Gifts— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は分かりやすく、直接的ですが、発話に「uh」などの躓きや文法の誤り（時制や関係詞の使い方）が見られます。また情報がやや一般的で具体例がないため、内容を豊かにする必要があります。改善点は（1）無駄なフィラーを減らす、（2）時制と文法を整える（例：I always prepareではなくI always prepare / I always buy）、（3）支持理由に具体例を加えることです。

Ví dụ: Yes, I'm good at giving gifts because I always prepare presents for my family and friends. For example, last month I bought a handmade scarf for my sister for her birthday, and she was really surprised and happy.

Gợi ý: 回答は直接的ですが、繰り返し（"when when"）や文法の一致（"strengthen"は時制に合わせた形へ）に注意が必要です。さらに具体的な頻度や場面（誕生日、会合、旅行のお土産など）を挙げると説得力が増します。改善点：フィラーや重複を避け、動詞の形を調整し、1〜2つの具体例を追加すること。

Ví dụ: I usually give gifts when I meet my friends, such as at birthdays or when I come back from a trip. For instance, I often bring small souvenirs from my travels to share with them.

Gợi ý: 考えは明確ですが、表現に不自然さ（"give or more impress impression"など）と語彙の選択ミスがあります。より自然な語順と語彙（appearance, usefulness, personal tasteなど）を使い、理由を具体化してください。改善点：不自然なフレーズを直し、外見以外の観点（実用性や相手の趣味）も挙げると良いです。

Ví dụ: I pay a lot of attention to the gift's appearance because a nicely presented gift looks thoughtful. I also consider its usefulness and whether it matches the recipient's interests, for example choosing a book for someone who loves reading.

Gợi ý: 正直に答えていますが、文法や語順の誤り、フィラーの多用、文が途中で切れている点が問題です。より完全な文を使い、理由を明確に（技術不足や時間不足など）述べ、代替の行動（市販品を選ぶ理由）を詳述してください。改善点：フィラーを減らし、文を完結させ、具体的な理由を1〜2点挙げること。

Ví dụ: No, I haven't given a handmade gift because I'm not confident in my crafting skills and I'm afraid the result would look unprofessional. Instead, I prefer to buy carefully chosen items that I know the recipient will like.

Gợi ý: 意見は明確で適切ですが、語彙選択の誤り（"necessary"→"necessarily"、"salt"→おそらく"thought"や"meaning"）とフィラーの使用が目立ちます。語彙を正しくし、理由と具体例を加えると説得力が増します。改善点：語彙ミスを修正し、なぜ高価である必要はないのか具体例を付けること。

Ví dụ: I don't think expensive gifts necessarily express your feelings. What's more important is the thought behind the gift and whether it shows you understand the other person's needs, for example choosing something practical they will use every day.

× Yes, I'm good at giving gifts because I always, uh, prepared a present for my family and friends.

✓ Yes, I'm good at giving gifts because I always prepare presents for my family and friends.

The speaker uses 'prepared' (past tense) together with 'always' which indicates a habitual action; the correct tense is simple present 'prepare'. Also 'a present' is better as plural 'presents' when speaking generally. Suggestion: use simple present for routines (I always prepare presents).

× When I uh, give the gift, they are so happy and which makes me happy too.

✓ When I give a gift, they are so happy, which makes me happy too.

The clause 'and which makes me happy too' is ungrammatical because 'which' should introduce a non-finite relative clause linked to the whole preceding clause; remove 'and' and use a comma before 'which'. Also use 'a gift' or no article consistently. Suggestion: combine clauses properly: 'they are so happy, which makes me happy too.'

× I usually give gifts when when I meet with my friends because it makes them so happy and strengthen our relationships.

✓ I usually give gifts when I meet my friends because it makes them so happy and strengthens our relationships.

Subject-verb agreement error: after 'it' the verb should be 'makes' (correct) but 'strengthen' must agree with singular subject 'it' or refer to 'this'/'that' so use 'strengthens'. Also remove duplicated 'when' and unnecessary 'with'. Suggestion: 'when I meet my friends' and use 'strengthens' to match singular subject 'it'.

× When choosing a gift, I consider appearance a lot because nice looks can give or more impress impression for my friends and family.

✓ When choosing a gift, I consider appearance a lot because a nice look can leave a stronger impression on my friends and family.

Problems: 'give or more impress impression' is ungrammatical; use 'leave a stronger impression' or 'make a better impression'. Also 'consider appearance' is okay but 'a nice look' or 'appearance' needs article. Preposition 'on' is required with 'impression'. Suggestion: use the collocation 'leave an impression on'.

× No, I haven't given a handmade gift to others because I'm worried that uh, I, I'm not skilled crafting give the bad things to others, so I like buying the.

✓ No, I haven't given handmade gifts to others because I'm worried that I'm not skilled at crafting and might make something of poor quality, so I prefer buying them.

Multiple issues: 'skilled crafting give the bad things' is ungrammatical. Correct structure: 'skilled at crafting' + 'might make' or 'would make' + 'something of poor quality'. 'I like buying the' is incomplete; use 'buying them' or 'buying gifts'. Suggestion: use 'skilled at' + gerund and complete object 'them' or 'gifts'.

× I don't think expensive gifts necessary express your feelings.

✓ I don't think expensive gifts necessarily express your feelings.

Use the adverb 'necessarily' to modify the verb 'express'. 'Necessary' is an adjective and incorrect here. Suggestion: use adverb form after the verb 'think' or before the verb it modifies: 'necessarily express'.

× What's more important is the salt behind the gift and whether it shows you know other person's needs or preferences.

✓ What's more important is the thought behind the gift and whether it shows you know the other person's needs or preferences.

'Salt' is a wrong word choice; the correct noun is 'thought' or 'meaning'. Also use the definite article 'the' before 'other person'. Suggestion: use 'the thought behind the gift' and 'the other person's needs'.