唱歌— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons. For example, explain why you don't like singing and what you mean by 'bathroom singer' in a simple way.

示例: Honestly, I don't like singing very much because I lack the skills and confidence. I'm what people call a 'bathroom singer,' meaning I only sing when I'm alone at home. Because I don't know much about singing techniques or rhymes, I prefer to avoid it.

建议: Improve sentence structure and grammar to make your answer clearer. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, be specific about your feelings and choices.

示例: No, I have never learned how to sing. At school, we had to choose between drawing and singing classes, and I chose drawing because I felt more comfortable with it. Also, I lacked confidence to sing in public, so singing was not my preference.

建议: Focus on clear and correct grammar. Use linking words to explain your reason. Also, avoid redundancy and clarify your meaning.

示例: If I had the chance to sing, I would like to sing for my husband because I feel most comfortable singing in front of him compared to anyone else. His support makes me less nervous.

建议: Use correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid repetition and clarify your ideas. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

示例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness to most people because it helps them relax and build confidence. Especially when people sing in front of an audience, it can boost their self-esteem and reduce nervousness.

× Nestle speaking.

✓ Honestly speaking.

The phrase 'Nestle speaking' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'Honestly speaking' to indicate the speaker is being truthful or frank.

× I'm only a bathroom single.

✓ I'm only a bathroom singer.

The word 'single' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'singer' to describe someone who sings, especially in the bathroom.

× So because I don't have much information how to sing, how to make the rhymes, so I do not like singing.

✓ Because I don't have much knowledge about how to sing or make rhymes, I do not like singing.

The sentence uses 'so because' redundantly and awkwardly. It is better to start with 'Because' and avoid repeating 'so'. Also, 'information' is not the correct word; 'knowledge' fits better here.

× No, I never learned how to sing because in my school we have two courses, drawing and singing.

✓ No, I never learned how to sing because in my school we had two courses, drawing and singing.

The sentence mixes past and present tense. Since the action refers to the past, 'have' should be changed to 'had' to maintain past tense consistency.

× So that time I choose drawing because I was comfortable in doing instead of singing because I don't have much confident to sing in public.

✓ So at that time, I chose drawing because I was more comfortable doing it instead of singing, as I didn't have much confidence to sing in public.

The verb 'choose' should be in past tense 'chose' to match the past context. Also, 'confident' is an adjective; the noun form 'confidence' is needed here.

× If I get a chance to sing, I want to sing in front of my husband because in front of him I'm only comfort table in front of them instead of any other one.

✓ If I get a chance to sing, I want to sing in front of my husband because I feel comfortable in front of him rather than anyone else.

The phrase 'comfort table' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'comfortable'. Also, 'in front of them' is unclear and should be replaced with 'rather than anyone else' for clarity.

× Yes, majority of people loves singing because it makes them relax and and build some confident in them.

✓ Yes, the majority of people love singing because it helps them relax and build some confidence.

'Majority' requires the definite article 'the'. 'People' is plural, so the verb should be 'love' not 'loves'. 'Confident' is an adjective; the noun 'confidence' is correct here.

× Specially singing in front of public, in front of enemies and lative's makes them more confident.

✓ Especially singing in front of the public, in front of enemies, and relatives makes them more confident.

'Specially' should be 'especially'. 'Public' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Lative's' is a misspelling of 'relatives'. Also, commas are needed to separate the list items.