Shopping— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答直接且相关，但语言有时不够自然，句子间衔接可以更流畅。注意简洁性，避免重复类似意思（cheers me up / refreshed / more confident）。可用一到两句支持细节并用连接词增强连贯性，控制在最多五句内。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it boosts my mood and confidence. For example, when I find a dress or shoes that fit well, I feel more polished. Also, shopping is a way for me to relax after a busy week.

Gợi ý: 回答内容清楚但有语法和词汇使用不当（如“can compare”不必要，"deeper option"不合适）。提高自然度可使用更合适的动词和短语，并加一两个连接词使逻辑更顺畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually compare prices because I want to save money. I check several stores and online shops to find the best deal, and if the quality and quantity are similar I always pick the cheaper option.

Gợi ý: 回答存在语法错误、表达不清和逻辑混乱（例如“clear my need”、“it expensive”、“I tired”）。需要用完整句子说明决策流程，并用连接词解释条件和结果。保持句子简短且明确。

Ví dụ: No, I usually know what I need, so deciding is easy. If an item is too expensive in a store, I look for it online; if I can't find it there, I either buy it in the store or choose a similar, more affordable option.

Gợi ý: 回答观点明确但论证混乱且有拼写或用词错误（如"campuses"、"via"用法不当）。应给出更具体的理由或例子说明何时价格与质量相关，使用连接词组织观点并注意用词准确。

Ví dụ: No, I don't think expensive products are always better. Sometimes cheaper items sold online have the same quality as those in physical stores because many retailers sell through both channels. However, for specialised or luxury goods, higher prices can reflect better materials or craftsmanship.

× If something suits me I will feel refreshed and more confident.

✓ If something suits me, I feel refreshed and more confident.

句子使用一般现在时更自然，因为陈述的是一种习惯性或经常发生的结果；原句使用“will”表将来，和条件句的时间不匹配。建议在条件句（If…）表示一般事实或习惯时主句用一般现在时。

× For example, a new dress or a pair of shoes that fit well.

✓ For example, a new dress or a pair of shoes that fits well.

这里主语是“a new dress or a pair of shoes”表示“或”连接的单数概念时动词应与最近的单数主语一致，使用第三人称单数“fits”。建议注意主谓一致，或重写为复数主语：“...shoes that fit well.”。

× Yes, I can compare the prices when I shop because I want to save money.

✓ Yes, I compare prices when I shop because I want to save money.

使用情态动词“can”并非必要，且与陈述习惯性行为更常用一般现在时。建议在描述习惯性行为时用一般现在时。

× I will check a few stores or look online to find the best deal.

✓ I check a few stores or look online to find the best deal.

句子意在表达经常性行为，应使用一般现在时；此外“a few stores”用法正确，无需“the”。建议保持时态一致以表达习惯。

× I choose the deeper option if the quantity is similar.

✓ I choose the cheaper option if the quality is similar.

原句中“deeper”拼写或用词错误，应为“cheaper”（更便宜）且“quantity”（数量）应为“quality”（质量）。建议检查近义词与拼写，确保意思准确。

× No because I clear my need.

✓ No, because I know my needs.

原句结构不自然且词语选择错误，“clear my need”不是地道表达，应改为“know my needs”（知道自己的需求）。建议使用常见固定搭配表达意图，并加逗号分隔。

× If I like something but it expensive I will find it online.

✓ If I like something but it's expensive, I will find it online.

原句缺少系动词“is”的缩写“it's”。此外需要逗号分隔条件从句和主句。建议在口语或书面中补全系动词并注意标点。

× If online don't have I will buy it or choose similar one for example I tired.

✓ If it's not available online, I will buy it in a store or choose a similar one; for example, if I'm tired.

原句缺主语和助动词（should/doesn't），代词和时态混乱。“online don't have”应为“it's not available online”或“online stores don't have it”。“choose similar one”缺不定冠词“a similar one”。最后“for example I tired”语法错误，应为“for example, if I'm tired”。建议重组句子，补完整主语和助动词，并使用正确冠词和时态。

× Nowadays, online platforms offer campuses via physical stores do not.

✓ Nowadays, online platforms offer deals that physical stores do not.

原句“offer campuses via physical stores do not”结构混乱且用词错误。“campuses”显然不合适，应为“deals”或“prices”，并用关系从句“that physical stores do not”来比较。建议使用正确词汇并将比较结构改为关系从句。

× Therefore, items online cost less but have identical quality.

✓ Therefore, items online cost less but have identical quality to those in physical stores.

原句缺少比较对象，导致不完整。应补充“to those in physical stores”或改为“but are of identical quality”。建议在比较句中明确比较对象或用被动/形容词短语补全。