Shopping— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は要点を伝えていますが、文法ミスや不自然な表現があり、冗長さも見られます。具体的には冠詞・時制・主語一致の誤り（"I'm tend"→"I tend"）、不要な短縮（"'cause"）や不自然なフレーズ（"go to shopping as I can"）を直してください。また、トピック文の後に1〜2文の具体例や理由をリンク語（because / so / therefore）でつなげると自然で効果的です。

Ví dụ: No, I don't enjoy shopping. I tend to spend too much money when I go shopping, so I avoid it whenever possible. For example, last month I bought three items I didn't need because they were on sale.

Gợi ý: 回答は明確で理由も述べられていますが、口語表現（"'cause", "wanna"）が多く、文が断片的です（"but." の後が未完）。よりフォーマルな語彙に変え、接続詞を使って理由と対比を自然につなげてください。具体例を一つ加えると説得力が増します。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always compare prices because I want to buy items at the best value. However, quality is my priority, so I sometimes pay more for a trusted brand. For example, I compare online reviews and prices before buying electronic gadgets.

Gợi ý: 意図は伝わりますが、文法（"really cares"→"really care", "compares"→"compare", "took"→"take"）と表現の明確さが問題です。最初の文（"It is different too"）は意味が不明瞭なので削除するか置き換えてください。理由を述べる際は論理的な流れを示す接続語（"because", "so"）を使い、過去・現在の時制に注意して述べましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I find it difficult to decide because I always consider both price and quality. As a result, I often spend a long time comparing options before buying anything.

Gợi ý: 考えは明確ですが、不自然な語彙（"different sounds"）や文法（"each of us have"→"each of us has", 冠詞の欠如）があります。より自然な表現で理由を示し、具体例を加えてください。また口語縮約は避けるとよいです。

Ví dụ: No, I don't think expensive products are always better. It depends on individual needs and preferences; for example, a cheaper phone might be sufficient for someone who only needs basic functions, while a professional photographer may need an expensive camera for better performance.

× No, I don't 'cause when I go shopping I usually spend too much on it.

✓ No, I don't, because when I go shopping I usually spend too much.

The contraction 'cause is informal and clumsy in this context; use 'because'. The phrase 'spend too much on it' is redundant—omit 'on it'. Also maintain punctuation to separate clauses. Suggestion: use 'because' in formal speech and remove unnecessary pronouns or objects.

× I'm tend to purchase something accidentally, so I don't want to go to shopping as I can.

✓ I tend to purchase things accidentally, so I avoid going shopping when I can.

'I'm tend' is incorrect: use 'I tend' (simple present) for habits. 'Something' is better plural 'things' for general statements. 'Go to shopping' is ungrammatical—use 'go shopping'. 'I don't want to go to shopping as I can' is awkward; replace with 'I avoid going shopping when I can.' Suggestion: use simple present for habits and correct verb patterns: 'tend to' + base verb, and 'go shopping' without 'to'.

× Yes, I do compare prices when I shop 'cause I wanna get something as cheaply as I can.

✓ Yes, I do compare prices when I shop because I want to get things as cheaply as I can.

'Cause' and 'wanna' are informal; use 'because' and 'want to' in correct English. 'Something' should be plural 'things' for general habits. 'As cheaply as I can' is acceptable but 'as cheaply as possible' is more natural. Suggestion: avoid colloquial contractions in formal responses and match number (things) for generalizations.

× Of course quality is my priority, but. I don't wanna waste my money.

✓ Of course quality is my priority, but I don't want to waste my money.

The sentence was split incorrectly with 'but.' at the end of the first clause; combine clauses into one sentence. 'Wanna' is informal—use 'want to.' Suggestion: ensure conjunctions connect clauses and avoid sentence fragments.

× Yes, it is different too.

✓ Yes, it is different too.

This short reply is acceptable but vague. No grammatical change necessary; consider clarifying meaning (e.g. 'Yes, it's different for me, too'). Suggestion: expand to clarify what 'different' refers to.

× As I said, when I go shopping I really cares about the price and quality and compares both of them, so I usually took much time to choose something to buy.

✓ As I said, when I go shopping I really care about the price and quality and compare both of them, so I usually take a long time to choose something to buy.

Use base verb forms after 'I': 'care' and 'compare' (not 'cares'/'compares'). 'I usually took much time' mixes past with present; use 'I usually take a long time' for habitual action. 'Much time' is awkward; use 'a long time.' Suggestion: keep present tense for habitual actions and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× No, I don't. In my opinion what is best depends on the person 'cause each of us have different sounds, so sometimes it might be better to choose cheaper one than expensive thing.

✓ No, I don't. In my opinion what is best depends on the person because each of us has different tastes, so sometimes it might be better to choose a cheaper item than an expensive one.

Replace 'cause' with 'because'. 'Each of us have' is subject-verb disagreement; use 'has'. 'Different sounds' is incorrect word choice—use 'different tastes' or 'preferences'. 'Cheaper one' and 'expensive thing' need articles and clearer nouns: 'a cheaper item' and 'an expensive one.' Suggestion: watch subject-verb agreement with 'each' and choose appropriate nouns (tastes/preferences, item/one), and include articles.