Gifts— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 整体表达清晰，但存在语法和用词不准（如 possessive/plural, verb tense）和轻微冗余。建议注意单复数和代词一致，简化句子并用连接词提高流畅度。例如把“I usually focus on my friends requirements”改为“I usually pay attention to my friends' needs”，并把具体例子与主题更紧密衔接。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think I'm good at giving gifts because I pay attention to my friends' needs. For example, when I knew a friend was planning a trip, I bought her a pair of sunglasses to help protect her eyes.

Gợi ý: 回答内容基本相关但句子结构混乱，存在语法错误（时态和从句结构），和不必要冗长。建议先用一句主题句直接回答，然后用一两个清晰的具体例子支持；注意连词和代词位置。

Ví dụ: It depends on my relationship with the person. For example, I usually give birthday presents to relatives and friends, and I prepare extra gifts for my boyfriend on our anniversary.

Gợi ý: 观点明确但表达有小错误和不自然短语（如 'major 1', 'newborn baby' 用词不当）。建议使用更恰当和具体的词汇，避免矛盾或不合逻辑的例子（婴儿与书籍年龄差距可改为 toddler 或 young child），并用连接词让结构更紧凑。

Ví dụ: I mainly consider whether a gift is practical and suitable for the recipient. For example, I would not buy a professional book for a toddler because it would be inappropriate for their age.

Gợi ý: 内容具体且有情感，但有时态和词序小错误（如 'Definitely I did' 应更自然，'for working' 可改为 'for work'）。建议用更自然的开头并略微压缩句子，使表达更地道。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. Last winter I knitted a scarf for my boyfriend because he had to go to Beijing for work and it was very cold there. I wanted him to stay warm.

Gợi ý: 观点明确但语言混乱且有明显词汇错误（如 'grateful or love sales', 'suitable 1'）。需要用更准确的词汇表达情感（gratitude, love），并改进句子结构，给出一两句支持理由和例子以增强说服力。

Ví dụ: No, I don't think expensive gifts are better. In my opinion, people give presents to show gratitude or love, so it's more important to choose something suitable and meaningful rather than costly.

× Yes I am because I usually focus on my friends requirements.

✓ Yes, I am, because I usually focus on my friends' requirements.

错误类型参考：主谓所有格/介词用法（接近第11/22项）。原句缺少逗号且 friends requirements 应使用所有格 friends' requirements。建议在复合句中适当使用标点并用所有格表示“我朋友们的要求”。

× For instance, I bought my friends a pair of sunglasses when I know she's planning a journey.

✓ For instance, I bought my friend a pair of sunglasses when I knew she was planning a journey.

错误类型参考：时态问题（第5/6）。句中既使用过去时 bought，也用现在时 know/ is planning，时态不一致。应把后半句也用过去时（knew / was planning）以保持时间一致。注意 friend 单数更自然。

× Well, it depends on what kind of relationships we're keeping.

✓ Well, it depends on what kind of relationship we have.

错误类型参考：句子结构/介词（第26/11）。原句关系表达不自然，'relationships we're keeping' 用法错误。应使用 have 来表示我们与某人的关系，并把 relationship 用单数或复数视语境，这里用单数更通顺。

× However, As for my boyfriend will celebrate anniversary together, so I'll prepare extra gifts to him.

✓ However, since my boyfriend and I will celebrate our anniversary together, I'll prepare an extra gift for him.

错误类型参考：句子结构/介词/冠词（第26/11/22）。原句中 'As for my boyfriend will...' 结构错误，且 'celebrate anniversary' 需加所有者 'our'，'extra gifts to him' 介词和冠词用法不当，改为 'an extra gift for him'。

× Well, I'll think about several points, and the major 1 is that if this gift is practical and suitable for the people who will receive it.

✓ Well, I'll think about several points, and the main one is whether this gift is practical and suitable for the person who will receive it.

错误类型参考：句子结构/比较与选择（第26/25）。原句 'major 1' 用法错误，应为 'main one'，并且用 'whether' 更适合引出判断从句；'people who will receive it' 若指单人应改为 'person'。

× For instance, I won't buy a professional book for my cousin who is a newborn baby.

✓ For instance, I wouldn't buy a professional book for my cousin who is a newborn.

错误类型参考：情态动词/时态与词语搭配（第4/5/13）。'won't' 在假设语境中用 'wouldn't' 更礼貌/常见，'newborn baby' 重复，改为 'newborn' 更简练。

× Definitely I did. I give my boyfriend a handmade scarf last winter because at that time he had to go to Beijing for working and it was extremely cold in Beijing.

✓ Definitely I did. I gave my boyfriend a handmade scarf last winter because at that time he had to go to Beijing for work and it was extremely cold there.

错误类型参考：过去时/动词搭配（第5/9/11）。'I give' 应为过去时 'I gave' 与 'last winter' 一致；'for working' 搭配不当，应为 'for work'；重复出现 'Beijing' 可用 'there' 代替以避免累赘。

× Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

✓ Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

此句语法无误，只需保留原句。错误类型：无（不在需改范围）。因此不作更改。

× I believe that the reason why people give gifts is they want to express their grateful or love sales and most important thing is to find a suitable 1 instead of expensive one.

✓ I believe that the reason why people give gifts is that they want to express their gratitude or love, and the most important thing is to find a suitable one instead of an expensive one.

错误类型参考：词性/冠词/句子结构（第13/22/26）。'express their grateful' 用词错误，应为 'express their gratitude'；'love sales' 无意义，应为 'love'；缺少连词 'and' 后需加定冠词 'the'；'suitable 1' 应为 'suitable one'，并且 'an expensive one' 需要冠词。