Shopping— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two clear reasons with specific detail. Avoid redundant phrases like "buy or pay a lot of things" and correct grammar (e.g., use "spend a lot of money on things I don't need"). Keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I don't really enjoy shopping. I'm a careful shopper because I prefer to research items first and only buy things I truly need, so I avoid impulse purchases.

Gợi ý: Clarify vocabulary and organize the answer: give a clear topic sentence, then one specific reason and an example of how you compare prices. Fix word choice errors ("applies" → "prices"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" but avoid repeating them.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually compare prices because I want to find good value. For example, I check two or three online stores and make a short list before buying to ensure I get the best deal.

Gợi ý: Make the reason clear and correct grammar. Start with a direct answer, then explain one specific factor that makes decisions hard (e.g., many options, similar features, warranties). Use linking words and correct verb forms. Keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often find it hard to decide. Because many products have similar features and warranties, I spend a lot of time comparing specifications and reviews before choosing one.

Gợi ý: Avoid making absolute statements. Provide a balanced opinion and specific reasons or exceptions. Correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., "higher quality materials" and "longer warranties"). Use linking words like "sometimes" or "often" to show nuance.

Ví dụ: Not always. While expensive products often use higher-quality materials and come with longer warranties, cheaper items can sometimes offer similar performance, so I evaluate quality and reviews before deciding.

× I don't want to buy or pay a lot of things and spend a lot of money on something I don't need.

✓ I don't want to buy or pay for a lot of things or spend a lot of money on something I don't need.

Incorrect use of nouns and verbs: 'pay a lot of things' is incorrect because we 'pay for things' or 'pay a lot of money'. Also the coordination was awkward ('buy or pay a lot of things and spend...') causing plural/usage confusion. Suggestion: use 'buy or pay for a lot of things' or restructure to 'buy many things' and keep parallel verbs.

× Yes, I often compare applies before I shop, which is because I would like to buy something valuable and cheaper so that's why I try to compare and make a list before buying something.

✓ Yes, I often compare prices before I shop because I would like to buy something valuable and cheap, so I try to compare and make a list before buying something.

Multiple errors: 'applies' is a wrong word; correct word is 'prices' (singular/plural word choice). 'cheaper' used without comparison target; use 'cheap' or compare explicitly. The phrase 'which is because' is redundant; use 'because'. Suggestion: use 'compare prices' and 'valuable and cheap' or 'valuable but cheaper than alternatives.' This falls under preposition/word choice and adjective use (IDs 11 and 13).

× Yes, I think it's very difficult for me when I shop. This is because I often compare applies where you were able or warranties before buying something. So it's hard and spend a lot of time.

✓ Yes, I think it's very difficult for me when I shop. This is because I often compare prices, available options, and warranties before buying something, so it is hard and I spend a lot of time.

Errors: 'applies' should be 'prices'; 'where you were able' is ungrammatical and likely meant 'available options'; missing subject 'I' in 'spend a lot of time' and poor clause linking. Suggestion: list items clearly ('prices, available options, and warranties') and keep subject-verb agreement ('I spend'). This addresses sentence structure and incorrect word use.

× Yes, I think so. This is because expensive products often provide our luxury materials with goods with and longer guarantee.

✓ Yes, I think so. This is because expensive products often use higher-quality materials and come with longer guarantees.

Several problems: 'provide our luxury materials with goods with' is ungrammatical and confusing; correct idea is 'use higher-quality materials' or 'are made of better materials'. 'Guarantee' as countable should be 'guarantees' or better 'longer warranties'; also word order and adjective use incorrect. Suggestion: use 'higher-quality materials' and 'longer warranties/guarantees' to convey the intended meaning.