅。

示例: No, I don't like singing because I don't have a good voice. Also, singing in front of people makes me feel embarrassed and uncomfortable.

建议: 回答中信息不够清晰，句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性。建议直接回答问题，说明学习经历和感受，使用连词连接句子，使表达更清楚。

示例: Yes, I learned some basic singing skills at school, but I found it difficult and usually got low grades because singing is not my strong point.

建议: 回答表达了想为朋友唱歌的想法，但句子不连贯且有语法错误。建议简洁明了地表达观点，使用连词连接理由，使表达更自然。

示例: I don't usually want to sing for others, but if I had to choose, I would sing for my best friends because we are very close, and they would encourage me even if I sing badly.

建议: 回答内容不清晰，句子结构混乱，表达不连贯。建议直接回答问题，说明原因并举例，使用连词使表达更流畅。

示例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because many young people enjoy singing to relieve stress and express their feelings.

× No, I'm not really into something for I I don't think I have a good voice and it's very difficult for me to sing among publics.

✓ No, I'm not really into singing because I don't think I have a good voice and it's very difficult for me to sing in public.

The phrase 'into something' is vague; 'into singing' is more precise. 'For' is incorrectly used to mean 'because'. 'Among publics' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in public' to indicate performing before people.

× It it makes me feel embarrassed and also so she is very difficult and complicated for I'm not sure I'm not a valid thing.

✓ It makes me feel embarrassed and also it is very difficult and complicated because I'm not sure I am good at it.

Repeated 'It it' is a mistake. 'So she is' is incorrect; likely meant 'it is'. 'I'm not a valid thing' is incorrect; should express uncertainty about ability, e.g., 'I'm not sure I am good at it.' Pronouns and expressions need correction for clarity.

× Yes, yes, we have some of the music 'cause in our school, in this class I will learn how to sing some like basic source, but it's very difficult and I and I usually get like C or D grades in those those curves is is not suitable for me.

✓ Yes, we have some music classes because in our school, in this class I learn some basic singing skills, but it's very difficult and I usually get C or D grades in those courses; it is not suitable for me.

'We have some of the music' is incorrect; 'some music classes' is better. 'Cause' should be 'because'. 'Basic source' is incorrect; likely 'basic singing skills'. 'Curves' is a mishearing of 'courses'. Repetition and verb agreement errors corrected.

× I don't know, I don't really want you seem for others, but if you but if I had the choice I I want to sing for my best friends for I think we are very closed and the and the if I although I think very bad, she will not like loving me or motivate me.

✓ I don't know, I don't really want to sing for others, but if I had the choice, I would want to sing for my best friends because I think we are very close, and even if I sing badly, they will still love and motivate me.

'Want you seem' is incorrect; should be 'want to sing'. 'Closed' should be 'close'. The sentence structure is confusing; corrected for clarity and proper pronoun use. 'She will not like loving me' is incorrect; corrected to 'they will still love and motivate me'.

× Yes, sure. Oh, I think this is the one of the main reason why more and more young people are choosing to thing and bill either or or a professional singer for they for they got pressure from thinking and anything from up in front of public.

✓ Yes, sure. Oh, I think this is one of the main reasons why more and more young people are choosing to sing and become either amateurs or professional singers because they feel pressure from singing and performing in front of the public.

'Thing and bill' is incorrect; likely 'sing and become'. 'For they for they got pressure' is incorrect; corrected to 'because they feel pressure'. 'Up in front of public' should be 'in front of the public'. Prepositions and word choices corrected for clarity.