Shopping— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and filler words, and keep to 2–4 sentences. Add a specific example or brief reason linked with a linking word to support your idea.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy shopping. It helps me relax and I feel satisfied when I find something I like; for example, last weekend I bought a book that lifted my mood.

Gợi ý: Give a direct reason and specific detail with clear linking words. Avoid awkward phrases and repetition; explain when and how you compare prices and one result of doing so.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually compare prices, especially for expensive items. For instance, I check online and in-store prices before buying a laptop so I can be sure I'm getting the best deal.

Gợi ý: Begin with a concise topic sentence, then give a brief reason and an example. Avoid stuttering and incomplete sentences; explain who helps you and how their help affects your decisions.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often find it hard to decide what to buy because I worry about making the wrong choice. Therefore, I usually go shopping with my mother or sister, who help me choose by giving honest opinions.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion and support it with a concise reason and an example. Eliminate fillers and contradictions. Use linking words like 'however' or 'for example' to make your point coherent.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think expensive products are always better. For example, I once bought an affordable kitchen knife that was sharper and more durable than a costly brand, so quality depends on the product and brand, not just the price.

× When I have spare time I go to shopping and I love shopping because it refreshes my mind as well as it gives me a real sense of satisfaction.

✓ When I have spare time I go shopping and I love shopping because it refreshes my mind and gives me a real sense of satisfaction.

Use 'go shopping' (no 'to') not 'go to shopping'. Also 'as well as it gives' is awkward; use 'and gives' to connect two effects of shopping. Grammar Problem Type ID: 11

× Sometimes I I think it's a great time.

✓ Sometimes I think it's a great time.

There is a duplicated word 'I'. Remove the extra 'I' to correct the sentence structure and ensure fluency. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× When I go to inner shop I compare the prices because of I think I am quite good doing this.

✓ When I go to an inner shop I compare the prices because I think I am quite good at doing this.

Use the article 'an' before 'inner shop' and remove 'to' if not needed; more importantly, 'because of I think' is incorrect: use 'because I think' or 'because of' + noun. Also use 'good at doing' to express ability. Grammar Problem Type ID: 11

× So basically I do it because of when I think it's it's a high price that time I compare.

✓ So basically I do it because when I think the price is high I compare.

'Because of when' is incorrect; use 'because when'. Remove duplicated 'it's' and reorder to 'the price is high' for correct English word order. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× Yes, it is quite difficult for me to make choices while shopping because I'm I'm very confused person that's why I always take my mother or my sister to make choice for me and I.

✓ Yes, it is quite difficult for me to make choices while shopping because I'm a very confused person; that's why I always take my mother or my sister to make choices for me.

Missing article 'a' before 'very confused person'. Remove duplicated 'I'm'. Use plural 'choices' to match context. The sentence originally ends incomplete; finish with 'for me' to be grammatical. Grammar Problem Type ID: 2

× Uh, I don't think so, except expensive product are always better than cheaper ones because, uh, sometimes cheaper one are quite better rather than, uh, expensive one.

✓ Uh, I don't think so; expensive products are not always better than cheaper ones because sometimes cheaper ones are quite better than expensive ones.

Use plural 'products' and 'ones' consistently. 'Except' is misused; better to contrast with 'not always'. Use 'better than' rather than 'better rather than'. Ensure subject-verb agreement for plurals. Grammar Problem Type ID: 14

× Uh, so it's actually depends, uh, uh, if, uh, if, uh, you are very.

✓ Uh, so it actually depends on what you need or prefer.

'It depends' should not have 'it's' plus 'depends' together. Use 'depends on' and complete the clause with an object (e.g., 'what you need or prefer') instead of trailing off. Remove filler 'uh' for clarity. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26