Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like shopping?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I like shopping.
Giám khảo
Do you compare prices when you shop? Why?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do, because I need to conduct budgets.
Giám khảo
Is it difficult for you to make choices when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yeah.
Giám khảo
Do you think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones?
Thí sinh
Soundtrack posting work better. Then expensive ones.
Do you like shopping?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答太简短且非正式。应给出主题句并加一到两句具体细节(例如你何时购物、喜欢买什么或为什么喜欢),并使用更正式的表达和连词以显得自然且信息丰富。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy shopping. I usually shop on weekends because it helps me relax, and I particularly like buying clothes and small home accessories. For example, last month I found a great jacket that was both stylish and affordable.
Do you compare prices when you shop? Why?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 句子结构和用词不够自然,“conduct budgets”不地道。应先给出直接答案,然后用连词说明原因,并举具体例子(如用手机应用、比较不同店铺或折扣)。保持最多三到五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often compare prices because I need to stick to a budget. I usually check several online stores and use a price-comparison app to find the best deal. For instance, I compared three shops before buying my laptop to save around $100.
Is it difficult for you to make choices when you shop?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短且没有解释。应先直接回答,然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支持你的观点,使用连接词如“because”或“sometimes”。
Ví dụ: Sometimes it is difficult for me to choose, especially when there are many similar options. For example, I often spend a long time deciding between different brands of shoes because I care about both comfort and style.
Do you think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones?
Điểm: 10.0Gợi ý: 回答不相关且语句不通。需要明确回应问题(yes/no or it depends),然后解释理由并给出具体例子或比较,使用清晰的句子和连接词。避免无关短语。
Ví dụ: I don't think expensive products are always better; it depends on the item. For example, a pricier phone may have better features, but for everyday items like headphones, mid-range options can offer similar sound quality at a lower price.
× Yes, I do, because I need to conduct budgets.
✓ Yes, I do, because I need to plan a budget.
该句中使用了动词短语 "conduct budgets",在英语中不常用且不自然。谈论个人购物时,常用动词是 "plan" 或 "make" 与名词 "a budget" 搭配,或者说 "compare prices to save money"。建议用更自然的表达:"plan a budget"、"make a budget" 或者直接说明目的如 "compare prices to save money"。
× Soundtrack posting work better. Then expensive ones.
✓ More expensive products don't always work better; sometimes cheaper ones are fine.
原句断裂、不连贯,语法与语意都不正确。"Soundtrack posting work better" 不是针对问题(是否昂贵的产品总是更好)的恰当回答,且主谓不一致("work" 与前面名词短语不搭配)。建议用完整句子直接回答问题并解释原因,例如否定句+举例:"More expensive products don't always work better; sometimes cheaper ones are fine."(更贵的产品并不总是更好;有时便宜的也不错)。