Gifts— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid hesitations and repeated words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think I'm good at giving gifts. I usually remember friends' birthdays and either buy a cake or make a simple handmade card, which often surprises them and makes them very happy.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and organize details logically. Use linking words (for example, or) and avoid unclear phrases like “send back 2 for me.” Be specific about occasions and one clear example.

Ví dụ: I usually give gifts on birthdays and special holidays. For example, on volunteering days or anniversaries I might give my boyfriend a handmade card or flowers, and he often gives me small presents in return.

Gợi ý: Use a clear topic sentence and correct grammar. Explain criteria with linking words and specific examples. Replace awkward phrases like “in my bucket.”

Ví dụ: I consider the recipient's preferences and my budget when choosing a gift. For instance, I try to pick something thoughtful but affordable, such as a book they like, so they feel appreciated rather than uncomfortable.

Gợi ý: Be fluent and avoid fillers. State directly whether you have given handmade gifts, then give one or two clear examples with correct vocabulary (e.g., 'baked cakes' not 'handmade carbs').

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. Although I'm not very skilled at crafts, I often bake homemade cakes or make simple cards for friends because it's personal and they appreciate the effort.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons and a short example. Fix grammar and use linking words like because or for example.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think expensive gifts express feelings better. I believe it's more important to match the recipient's preferences because an expensive gift can make someone feel uncomfortable or guilty if they can't reciprocate.

× Probably, I think I usually remember when will when is my friend's birthday and give them surprise and sometimes I will buy them a cake or just a handmade card, but they usually seem like very happy.

✓ I usually remember when my friend's birthday is and give them a surprise; sometimes I buy them a cake or a handmade card, and they usually seem very happy.

The original sentence contains incorrect word order for an embedded question ('when will when is' should be 'when my friend's birthday is'), unnecessary modal 'will' for habitual actions (use simple present 'buy'), and awkward connectors. Use simple present for habitual actions and correct indirect question order: 'when my friend's birthday is'. Combine clauses with punctuation for clarity.

× Especially on their birthday or some particular holidays, such as when on volunteering days, I will give my boyfriend a handmade card or a flower and he will send back 2 for me. He will send back for me too.

✓ Especially on their birthdays or on particular holidays, such as volunteering days, I give my boyfriend a handmade card or a flower and he gives me one back.

Use plural 'birthdays' for general occasions and correct preposition use: 'on particular holidays' and 'on volunteering days' is redundant; 'volunteering days' alone is fine. Avoid 'send back 2 for me'—use 'gives me one back'. Use simple present for habitual actions.

× I consider recipients preference in my bucket because I prefer a thoughtful, affordable gift so which could makes them feel appreciated rather than awkward.

✓ I consider the recipient's preferences because I prefer a thoughtful, affordable gift that makes them feel appreciated rather than awkward.

Use possessive form 'recipient's preferences' and singular/plural agreement. Remove vague phrase 'in my bucket'. Replace 'which could makes' with 'that makes' to match singular subject and correct relative pronoun and verb agreement.

× Yes, uh, however, my, uh, technique in handmade is really poor, so sometimes I just bake some homemade cake or some handmade carbs and I think it is uh, something limit for me.

✓ Yes, however, my handmade technique is poor, so sometimes I just bake homemade cakes or make handmade cards, and I think it is a limited skill for me.

Correct adjective order and word choice: 'handmade technique' instead of 'technique in handmade'. Use plural 'cakes' or 'a homemade cake' consistently. 'Carbs' is incorrect; likely 'cards'. 'Something limit' should be 'a limited skill' or 'a limitation'.

× No, definitely not. I think it's all for recipients on preference and sometimes sending expensive gift will makes them feel guilty because it sometimes they cannot affordable those gifts.

✓ No, definitely not. I think it depends on the recipient's preference, and sometimes giving an expensive gift makes them feel guilty because they sometimes cannot afford such gifts.

Use 'depends on' instead of 'all for', use possessive 'recipient's preference', and correct verb forms: 'giving... makes' (no 'will') and 'cannot afford' (not 'cannot affordable'). Replace 'those gifts' with 'such gifts'. Use simple present for general truths.