Gifts— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., “choose” and “according” are repeated) and correct simple grammar (plural/singular, articles).

Ví dụ: Yes, I think I'm good at giving gifts. I usually pick presents based on the recipient’s interests and age, and I always consider my budget so I don’t overspend.

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly (timing) first, then add a brief supporting detail about capturing moments. Use linking words and correct tense and phrasing. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I usually give gifts on special occasions like birthdays or festivals. Also, I often take photos when I give a present because it creates an unforgettable memory.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence listing the main factors, then add one specific reason or an example. Fix grammar (remove unnecessary prepositions, use correct verb forms). Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I consider the person’s age, tastes and personality when choosing a gift. For example, for a close friend I might buy a gadget they like, while for an older relative I prefer something practical and within my budget.

Gợi ý: Give a concise yes/no topic sentence and then explain why with a specific detail about the handmade gift. Correct phrasing (e.g., “emotionally meaningful” not “emotional attached”) and finish the sentence fully.

Ví dụ: Yes, I once made a scrapbook for my best friend’s birthday because it felt more personal and emotionally meaningful than a store-bought present.

Gợi ý: The answer should directly address the question and give a clear opinion with reasons. Avoid unclear fragments and incomplete sentences. Use linking words (however, but) if giving a balanced view, and provide a specific example.

Ví dụ: Not necessarily; expensive gifts can show effort, but I think the thought behind a gift matters more. For example, I once bought an electronic gadget for a friend because he needed it and I had saved up, but I believe a thoughtful, affordable present can be just as meaningful.

× Yes, I am good at giving gift to others because I choose gift according to their interest, age and taste.

✓ Yes, I am good at giving gifts to others because I choose gifts according to their interests, ages, and tastes.

The noun 'gift' should be plural because it refers to gifts in general ('gifts to others'). Also 'interest, age and taste' refer to multiple people, so plural forms 'interests, ages, and tastes' are needed for agreement. Make nouns plural when speaking about more than one item or multiple people.' Suggestion: Use plural nouns (gifts, interests, ages, tastes) when referring to multiple items or people.

× So I choose according to my budget present because it helps to save money.

✓ So I choose presents according to my budget because it helps me save money.

The phrase 'choose according to my budget present' has incorrect word order and a wrong preposition. 'Presents according to my budget' or 'choose presents based on my budget' is correct. Also include the subject 'me' in 'helps me save money.' Suggestion: Use 'according to' before the criterion ('according to my budget') and place the noun 'presents' after that criterion.

× When I give any gift to other, I try to capture some moments in my camera and it was a astonishing experience for me and unforgettable memory and I show my feelings regarding to others.

✓ When I give any gift to others, I try to capture some moments with my camera and it is an astonishing and unforgettable experience for me, and I show my feelings to them.

Use 'others' (plural) for 'other' when referring to people in general. 'Some moments in my camera' is unnatural; use 'with my camera.' Tense consistency: keep present tense 'it is' rather than 'it was' if describing a habitual action. Use the article 'an' before 'astonishing.' 'Regarding to others' is incorrect; use 'to them' or 'toward them.' Suggestion: Maintain consistent tense and use correct prepositions and pronouns ('with my camera', 'to others' -> 'to them').

× I usually consider about person, age, taste, nature so I buy the gift according to their choice which helps to show my feelings regarding other because I spending money according to my budget and I feel relaxed after giving you.

✓ I usually consider the person, their age, taste, and personality, so I buy a gift according to their choice, which helps show my feelings toward them because I spend money according to my budget and I feel relaxed after giving it.

Do not use 'consider about'; use 'consider' followed by the object ('consider the person'). 'Nature' is unclear; 'personality' fits better. 'Buy the gift' should be 'buy a gift.' 'Regarding other' should be 'toward them.' 'I spending' is incorrect verb form; use 'I spend.' 'After giving you' is wrong; use 'after giving it' or 'after giving the gift.' Suggestion: Use correct verb forms and prepositions ('consider the person', 'toward them', 'I spend', 'after giving it').

× As far as I remember, I gave a handmade gift to my best friend on his birthday because it was a more personal and emotional attached as compared to the store budget gift.

✓ As far as I remember, I gave a handmade gift to my best friend on his birthday because it was more personal and emotionally meaningful compared to a store-bought gift.

Use comparative structure correctly: 'more personal' is fine but 'emotional attached' is incorrect; use 'emotionally meaningful' or 'more emotionally significant.' 'Store budget gift' is incorrect; the common phrase is 'store-bought gift.' Keep tense past for a past event (gave) and adjust adjectives/adverbs appropriately. Suggestion: Use correct adjective/adverb forms and common collocations ('store-bought gift', 'emotionally meaningful').

× So.

✓ (Remove fragment)

A single word 'So.' is a sentence fragment and does not convey meaning. It should be removed or completed into a full sentence, for example: 'So, it was well received.' Suggestion: Avoid sentence fragments; write complete sentences.

× Yes, I buy expensive gift to show my feelings to my best friend because I save money for his birthday.

✓ Yes, I buy expensive gifts to show my feelings for my best friend because I save money for his birthday.

Use plural 'gifts' when speaking generally. 'Buy ... to show my feelings to' is better expressed as 'show my feelings for.' Article use: 'his birthday' is fine. Maintain plural when generalizing. Suggestion: Use 'gifts' for general statements and 'show my feelings for' a person.

× So I choose electronic gadget for his because he is so.

✓ So I chose an electronic gadget for him because he likes them/needs one.

The sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'For his' is incorrect pronoun use; use 'for him.' 'Because he is so' is a fragment; clarify the reason, e.g., 'because he likes them' or 'because he needs one.' Use past tense 'chose' to match earlier past context if referring to a specific birthday. Suggestion: Complete the sentence with a clear reason and correct pronouns ('for him', 'because he likes them' or 'because he needed one').