Shopping— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise and more natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh) and repetition, and add one specific supporting detail about what you enjoy buying or where you shop. Aim for 2–3 sentences total.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy shopping, especially on weekends. I usually shop for clothes and accessories at the local mall because I like trying items on and finding seasonal sales.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence explaining you compare prices, then give a specific reason and a concise example. Remove repetitions and correct grammar (e.g., "compare prices," "save money"). Use one linking phrase (for example/for instance) before the example.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often compare prices because it helps me get better value and save money. For instance, when I wanted to buy a second-hand phone, I checked several websites to compare features and prices before choosing one.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and add one specific supporting detail. Remove filler words and correct grammar (e.g., "help others choose their products"). Optionally mention a reason why you find it easy, such as knowing your preferences or a decision method you use.

Ví dụ: No, I don't find it difficult to make choices because I know my style and budget. Also, I often help friends choose products by comparing features and reading reviews with them.

Gợi ý: Give a balanced, concise opinion with a clear topic sentence, then support it with a specific reason and a short example. Avoid fillers and clarify statements (e.g., "cheaper items can sometimes be more durable or have better warranties").

Ví dụ: I don't think expensive products are always better; it depends on the brand and quality. For example, I once bought an inexpensive kitchen appliance that lasted longer and had a longer warranty than a pricier brand.

× Yes, I like to shopping uh most of the time I love to shop uh when the weekend is come and uh when my wallet is full of cash that time I would like to shopping.

✓ Yes, I like shopping. Most of the time I love to shop on weekends, and when my wallet is full of cash I like to go shopping.

The phrase 'like to shopping' incorrectly mixes the infinitive structure 'like to' with the gerund 'shopping'. Use either 'like to shop' or 'like shopping'. 'When the weekend is come' is ungrammatical; use 'on weekends' or 'when the weekend comes'. Also 'that time I would like to shopping' should be 'I like to go shopping' or 'I like shopping then'. These corrections fix verb form and time expression usage.

× Yes, I compare prices when I shop shop some shop something because it helps me to get proper value and it helps me to get save money.

✓ Yes, I compare prices when I shop because it helps me get proper value and save money.

The sentence contains repetition and unnecessary words. 'Helps me to get save money' mixes infinitive with incorrect verb form; use 'helps me save money' (base verb after 'help'). Remove duplicate words 'shop shop some shop something'. Also 'to get proper value' is better as 'get proper value' — no need for 'to' after 'helps'.

× For example when I would like to buy a leftover phone I I search it in different website so.

✓ For example, when I want to buy a second-hand phone, I search for it on different websites.

'Would like to' is acceptable but 'when I would like to buy' is awkward in this context; 'when I want to buy' is more natural. 'Leftover phone' is incorrect; use 'second-hand phone' or 'used phone'. 'Search it in different website' misuses prepositions and number agreement: use 'search for it on different websites'. Also fix duplicate 'I I' and add commas for clarity.

× I don't really think so because I can choose my things for myself.

✓ I don't really think so because I can choose my things for myself.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable in present tense and fits the question context. No correction needed; keep as is.

× Moreover, uh I also help to other to choose their uh product when they shop.

✓ Moreover, I also help others choose their products when they shop.

'Help to other to choose' is incorrect. Use 'help others choose' (no 'to' after 'help' when followed by another verb). 'Their product' should be plural 'their products' to agree with plural 'others' and indefinite number of items. This fixes pronoun and verb usage.

× Sometimes expensive products are good, but not always, uh, it is good.

✓ Sometimes expensive products are good, but not always.

The phrase 'it is good' is vague and unnecessary; remove it. The original sentence is repetitive. Keeping the concise contrast 'Sometimes expensive products are good, but not always' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Uh, sometimes, uh, cheaper 1 is better than the expensive one.

✓ Sometimes a cheaper product is better than an expensive one.

'Cheaper 1' is incorrect and likely a transcription error. Use 'a cheaper product' and parallel structure 'an expensive one' for comparison. This corrects quantifier/article usage and comparison structure.

× Likewise, uh, I already experienced that some cheaper product is more warranty than the, uh, expensive products.

✓ Similarly, I have experienced that some cheaper products have more warranty than expensive ones.

'I already experienced that' is awkward; use present perfect 'I have experienced that'. 'Some cheaper product is more warranty' is ungrammatical: 'warranty' is a noun and cannot be modified by 'more' this way; say 'have more warranty' or better 'come with longer warranties'. Also ensure plural agreement: 'some cheaper products' and 'expensive ones'. Revised: 'I have experienced that some cheaper products come with longer warranties than expensive ones.'