Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at giving gifts?
Thí sinh
Yes I'm in. I usually take a good vision to see my people what did they like in daily life So when they get when they in birthday I will pick.
Giám khảo
When do you usually give gifts to others?
Thí sinh
Usually I will give them gift in their birthday, but sometimes my friends give my give me some advice or give some gifts I will give it back.
Giám khảo
What do you consider when choosing a gift?
Thí sinh
The 4th standing important is to choose what they like. Second is your heart thinking how to say gift is important in your heart and not price.
Giám khảo
Have you ever given others a handmade gift?
Thí sinh
Yes, I made a homemade gift to my best friend. She really helped me to across the difficult things and she will give me a gift, give me a hand in.
Giám khảo
Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?
Thí sinh
No, usually I I think price not prove your friend how care you. Maybe sometimes handmade give more than expensive gift so.
Are you good at giving gifts?
Điểm: 46.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、简洁并直接回应问题。开头可用一句主题句肯定或否定,然后用1–2句具体说明你如何挑选礼物(例如观察日常喜好),并使用连词使句子更连贯。注意语法(时态和冠词)和词序,使表达清晰。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think I'm good at giving gifts. I pay attention to what my friends like in daily life, so I usually choose something related to their hobbies or needs for their birthdays.
When do you usually give gifts to others?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答应直接说明常见时间(如生日)并解释偶发情况,避免重复和语法错误。用连接词(for example, sometimes)来衔接补充说明,控制在最多五句内。
Ví dụ: I usually give gifts on people's birthdays. Sometimes, if a friend helps me or gives me something, I return a gift to show my appreciation.
What do you consider when choosing a gift?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答要有逻辑顺序并使用清晰的连词(first, second)。给出具体考虑的事项,比如喜好、实用性、心意,并说明原因,避免模糊表达。注意语法和词汇搭配(e.g., ‘price doesn’t matter’)。
Ví dụ: First, I consider what the person likes. Second, I think about whether the gift is useful to them. Most importantly, I focus on the thought behind the gift rather than its price.
Have you ever given others a handmade gift?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 回答应直接说明是否做过手工礼物,并简要描述礼物和原因(例如感谢对方的帮助)。用一两句具体说明礼物是什么及场合,避免不连贯和语法错误。
Ví dụ: Yes, I once made a handmade scrapbook for my best friend to thank her for helping me through a difficult time. It included photos and notes about our memories together.
Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答要更流畅并给出理由和例子。先给出明确立场(Yes/No),然后用1–2句解释原因并举例说明,例如手工礼物或有意义的小礼物更能表达心意。注意避免重复词和语法错误。
Ví dụ: No, I don't think expensive gifts necessarily show more feeling. A handmade gift or something thoughtful that matches the person's interests often means more than an expensive but impersonal item.
× Yes I'm in.
✓ Yes, I am.
原句“There are multiple issues: contraction usage and wrong preposition-like word 'in'” 属于句子结构错误。学生想表达“是的,我愿意/我可以”,应使用“Yes, I am”或“Yes, I do”。建议在肯定短答中使用完整形式或正确助动词,如回答能做某事用“Yes, I can”或表示同意用“Yes, I am”。(句子结构要完整,避免多余词)
× I usually take a good vision to see my people what did they like in daily life So when they get when they in birthday I will pick.
✓ I usually pay attention to what people I know like in their daily life, so when it's their birthday I will pick a gift for them.
原句语序混乱、时态和词汇搭配不当,属于句子结构错误。应使用固定表达“pay attention to”而不是“take a good vision”,把宾语和从句放在正确位置,使用“what people I know like”表示“他们喜欢什么”,并用“when it's their birthday”表示时间,最后完整表达“pick a gift for them”。建议练习常见动词短语和从句结构,注意连接词和代词的指代。
× Usually I will give them gift in their birthday, but sometimes my friends give my give me some advice or give some gifts I will give it back.
✓ Usually I give them gifts on their birthdays, but sometimes if my friends give me advice or give me gifts, I will give them something back.
原句存在冠词、复数和介词使用错误(比如“give them gift”应为“give them gifts”;“in their birthday”应为“on their birthdays”),以及句子连接混乱。按语法应使用复数表示一般习惯(gifts, birthdays)、正确介词“on”用于具体节日/生日,并且保持代词一致性(give me gifts, give them something back)。建议复习可数名词单复数、介词习惯搭配和句子连接方式。
× The 4th standing important is to choose what they like. Second is your heart thinking how to say gift is important in your heart and not price.
✓ The most important thing is to choose what they like. Second, it's the thought behind the gift that matters, not the price.
原句“4th standing important”结构错误且不合逻辑,属于句子结构错误;第二句语序和表达不清。正确表达应使用“the most important thing”或“first”来强调首要因素,第二点用“It’s the thought behind the gift that matters”是固定表达。建议学习常用表达顺序(first/second/most important)和固定搭配以提高表达清晰度。
× Yes, I made a homemade gift to my best friend. She really helped me to across the difficult things and she will give me a gift, give me a hand in.
✓ Yes, I made a handmade gift for my best friend. She really helped me through difficult times, and she has helped me many times.
原句有词汇搭配和结构问题(“homemade gift”可以,但“handmade gift”更常用;介词“to my best friend”应为“for my best friend”表示赠与;“helped me to across”错误,应为“helped me across”或更自然的“helped me through”;“she will give me a gift, give me a hand in”时态和表达混乱)。建议学习常见动词搭配(help someone through something, give something to/for someone)并注意时态一致和句子连贯。
× Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?
✓ Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?
本句为考官提问,无需改动。句型正确,使用了比较结构“better express”,符合语法。
× No, usually I I think price not prove your friend how care you. Maybe sometimes handmade give more than expensive gift so.
✓ No. Usually I think price doesn't prove how much a friend cares about you. Sometimes a handmade gift can mean more than an expensive one.
原句存在重复词、否定结构和词序错误,属于句子结构错误。“price not prove”应使用助动词do的否定形式“doesn't prove”,并保持宾语和从句顺序正确(how much a friend cares about you)。第二句应使用情态动词“can”表示可能性,并用比较结构“mean more than”。建议复习否定句的助动词用法、固定比较表达以及避免词语重复。