Gifts— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and sentence structure: start with a clear topic sentence, use correct verb forms and articles, and add one specific detail. Keep it concise (no more than 3–4 sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, I am good at giving gifts. For example, for my best friend’s birthday last year I prepared a personalized photo album, and she was very happy when she received it.

Gợi ý: Fix word choice and add a linking phrase to connect ideas. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., "meaningful" or "thoughtful" instead of "truthful") and keep sentences natural and varied.

Ví dụ: I usually give gifts on special occasions like Christmas and birthdays. Also, I enjoy choosing thoughtful presents for my friends because seeing their reactions makes me happy.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar (possessives, plural forms) and add linking words to make the logic clearer. Be more specific about how you assess interests and balance occasion and budget.

Ví dụ: I consider the person’s interests first, because a gift should be something they will like and use. In addition, I think about the occasion and my budget, so for casual events I usually choose small, practical presents.

Gợi ý: Correct verb forms and vocabulary (e.g., "made" instead of "caned"), improve coherence with linking words, and be specific about the handmade item and why it suited the recipient.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often give handmade gifts. For example, for my mother’s birthday I made a scented body scrub and wrapped it in warm-colored paper because she likes warm tones, and she loved the personal touch.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, word choice and clarity. Use linking words to contrast ideas (e.g., "although", "however") and provide a clear opinion with a concise reason and example.

Ví dụ: I think expensive gifts can show someone cares; however, they don’t always express true feelings. For example, a handmade present or spending quality time together is often more meaningful than an expensive item.

× Yes I good at giving gifts in best friend birthday I prepare a gift to send her and she is very happy.

✓ Yes, I am good at giving gifts. On my best friend's birthday I prepare a gift to give her and she is very happy.

The original sentence omits the verb 'am' for the present tense 'to be' (present tense issue). It also needs proper sentence boundaries and possessive form 'best friend's'. Use 'give' rather than 'send' for giving a gift in person. Add commas and split into two sentences for clarity.

× I usually give gifts on special days such as Christmas and birthdays. I really enjoy choosing truthful present for my friends because seeing their reaction makes me happy.

✓ I usually give gifts on special days such as Christmas and birthdays. I really enjoy choosing thoughtful presents for my friends because seeing their reactions makes me happy.

'Truthful' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'thoughtful' (incorrect use of adjectives). 'Present' should be plural 'presents' to agree with 'friends' and general meaning (singular and plural issue). 'Reaction' should be plural 'reactions' to match plural 'friends'.

× Well I think the main thing I consider is the person interest because a gift should be something they like and use. I also think about the occasion and my budget. For example I usually choose a small gifts.

✓ Well, I think the main thing I consider is the person's interests because a gift should be something they like and use. I also think about the occasion and my budget. For example, I usually choose a small gift.

Use possessive form 'person's' (incorrect use of pronouns/possessive). 'Interest' should be plural 'interests' to match general meaning. 'Gifts' should be singular 'gift' after 'a small' (singular and plural issue). Add commas for clarity.

× To be honest, I really like give some handmade gifts to others. For example, I once caned a scrub for my mother because she's like warm colors and it was her birthday and she really like it.

✓ To be honest, I really like giving some handmade gifts to others. For example, I once made a scrub for my mother because she likes warm colors, and it was her birthday and she really liked it.

After 'like' use gerund 'giving' (verb + -ing form). 'Caned' is incorrect; likely intended 'made' (past tense issue). Use 'she likes' for present habitual preference (third person singular issue) and 'she really liked it' for the past reaction (past tense issue). Also add commas and conjunctions for clarity.

× I think expensive gifts can so someone cares but they don't always express true feeling because what matters more is to an effort. For example, a human present or spending time together can be more meaningful.

✓ I think expensive gifts can show someone cares, but they don't always express true feelings because what matters more is the effort. For example, a handmade present or spending time together can be more meaningful.

'Can so someone cares' is ungrammatical; correct verb is 'show' (sentence structure errors). 'True feeling' should be plural 'true feelings'. 'To an effort' is incorrect; use 'the effort'. 'Human present' is likely a misuse; 'handmade present' fits context. Ensure commas separate clauses.