Traffic— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, word choice and sentence structure. Begin with a clear topic sentence, correct countable noun use, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words for coherence. Be specific: mention approximate number or locations and a short reason. Keep answer under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are quite a few crosswalks near where I live. For example, there are pedestrian crossings and traffic lights along the main roads and near the local school, which help people cross safely. These crosswalks are especially concentrated at busy intersections and near the bus stops.

Gợi ý: Clarify your ideas and correct grammatical errors. Start with a direct opinion sentence, then give two clear, specific measures using linking words (e.g., for example, also) and explain expected effects. Avoid filler sounds like 'UMM'. Keep it concise and coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes. I would like the authorities to improve public transportation and introduce congestion charges. For example, better bus routes and more frequent services would reduce private car use, and a congestion charge in the city centre would discourage unnecessary driving, which should ease traffic and pollution.

× Yes, store many crosswalks on where I live, especially the numerous pedestrian crossings and traffic lights to ensure people cross safely and there are many of them around the main roads and school.

✓ Yes, there are many crosswalks where I live, especially numerous pedestrian crossings and traffic lights to ensure people cross safely; there are many of them around the main roads and the school.

The original sentence has pluralization and noun phrase structure problems. 'store many crosswalks on where I live' is ungrammatical: 'store' is incorrect and likely a mistaken word; 'crosswalks' requires the existential construction 'there are' to indicate existence. Use 'the school' for a specific school previously referenced or implied. Suggestions: use 'there are' + plural noun to state existence, remove incorrect word 'store', and include 'the' before 'school' when referring to a specific local school.

× I would like to change several things about traffic in my area.

✓ I would like to change several things about the traffic in my area.

The sentence is mostly correct but omits the definite article 'the' before 'traffic' when referring to a specific local traffic situation. Use 'the traffic' to indicate the particular traffic conditions in your area.

× I think that governments have to intervene by introducing new regulation about UMM improving public transportation or traffic charge or access vehicles UMM so it can reduce traffic.

✓ I think that the government has to intervene by introducing new regulations, such as improving public transportation, implementing congestion charges, or restricting vehicle access, so it can reduce traffic.

Multiple errors: count and article errors ('governments' should be singular 'the government' when referring to the local authority), 'regulation' should be plural 'regulations', and the list of measures was ungrammatical and unclear. 'Improving public transportation' is a correct -ing clause after 'introducing', but the original had extraneous 'UMM' fillers and awkward phrases like 'traffic charge' and 'access vehicles'. Use 'implementing congestion charges' and 'restricting vehicle access' for clarity. Also ensure subject-verb agreement ('the government has') and maintain parallel structure in lists (gerund phrases or noun phrases consistently).