Gifts— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 用词和句子要更自然、准确，避免词语错误和冗余。可以把“tips”改为“gifts”，把“recipients interest”改为“the recipient’s interests”，并用一句主题句开头，然后用1-2句具体细节说明选择礼物时的考虑。注意连词使用如“because”或“so”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think I’m good at giving gifts. I pay close attention to the recipient’s interests and try to choose or make something they’ll actually use. For example, if someone loves cooking, I might make them a personalized recipe book because it shows I know their hobby.

Gợi ý: 句子结构总体可以，但要更简洁自然，注意冠词和单复数（e.g. “special occasions”），并使用连接词使句子更流畅。可加一两个具体例子来丰富内容。

Ví dụ: I usually give gifts on special occasions, such as birthdays, anniversaries, or festivals like Christmas and New Year. For instance, I always prepare small presents for close friends on their birthdays to show I care.

Gợi ý: 回答清晰且内容具体，但可用更自然的连接词并稍作扩展，例如说明哪种礼物适合哪种关系。同时注意复数和冠词（e.g. “the recipient’s interests, hobbies and needs”）。

Ví dụ: I consider the recipient’s interests, hobbies and practical needs, as well as the occasion and how close we are. For example, for a close friend I might choose a sentimental handmade item, while for a colleague I’d pick something more practical.

Gợi ý: 回答具体且生动，但可以让句子更自然，注意时态和小修饰（e.g. “for her birthday”）。可以补充一两句说明朋友的反应以增加细节。

Ví dụ: Yes. I made a handmade book for my best friend’s birthday. It was filled with our photos, drawings I made, and personal messages, and she was really touched when she opened it.

Gợi ý: 观点明确，但表达有语法和词汇问题（e.g. “relies in”->“lies in”，“praise”用词不当，最后一句用更自然表达）。建议用一两个具体理由或例子支持观点。

Ví dụ: Not really. I believe the value of a gift lies in the sincerity behind it rather than the price. For example, a heartfelt letter or a small handmade present can mean more than an expensive item if it shows you truly care.

× I pay close attention to recipients interest.

✓ I pay close attention to recipients' interests.

此句存在名词复数与所有格问题。recipient（单个收礼人）改为复数recipients后，表示“收礼人们”，需使用所有格形式recipients'；另interest应使用复数形式interests以匹配多个人的不同兴趣。建议养成复数名词后在表示所属关系时加上撇号并注意可数名词单复数一致。

× I think they would generally appreciate if I enjoy the progress of making and choosing games for them.

✓ I think they would generally appreciate it if I enjoyed the process of making and choosing gifts for them.

句中有多处问题：首先，appreciate后接宾语从句时常用it作形式宾语，因此应为 appreciate it if ...；其次，时态与虚拟语气：表示假设或不太可能的情况用过去式enjoyed；progress在这里用词不当，表示“制作和挑选礼物的过程”应为process；最后games显然用词错误，应为gifts。建议注意固定搭配（appreciate it if），以及语义匹配的词汇选择。

× I usually give gifts during the special occasion such as birthday anniversaries or festival like Christmas or New Year.

✓ I usually give gifts during special occasions such as birthdays, anniversaries, or festivals like Christmas or New Year.

此句中冠词与可数名词使用不当：special occasion应为复数special occasions且通常不加定冠词；birthday anniversaries搭配混乱，birthday和anniversary都为可数名词，应并列为 birthdays, anniversaries；festival也应用复数festivals。建议在列举多种场合时使用复数形式并去掉不必要的冠词。

× It is a great way to show our blessing and care for them.

✓ It is a great way to show our blessings and care for them.

此处blessing用单数不合适，作“祝福”的意思时通常用复数blessings或使用uncountable形式的well wishes；此外语义上我们用our来表示“我们的”，所以改为blessings更自然。建议注意可数/不可数名词和习惯用法。

× When choosing a gift, I consider the recipient's interest, hobbies and needs.

✓ When choosing a gift, I consider the recipient's interests, hobbies, and needs.

recipient's interest与hobbies, needs并列时，interest应使用复数interests以匹配多个方面或不同兴趣。并列名词之间用复数形式更自然。

× There are also things like occasion and the relation I have with them.

✓ There are also factors like the occasion and the relationship I have with them.

原句结构与词汇搭配不够自然：occasion前应加定冠词the（指特定场合），relation常用作抽象名词但此处更自然用relationship。并且用factors来概括“还有一些因素”。建议使用更自然的搭配和清晰的名词。

× Yes, I made a handmade book for my best friend in her birthday.

✓ Yes, I made a handmade book for my best friend on her birthday.

时间短语用法错误：在表示某人在某天庆祝生日时，固定搭配为 on one's birthday，而不是 in one's birthday。建议记住常见时间介词搭配：on用于具体日期或节日日子。

× It was filled with our lovely photo and I drew some pictures and wrote down the feelings and blessings.

✓ It was filled with our lovely photos, and I drew some pictures and wrote down my feelings and blessings.

photo与前文our指复数，应使用photos；wrote down the feelings似乎指说话者自己的感受，应改为my feelings以明确主语一致性。建议注意名词单复数和代词一致。

× Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

✓ Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

此句形式上语法正确，但可以更自然地问：Do expensive gifts express your feelings better? 两种表达都可接受。原句并无重大语法错误，因此不做改动。

× Not really. I think the value of gift relies in sincerity rather than praise.

✓ Not really. I think the value of a gift lies in sincerity rather than price.

原句中多个问题：value of gift缺少冠词，应为value of a gift；动词搭配错误，rely in应为lie in或be found in；最后pra i se（称赞）与句意不符，应为price（价格）。因此改为lies in sincerity rather than price。建议熟记常见动词短语（lie in）和常见词汇对比（price vs. praise）。

× Feeling can never be measure by price.

✓ Feelings can never be measured by price.

原句中主语与动词形式不匹配：Feeling单数不合适，应为复数Feelings或使用The feeling并改写；measure应为过去分词measured，构成被动语态be measured by。建议注意被动语态的过去分词形式和主语单复数一致。