Gifts— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 自然で流暢に聞こえるように、文法と語順を直し、冗長な表現を減らしましょう。具体的には、時制と動詞の正しい形（例："spend"→"during"や"looking"→"look"）を使い、主題文の後に一つか二つの補足文で理由を述べます。また、同じ語(“happy”や“present”)の繰り返しを避け、語彙のバリエーションを増やしてください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy giving gifts. During the Christmas season I usually look for presents for my family and close friends because I like to see their reactions. It makes me feel happy to choose something thoughtful for them.

Gợi ý: 意味は伝わるが、語順と語彙の誤りが多く、明確さに欠けます。まずは直接的なトピック文（"I usually give gifts on..."）で開始し、次に頻度や例を述べる構成にしてください。不要な単語（"keep"など）を避け、"birthday"や"ordinary days"の表現を正しく使いましょう。

Ví dụ: I usually give gifts to my family and friends on their birthdays. Occasionally I also surprise someone with a small present on an ordinary day to show appreciation.

Gợi ý: 理由は明確だが、文法と表現の誤りが多いです。主題文でポイントを示し、その後に理由を論理的に説明してください。代名詞の一致（"she"→"they"など）と正しい動詞形、そして具体例を加えると説得力が増します。接続詞（because, so, therefore）を適切に使って因果関係を示しましょう。

Ví dụ: I usually consider how useful a gift will be. If my friend won’t use it, the present becomes pointless, so I try to choose something practical that fits their daily needs.

Gợi ý: 良い内容ですが、語彙の選択と文法を改善すると自然になります。"lizard craft" や "beef accessory" は不自然に聞こえるので具体的に何を作ったかを正しく表現しましょう（例："lizard-shaped craft"や"beaded bracelet"）。また、理由は現在形と過去形を混同しないように整理してください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have given handmade gifts, such as a lizard-shaped craft and a beaded bracelet. I enjoy making these items, so I practice making them and then give them to friends.

Gợi ý: 意見はあるが語句が断片的で論理が不明確です。まず明確な立場を示し（Yes/No/It depends）、その後に理由を一～二文で述べ、例か比較で補強しましょう。短いセンテンスをつなぐ際は接続詞を使い、"surprise"や"reflect"の使い方に注意してください。

Ví dụ: I don't think expensive gifts necessarily express feelings better. What matters more is the thought behind the gift; a thoughtful, inexpensive present can be more meaningful than an expensive but impersonal one.

× When I spend the Christmas season, I often looking for present for my friends and family.

✓ When I spend the Christmas season, I often look for presents for my friends and family.

'often looking' is incorrect because the auxiliary is missing; use the simple present 'look' for habitual actions. Also 'present' should be plural 'presents' when referring generally. Suggestion: use 'I often look for presents' for habit.

× It makes me happy and all my friends happy too.

✓ It makes me happy and my friends happy too.

Redundant 'all' is unnecessary here; remove 'all' or restructure as 'all my friends are happy too.' Also sentence lacked a verb for second clause; 'makes' applies to both objects.

× So I like to think present.

✓ So I like to think about presents.

Missing preposition 'about' and noun should be plural 'presents' when speaking generally. Use 'think about' to mean 'consider'.

× I usually keep gifts to my family and friends in their birthday and then I sometimes keep them gift normal day.

✓ I usually give gifts to my family and friends on their birthdays, and sometimes I give them gifts on a normal day.

Wrong verb 'keep' should be 'give'. Preposition 'to' correct for recipients, but time phrase should be 'on their birthdays'. 'Gift' needs plural 'gifts' and 'on a normal day' is correct time expression.

× One thing I consider is how useful it is, because if I give it for my friends she didn't use that each problem, so I think that.

✓ One thing I consider is how useful it is, because if I give something to my friend, she might not use it, so I think about that.

Pronouns were mixed and incorrect: use 'something' and 'to my friend' (singular) or 'to my friends' (plural). 'She didn't use that each problem' is ungrammatical; replace with 'she might not use it'. Also use 'think about that' to refer back to the consideration.

× Yes, I have given others a handmade gift such as lizard craft and beef accessory.

✓ Yes, I have given others handmade gifts such as lizard crafts and bead accessories.

Tense 'have given' is acceptable, but nouns were incorrect: 'a handmade gift' vs plural 'gifts' and items had spelling errors. 'Beef' should be 'bead'. Use plural forms for examples.

× I like making those things so I want to practice to make it and give it.

✓ I like making those things, so I want to practice making them and give them.

Use gerund 'making' after 'practice' and match pronouns plurality: 'them' for plural. Avoid 'to practice to make'—use 'practice making'.

× Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

✓ Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

Sentence form is grammatically acceptable as a question; no correction needed. (Kept for completeness.)

× Actually, I want to believe that, but I think so too, because. Surprise reflect the feeling. How I like them.

✓ Actually, I want to believe that, and I think so too, because surprises reflect feelings and show how much I like someone.

Original had sentence fragments and incorrect verb form 'reflect' (should be 'surprises reflect') and unclear phrase 'How I like them.' Combine ideas into a complete sentence: plural 'surprises' and plural 'feelings' or 'a feeling', and clarify 'show how much I like someone.'