唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言不够连贯，句子结构混乱，且有重复和语法错误。建议练习用简洁明了的句子表达观点，避免重复，并尝试使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress. Moreover, singing is a good way to communicate and connect with others.

建议: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达含糊。建议用简单句直接回答问题，并补充具体细节，避免语法错误。

示例: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I like to practice singing by following others and imitating their pronunciation.

建议: 回答中表达了唱歌对象和原因，但句子结构不完整，词汇使用不准确。建议使用完整句子，注意语法和词汇的准确性，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

示例: I would like to sing for my family and close friends because it helps me express my feelings and strengthen our bond. Singing for them feels special since they always support and appreciate me.

建议: 回答表达了观点，但语法和词汇错误较多，句子不连贯。建议用完整句子表达观点，避免语法错误，并用具体例子支持观点。

示例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it is a relaxing activity that helps reduce stress. For example, when I listen to my favorite songs, I feel cheerful and singing allows me to express my emotions.

× I think is very relaxed, way too stressed.

✓ I think it is very relaxing, not too stressful.

这里缺少主语"it"，并且"relaxed"应改为形容词"relaxing"来描述感觉，"way too stressed"表达不准确，应改为"not too stressful"。

× It's a good way to communicate with other end.

✓ It's a good way to communicate with others.

"other end"用法错误，应使用复数形式"others"表示其他人。

× No, I didn't have a learn to see any but I can follow with others to practice the way and seeming like others to pronounce Asian.

✓ No, I haven't learned to sing, but I can follow others to practice and try to pronounce Asian songs like them.

"didn't have a learn"语法错误，应使用现在完成时"haven't learned"；"follow with others"应为"follow others"；"seeming like others to pronounce Asian"表达不清，应改为"try to pronounce Asian songs like them"。

× I would like to sing for my family and close friends because it helps me express my feeling and connect ways.

✓ I would like to sing for my family and close friends because it helps me express my feelings and connect with them.

"feeling"应为复数"feelings"；"connect ways"表达错误，应为"connect with them"。

× Them sending for them feels very special since there always subsumed support me and appreciate my efforts.

✓ Singing for them feels very special since they always support me and appreciate my efforts.

"Them sending for them"结构错误，应改为"Singing for them"；"there always subsumed support me"语法错误，应为"they always support me"。

× For example when I seen it.

✓ For example, when I sang it.

"seen"是过去分词，句中应使用过去式"sang"。

× Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it's a. A very relaxing activity is that helpful reduce JS.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it's a very relaxing activity that helps reduce stress.

句中"is that helpful reduce JS"结构错误，应改为"that helps reduce stress"，并且"JS"应为"stress"。

× For example, when I see my favorite songs I feel more cheerful and the car singing.

✓ For example, when I hear my favorite songs, I feel more cheerful and enjoy singing.

"see"应为"hear"，"the car singing"表达不清，应改为"enjoy singing"。

× Also allow people to express their IMO.

✓ It also allows people to express their emotions.

"IMO"应为"emotions"，并且缺少主语，应加上"It"。