Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like shopping?
Thí sinh
Not really to be honest I like having a new things but I don't really enjoy the process of shopping. Go to physical shops means umm driving clothes umm facing produce and waiting a Queens.
Giám khảo
Do you compare prices when you shop? Why?
Thí sinh
Well it depends. When line online shopping I usually compare the price because it's just a few clicks. But if I go to a physical shops I don't compare prices because they are too many because they are spend too many times.
Giám khảo
Is it difficult for you to make choices when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I think it is difficult to make choice when I shop because I usually consider the goose colors and the goose prices.
Giám khảo
Do you think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones?
Thí sinh
I don't think so because I found the expensive product just about brand name.
Do you like shopping?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更清晰且語法正確。注意句子結構(主語+動詞+賓語)、時態和單複數,避免不必要的填充詞(如 "umm")並用一到兩句具體原因支持觀點。此外最多保持在5句內並使用連接詞使語意連貫。
Ví dụ: I don't really enjoy shopping. Although I like buying new things, I find visiting physical shops tiring because I have to drive there, try on clothes and wait in queues. Therefore I prefer shopping online when possible.
Do you compare prices when you shop? Why?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 句子需更流暢並修正語法錯誤(例如冠詞、時態、單複數)。用連接詞連接對比句(e.g., "however", "but"),並給出具體例子說明原因。避免重複表達同一觀點。
Ví dụ: It depends. When I shop online I usually compare prices because it only takes a few clicks to check different websites. However, in physical stores I rarely compare prices because it would take too much time to visit several shops.
Is it difficult for you to make choices when you shop?
Điểm: 44.0Gợi ý: 修正單詞錯誤(如 "goose" 應為 "goods" 或 "clothes")並使回答更具體。先簡短回答(Yes/No),然後用一到兩個細節說明為何難以抉擇,並使用連接詞如 "because" 或 "so"。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often find it hard to choose when shopping because I consider both the colours and the prices of the items. For instance, I may like two shirts but hesitate because one is cheaper while the other has a better colour.
Do you think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones?
Điểm: 56.0Gợi ý: 回答要更完整並給出具體理由或例子來支持觀點。使用更自然的表達(例如 "In my experience"、"often"),並說明何種情況下昂貴商品可能更好或不一定更好。
Ví dụ: I don't think expensive products are always better. In my experience, some pricey items are mainly expensive because of the brand, while cheaper alternatives can offer similar quality. For example, I once bought a non-branded speaker that sounded as good as an expensive one.
× Not really to be honest I like having a new things but I don't really enjoy the process of shopping.
✓ Not really. To be honest, I like having new things, but I don't really enjoy the process of shopping.
问题类型:26 句子结构错误。原句缺少标点导致并列句连接不清,并且存在冠词与名词数不一致(new things 不需要 a)。建议:把句子分成两句或用合适标点分隔;去掉“不定冠词 a”并保持名词复数。
× Go to physical shops means umm driving clothes umm facing produce and waiting a Queens.
✓ Going to physical shops means driving there, trying on clothes, looking at products and waiting in queues.
问题类型混合:8 动名词用法和27 主谓一致/动词形式。原句动词不定式“Go”应用动名词“Going”作主语,且动词短语需要并列正确形式(trying on, looking at),'produce' 用词错误,应为'products','waiting a Queens' 用法及拼写错误,应为 'waiting in queues'。建议:用动名词作主语,列举动作时使用并列的-ing 形式,并使用正确名词与短语。
× When line online shopping I usually compare the price because it's just a few clicks.
✓ When I shop online, I usually compare prices because it's just a few clicks.
问题类型:3(There be)未直接适用,但更主要是26 句子结构错误和11 介词/短语使用。原句缺少主语“I”和介词位置错误('line online' 应为 'shop online'),'the price' 更常用复数 'prices'。建议:加上主语并调整词序,使用复数形式表达比较多项商品价格。
× But if I go to a physical shops I don't compare prices because they are too many because they are spend too many times.
✓ But if I go to physical shops, I don't compare prices because there are too many, and it would take too much time.
问题类型:26 句子结构错误和14 量词用法错误。原句 'a physical shops' 冠词与名词数不一致,应为 'physical shops';'they are too many' 指代不清且重复;'they are spend too many times' 语法混乱,正确表达为 'it would take too much time'。建议:去掉错误冠词,使用清晰的代词和正确的时间短语。
× Well it depends.
✓ Well, it depends.
问题类型:26 句子结构错误(标点)。句子应在 Well 后加逗号以符合口语书写习惯。建议:在口语过渡词后使用逗号。
× Is it difficult for you to make choices when you shop? Student: Yeah, I think it is difficult to make choice when I shop because I usually consider the goose colors and the goose prices.
✓ Yeah, I think it is difficult to make choices when I shop because I usually consider the clothes' colors and the clothes' prices. (或: ...because I usually consider the color and price of the clothes.)
问题类型:1 单复数问题。原句 'make choice' 应为复数 'make choices';'goose colors' 和 'goose prices' 显然是词汇错误,应为 'clothes' 或 'goods'。建议:使用复数形式 'choices';将错误单词替换为正确词 'clothes' 或 'goods',并可用所有格简化表达。
× I don't think so because I found the expensive product just about brand name.
✓ I don't think so because I find expensive products are often just about the brand name.
问题类型:6 现在时问题和26 句子结构错误。原句时态混用 'don't think' (现在) 与 'found' (过去),应统一时态为现在 'find';'the expensive product' 应为复数 'expensive products' 或表泛指;短语 'just about brand name' 不自然,改为 'often just about the brand name' 更清晰。建议:在句子中保持时态一致,使用复数或泛指结构,并调整短语使语义通顺。