Shopping— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Shorten and correct grammar; give a clear topic sentence then one or two specific details. Use linking words and correct verb forms. For example, say you enjoy shopping online for groceries because it’s convenient and fast, and mention a specific item or routine.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy shopping, especially online for groceries. For instance, I often buy vegetables and fruit through an app because it’s fast and saves time, so I can focus on work.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, use past/present consistently, and include a linking word to explain reason. Be specific about how you compare and what matters (price, quality, reviews).

Ví dụ: Yes, I always compare prices before buying. For example, when I bought a smartphone I checked three different apps to find the best discount and also read user reviews to ensure value for money.

Gợi ý: Make the answer clearer and more grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then give contrasting examples using linking words (however, but, if). Specify an example of a routine and a new item you found difficult.

Ví dụ: It depends on the product: for routine items it’s easy, but for new products it can be difficult. For example, I always buy the same brand of milk, but I hesitate when choosing a new type of shampoo because I’m unsure about its quality.

Gợi ý: Avoid absolute statements; qualify your opinion and give a clear, specific example with correct vocabulary. Use linking words to compare and contrast outcomes of expensive vs cheaper items.

Ví dụ: I don’t think expensive products are always better, but often they last longer. For example, I bought a fan for CN¥400 that has worked for over eight years, whereas a cheaper fan I bought earlier broke after one year.

× Yes, I really like shopping especially shopping online and I always shopping online to buy daily food For example I always buy a daily food vegetable, fruit or nutters online that is very fast and.

✓ Yes, I really like shopping, especially shopping online, and I always shop online to buy daily food. For example, I always buy daily food items such as vegetables, fruit or nuts online because it is very fast.

The verb 'shopping' after 'always' is incorrect; modal/auxiliary structure needs base verb 'shop' (Grammar Problem Type 8 and 6: present tense). 'I always shopping' should be 'I always shop'. Also sentence fragments and word choice: 'a daily food' is ungrammatical — use 'daily food' or 'daily food items'. 'nutters' is a misspelling of 'nuts'. Use commas to separate clauses. Suggestion: use subject + present simple verb for habitual actions and correct noun forms.

× Absolutely, I must be compare price when I need to buy something, for example my smartphone I was compared with three online apps, then I find the largest discount and buy it.

✓ Absolutely, I must compare prices when I need to buy something. For example, for my smartphone I compared prices on three online apps, then I found the largest discount and bought it.

'must be compare' is incorrect: modal 'must' should be followed by base verb 'compare' (Grammar Problem Type 4). Also 'price' should be plural 'prices' for comparing multiple offers (Grammar Problem Type 1). Tense consistency: use past tense 'compared', 'found', 'bought' for a past example (Grammar Problem Type 5). Suggestion: use 'must compare prices' for general obligation and proper past simple for completed actions.

× It depends what the things I want to buy. For example, if the routines I will buy the same things every time, if I want to try new things and I will more try to.

✓ It depends on what things I want to buy. For example, for routine purchases I buy the same things every time. If I want to try new things, I will try more new items.

Missing preposition 'on' after 'depends' (Grammar Problem Type 11) and awkward phrase 'what the things I want to buy' (Grammar Problem Type 26). 'if the routines I will buy' is ungrammatical; use 'for routine purchases'. 'I will more try to' has incorrect word order and unnecessary 'to' — use 'I will try more' (Grammar Problem Type 20 and 26). Suggestion: use 'depends on', noun phrases like 'routine purchases', and place adverbs correctly after the auxiliary or before the main verb.

× From my experience I would say yes. For example, I have a fence. It was it's been my experience CN¥400 and I have been use it over 8 years but another cheaper fan.

✓ From my experience, I would say yes. For example, I have a fan that cost about CN¥400 and I have used it for over 8 years, but another cheaper fan did not last as long.

Numerous problems: 'I have a fence' is likely 'fan' (word choice). 'It was it's been my experience CN¥400' is ungrammatical — need clear clause: 'I have a fan that cost about CN¥400' (Grammar Problem Type 26 and 13). 'I have been use it' is incorrect; use present perfect 'I have used it' for past action with present relevance (Grammar Problem Type 9). 'over 8 years' requires 'for over 8 years'. Also incomplete comparison 'but another cheaper fan' needs completion ('did not last as long'). Suggestion: correct vocabulary, use present perfect for duration, and complete comparative clause.