Shopping— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 答えは直接的で内容も分かりやすいですが、文法ミス（"like go shopping" → "like going shopping"）や冗長な表現、接続の工夫が必要です。また話の流れを自然にするためにトピックセンテンスの後に短い理由や比較を入れると良いです。具体的には、文法を正し、接続詞（"however", "whereas" 等）を使い、文を簡潔に保ってください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy shopping, but not as much as my wife. She usually goes shopping about twice a month, whereas I only go roughly once a month, so I prefer shopping less frequently.

Gợi ý: 回答は明確で理由も述べられていますが、語彙や構造を少し改善するとより自然になります。"more inexpensive"は不自然なので"cheaper"を使い、接続語（"because", "so"）で論理をはっきりさせ、一文を簡潔に保ってください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually compare prices because I prefer to buy cheaper items when their quality is the same. This helps me save money without sacrificing value.

Gợi ý: 主旨は伝わりますが、複数の問題点があります：不要なフィラー（"umm"）、文法誤り（"more inexpensive 1", "make choice"）、語順や単語選択の改善が必要です。短く明確なトピックセンテンスの後に理由を示し、フィラーを減らして正しい語彙（"cheaper", "make a choice"）を使いましょう。

Ví dụ: No, I don't find it difficult. If two products have the same quality, I usually choose the cheaper one, so deciding is straightforward for me.

Gợi ý: 考えはある程度示されていますが、表現が断片的で不完全です。フィラーが多く、理由の説明が曖昧（"the price increase, the cost of advertisement"）で文が終わっていません。完全な文章で理由と例を明確に述べ、接続詞（"however", "for example"）を適切に使って話を締めましょう。

Ví dụ: I think more expensive products tend to be better, but not always. For example, higher prices can reflect marketing or brand reputation rather than superior quality, so you shouldn't assume cost equals value.

× Yes, I do, but I don't think I like go shopping as much as my wife does.

✓ Yes, I do, but I don't think I like to go shopping as much as my wife does.

The verb after 'like' in this context should be the infinitive 'to go' or the gerund 'going'. The student used the bare form 'go', which is ungrammatical here. Use 'to go' or 'going' to form a correct verb phrase. Suggestion: say 'I don't think I like to go shopping' or 'I don't think I like going shopping.'

× On the other hand, I rarely go shopping and once a month or so.

✓ On the other hand, I rarely go shopping — about once a month or so.

The original sentence runs two clauses together without a clear connector; 'and once a month or so' is a fragment. Adding an adverb phrase 'about' and linking it properly (dash or comma) clarifies frequency. Ensure each clause is complete: 'I rarely go shopping; it's about once a month.'

× Ah yes, when I buy something I usually compare prices. That is because I always want to buy more inexpensive ones if the quality is the same.

✓ Ah yes, when I buy something I usually compare prices. That is because I always want to buy cheaper items if the quality is the same.

'More inexpensive' is awkward and nonstandard; 'cheaper' or 'less expensive' are the correct comparative forms. Also 'ones' is vague; 'items' or 'products' is clearer. Suggest using 'cheaper items' or 'less expensive products.'

× Hmm, I don't think so. As I said, umm, if the quality is equal, I would probably choose more inexpensive 1 so I don't find it difficult to make choice.

✓ Hmm, I don't think so. As I said, umm, if the quality is equal, I would probably choose the less expensive one, so I don't find it difficult to make a choice.

Errors: 'more inexpensive 1' seems to be a typo; use 'less expensive' or 'cheaper' for comparison. Need definite article 'the' before 'less expensive one' and indefinite article 'a' before 'choice.' Also add a comma before 'so' to join clauses. Suggest: 'choose the less expensive one' and 'make a choice.'

× Umm, yeah. Uh, there is a tendency that, uh, more expensive ones are better, but it's not always for example, the price increase, the cost of advertisement. So sometimes it.

✓ Umm, yeah. Uh, there is a tendency for more expensive products to be better, but that's not always the case; for example, price increases or advertising costs can raise the price without improving quality. So sometimes they are not better.

Multiple issues: 'tendency that' should be 'tendency for' or 'it tends to be that.' Use 'products' instead of 'ones' for clarity. 'It's not always' needs an object like 'the case.' The fragment 'So sometimes it.' is incomplete; finish the idea: 'So sometimes they are not better.' Also clarify 'price increase, the cost of advertisement' to 'price increases or advertising costs.'