Gifts— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement and word choice), shorten redundancy, and add one clear reason with linking words. Keep answer under 5 sentences and use specific vocabulary (e.g., "birthday present", "meaningful keepsake").

Ví dụ: To be honest, I don't think I'm very good at giving gifts anymore because I often struggle to think of original ideas. As a result, I usually buy a meaningful keepsake, such as a personalized mug or photo frame, so the person remembers me whenever they use it.

Gợi ý: Make the topic sentence direct and correct phrasing. Use linking words to connect timing and actions, and be more specific about timing and selection. Avoid awkward phrases like "choose their special location."

Ví dụ: I usually give gifts on special occasions like birthdays or parties. For example, if a friend has a birthday party in two days, I will visit a nearby shop and pick a meaningful gift that suits the celebration.

Gợi ý: Fix grammar and plurality, use clearer linking words (e.g., "for instance", "however"), and provide specific examples of hobby-related and professional gifts. Keep sentences concise and precise.

Ví dụ: I consider the occasion and the recipient's preferences. For instance, I would give a friend a hobby-related gift like art supplies, whereas for a supervisor I might choose a professional planner or quality pen to help them work more effectively.

Gợi ý: Correct tense and word choice ("given", "handmade"), remove unclear phrases ("helmet gift", "picker up scenario"), and structure with linking words. Be specific about what you would make and why.

Ví dụ: I haven't really given handmade gifts because I don't consider myself skilled at making things. However, if I had the chance, I would draw a portrait of the person or a meaningful scene from their life, because a personal drawing feels intimate and memorable.

Gợi ý: Clarify opinion with correct grammar and use linking words (e.g., "because", "however"). Provide a concise reason and an example contrasting expensive vs thoughtful gifts. Use specific vocabulary like "sentiment" and "thoughtfulness."

Ví dụ: I don't think expensive gifts express feelings better because thoughtfulness matters more. For example, a simple handmade card or a carefully chosen book can show more sentiment than an expensive item that lacks personal meaning.

× Honestly, I don't feels like I'm good at giving gifts anymore.

✓ Honestly, I don't feel like I'm good at giving gifts anymore.

The verb 'feel' should be base form after 'do not' (auxiliary do). 'Do/does' requires the main verb in infinitive without 'to'. Use 'do not feel' for correct subject-auxiliary construction.

× I feels like it is hard for me to think about good ideas when it comes to having to give someone a present, especially for a birthday present.

✓ I feel like it is hard for me to think of good ideas when it comes to giving someone a present, especially a birthday present.

Use 'feel' with 'I' (no -s). Replace 'think about' with 'think of' for ideas and remove redundant 'having to'. 'Giving someone a present' is the correct verb structure.

× This is why I prefer to buy something that may remind them of me whenever they use that presentation.

✓ This is why I prefer to buy something that may remind them of me whenever they use it.

'Presentation' is incorrect in this context; likely meant 'item' or 'it'. Also 'use that presentation' is unnatural. Replace with 'use it' to refer to the gift.

× Most of the time when I have to give my present to someone, I will definitely choose their special location.

✓ Most of the time, when I give a present to someone, I will definitely choose a special location for them.

Sentence structure and preposition use are awkward. 'Choose a special location for them' correctly places the preposition and article. Also 'give my present' -> 'give a present' is more natural.

× For example, if they are going to have a birthday party in two days, I will go to the shop nearby my house and select them some meaningful gift.

✓ For example, if they are going to have a birthday party in two days, I will go to the shop near my house and choose a meaningful gift for them.

Use 'near my house' instead of 'nearby my house'. 'Select them some meaningful gift' is incorrect order; use 'choose a meaningful gift for them'.

× Actually, I will give my gift based on occasion and their their preference.

✓ Actually, I will choose a gift based on the occasion and their preference.

Fix repeated word 'their their'. Also use 'choose a gift based on the occasion' for clarity and correct article usage.

× For example, if this person is my friends, I will definitely give them something related to hobbies.

✓ For example, if this person is my friend, I will definitely give them something related to their hobbies.

Use singular 'friend' to match 'this person'. Add 'their' to specify whose hobbies and pluralize 'hobbies'.

× On the contrary, if this person is my supervisor, I will choose them something more professional and help them work if more effectively.

✓ On the contrary, if this person is my supervisor, I will choose something more professional that helps them work more effectively.

'Choose them something' is nonstandard; use 'choose something for them'. 'Help them work if more effectively' is incorrect; use 'helps them work more effectively'.

× I don't think I'm good at making stuff. This is why I've never give someone a helmet gift before.

✓ I don't think I'm good at making stuff. This is why I've never given someone a handmade gift before.

After present perfect 'have', use past participle 'given', not base 'give'. Also 'helmet gift' seems wrong; replaced with 'handmade gift' to match context.

× However, if I've got an opportunity to do something like that, I'd prefer to draw them something like the picker up scenario or their portrait if you will.

✓ However, if I had an opportunity to do something like that, I'd prefer to draw something for them, like a pickup scene or their portrait.

'If I've got' is awkward for a hypothetical; use conditional 'if I had'. 'Draw them something' -> 'draw something for them'. 'Picker up scenario' is unclear; 'pickup scene' or more natural phrasing helps.

× Definitely impress them.

✓ That would definitely impress them.

Original is a fragment lacking a subject and verb. Adding 'That would' completes the sentence and fits the conditional.

× Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

✓ Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

This sentence as a question is grammatically acceptable; no correction required.

× I don't think so. It seems to me that even is a cheaper gift. You can also express my feeling well if you become memorable for someone and they can.

✓ I don't think so. It seems to me that even a cheaper gift can express your feelings well if it becomes memorable to someone.

Original contains several errors: 'even is a cheaper gift' incorrect word order; 'you can also express my feeling' wrong pronoun and verb; 'become memorable for someone and they can' is incoherent. Rewritten for clarity and correct grammar.

× Since my creativity and my effort into choosing this gift, that will be alright for me.

✓ Because of my creativity and effort in choosing the gift, that will be fine with me.

Use 'Because of' or 'Due to' to introduce reason. Replace 'my effort into choosing' with 'effort in choosing'. 'That will be fine with me' is natural phrasing.