Shopping— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid redundancy (e.g., “I do love” → “Yes, I enjoy shopping”), correct minor grammar (use ‘groceries’ not ‘grocery stuffs’), and limit to 3–4 sentences. Add a linking word when giving an example.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy shopping. I usually go to an outdoor mall with my brother on weekends, where I buy clothes and groceries. For example, I often shop for a new shirt and weekly food items in one trip.

Gợi ý: Make the answer clearer and grammatically correct. Begin with a direct statement, then give a concise reason using linking words (e.g., ‘because’ → follow with a smooth clause). Avoid awkward phrasing like ‘comparisons are prices’. Limit to 2–3 sentences and give a specific example of what you save for.

Ví dụ: Yes, I compare prices because it helps me buy items at lower cost. For example, by comparing supermarkets I saved enough money to go to a concert with friends.

Gợi ý: Use correct plural and smoother phrasing. Start with a direct topic sentence, then briefly explain your clear criteria using linking words like ‘because’ or ‘as’. Replace ‘criterias’ with ‘criteria’ and avoid repeating ‘criteria’. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and give a specific example of a criterion in action.

Ví dụ: No, I don’t find it difficult to choose because I have clear criteria. For instance, I usually buy a shirt only if it’s within my budget and made from durable fabric.

Gợi ý: Make the comparison clearer and fix small errors. Begin with a direct opinion, then give a specific reason and a short example. Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., ‘brand bag’ not ‘brand back’) and avoid unnecessary words like ‘the one that we can get’. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I don’t think expensive products are always better because price doesn’t always indicate quality. For example, a branded bag may cost much more simply because of the logo, while a non-branded bag can be equally well made.

× Yes, I do love shopping.

✓ Yes, I love shopping.

The auxiliary 'do' is unnecessary with 'love' in a positive statement; use the simple present 'I love' to express regular preference. Remove 'do' to avoid incorrect emphasis.

× There I purchase clothing and some grocery stuffs for example.

✓ There I purchase clothing and some groceries, for example.

'Grocery' is a noun that in plural form takes 'groceries' instead of 'grocery stuffs'. 'Stuffs' is uncountable and informal; use 'groceries' to refer to items. Also add a comma before 'for example' for clarity.

× Yes, I do, because the comparisons are prices enable me to get the goods at lower prices.

✓ Yes, I do, because comparing prices enables me to get goods at lower prices.

The original mixes noun phrases incorrectly. Use the gerund 'comparing prices' as the subject, and 'enables' (third person singular) to agree with that singular subject. Also remove the redundant article before 'prices' and 'the' before 'goods' to sound natural.

× It saves me some money that can be used in other purposes.

✓ It saves me some money that can be used for other purposes.

Use the preposition 'for' with 'purposes'. Also 'other purposes' is plural; keep it plural. 'In other purposes' is incorrect collocation.

× I don't think it is difficult for me to make choices when I go shopping because the criterias of selecting goods are clear for me as long as the goods meet my criteria as I purchase them, for example prices and qualities.

✓ I don't think it is difficult for me to make choices when I go shopping because the criteria for selecting goods are clear to me, as long as the goods meet my criteria, for example price and quality.

'Criterias' is incorrect plural; the correct plural is 'criteria' (singular 'criterion'). Use 'criteria for selecting' rather than 'of selecting'. 'Clear to me' is the correct collocation. 'Prices and qualities' is awkward; use 'price and quality' as uncountable concepts. Add commas to separate clauses for clarity.

× I don't think expensive products are always better than the cheaper ones because the price does not always reflect the quality of it.

✓ I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones because price does not always reflect quality.

When speaking generally, omit 'the' before 'cheaper ones' and before 'price' and 'quality'. 'The quality of it' is awkward and ungrammatical; use 'quality' without 'of it'.

× A brand back, for example, is much more expensive than the one that we can get at the franchise shop because brand value is added to the price.

✓ A brand-name bag, for example, is much more expensive than one we can get at a franchise shop because brand value is added to the price.

'Brand back' seems to be a typo; the correct term is 'brand-name bag'. Use 'one' instead of 'the one' for a general comparison and 'a franchise shop' is more natural than 'the franchise shop'. Also 'brand value' is fine; retain that phrase. Adjust articles for general statements.