Gifts— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve clarity and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and complete the thought. Use one or two supporting details. For example, state your role in the family, who you give gifts to, and why you enjoy it. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy giving gifts because I am the eldest sibling in my family. I often buy presents for my two younger brothers to show my care and support. For instance, I usually choose items that match their hobbies so they feel appreciated.

Gợi ý: Be specific and avoid repetition. Start with a clear time frame, then give a concise example with a completed action. Use linking words like 'for example' and finish the example with what you gave and why.

Ví dụ: I usually give gifts on special occasions, especially birthdays. For example, since high school I have given my best friend a small personalized book of memories every year because she values sentimental presents.

Gợi ý: State the main criterion clearly, then give a specific, complete example using linking words. Avoid vague phrases and finish the example by naming the gift chosen and why it fits the person's interests.

Ví dụ: I mainly choose gifts based on the recipient's interests and personality. For example, because my best friend loves rock music, I bought her a vinyl record of her favorite band so she could enjoy it and display it in her room.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and provide a brief reason, then add a possible future intention. Avoid filler words and repetitions. Use one linking word (e.g., 'however' or 'but') to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: No, I haven't given handmade gifts because I'm not confident in crafting. However, I would like to learn to make something simple like a photo frame in the future so I could give a more personal present.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion and support it with concise reasons and an example. Use linking words such as 'but' or 'however' to contrast ideas. Avoid hesitations and repetitions.

Ví dụ: I don't think expensive gifts necessarily express feelings better. Instead, meaningful or handcrafted items often show thought and effort; for example, a handmade letter or a customized keepsake can be more touching than an expensive but impersonal item.

× I always trying to I'm always trying to give gifts for my siblings and I have also two brothers and when I.

✓ I'm always trying to give gifts to my siblings. I also have two brothers.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect after 'give gifts' when indicating recipients; use 'to'. 'Always trying' lacks auxiliary 'am'; use 'I'm always trying'. The original sentence is also run-on and unfinished, so split into two clear sentences and remove the trailing fragment. Suggestion: use 'give gifts to someone' and ensure an auxiliary verb for continuous tense.

× I often give gifts for my special ones on their birthdays.

✓ I often give gifts to my special ones on their birthdays.

'Give gifts for' is incorrect when indicating recipients; use 'give gifts to'. The sentence structure is otherwise fine. Use 'to' for recipients.

× For example, ever since my high school I have been giving my best friend best friend who is from my high school friend.

✓ For example, ever since high school I have been giving gifts to my best friend from high school.

Redundant phrases ('best friend best friend' and 'who is from my high school friend') create a structural problem. Also use 'to' after 'giving' for recipient. Remove repetition and reorder for clarity: 'ever since high school' and 'my best friend from high school'.

× I always give gave her the.

✓ I always gave her gifts.

Mixing present 'give' and past 'gave' is inconsistent. Choose past 'gave' to match 'always' in a past narrative, or present perfect if continuing to present. The fragment 'the.' is incomplete; replace with 'gifts' or specify the item. Suggestion: 'I always gave her gifts' or 'I have always given her gifts.'

× I think I mostly choose the gift for the person and the based on their interest or personality.

✓ I think I mostly choose the gift for the person based on their interests or personality.

Remove extra 'the' and use 'based on' directly after the object. Also use plural 'interests' to match general usage. The preposition 'for' is acceptable here but the phrase was duplicated and misordered; correct word order improves clarity.

× For example, my best friend who is drawn to a rock music so I really love like.

✓ For example, my best friend is drawn to rock music, so I really like that.

Unnecessary relative clause 'who is' can be simplified; 'a rock music' is incorrect—'rock music' is uncountable and doesn't take 'a'. The fragment 'I really love like' is ungrammatical; use 'I really like that' or 'I really love it.' Suggestion: keep sentence complete with a main clause after 'so'.

× Not really, because I'm not good at any hand doing handmade, so I often, uh, give them, uh, give them a gift from purchased Yeah, and if I, uh, if I learn.

✓ Not really, because I'm not good at making handmade items, so I often buy gifts for them. If I learn how to make them, I would give handmade gifts.

Phrases like 'not good at any hand doing handmade' are ungrammatical; use 'good at making handmade items'. 'Give them a gift from purchased' is incorrect—use 'buy gifts for them'. The final fragment 'if I learn' needs completion (conditional structure). Provide a complete conditional: 'If I learn how to make them, I would...'.

× Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

✓ Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

This question is grammatically acceptable as-is; however, if rephrasing for clarity one could ask 'Do expensive gifts express your feelings better?' Both are correct. No change required.

× I'm really not sure about this because all the expensive gifts means, uh, valuable for me because for me, uh, the handcrafted and something meaningful, uh, gives a more valuable and express the, uh, person's feelings, I think.

✓ I'm really not sure about this because expensive gifts don't necessarily mean more to me. For me, handcrafted or meaningful items are more valuable and express a person's feelings better.

The original mixes singular/plural and has awkward phrasing: 'all the expensive gifts means' is incorrect—subject-verb agreement and unnecessary 'all the'. 'The handcrafted and something meaningful' is ungrammatical; use 'handcrafted or meaningful items'. 'Gives a more valuable and express' mixes verb forms; use 'are more valuable and express' or 'express a person's feelings better'. Suggest using clearer parallel structure and correct subject-verb agreement.