Plants— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and correct mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct the name/word (remove "MMM" if filler), avoid repetition, and add one brief specific detail using a linking word. Also correct grammar: use "a small tree" or "a small potted tree" and avoid repeating words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I have a small potted tree in my room, and I often look at it when I have free time because its green leaves help me feel relaxed.

Gợi ý: Use correct article and verb forms, and link ideas. Start with a clear topic sentence ('I grew roses'), then give specific routine details and reason. Avoid repetition and fix grammar: 'I watered the roses', 'removed dead leaves', 'I loved seeing the flowers bloom.'

Ví dụ: When I was young, I grew roses in my small garden. I watered the roses every morning and removed dead leaves, because I loved watching the flowers bloom.

Gợi ý: Provide a clearer, more structured answer: state briefly what you know, then give one or two specific examples using linking words. Correct grammar: 'my father, who really loves plants', 'check the quality of the soil', 'how much water plants need to stay healthy.' Avoid fillers like 'uh' and repeated words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. My father, who loves plants, taught me how to check the quality of the soil and how much water plants need, so I can keep them healthy.

Gợi ý: Be honest but clear: give a direct short answer then offer a qualified comment with a reason or example. Fix grammar and unclear phrases. For example, say you are not sure but sometimes people give plants as gifts for occasions, and specify who (friends, colleagues).

Ví dụ: I'm not sure, as I haven't seen it much, but some people do give plants as gifts for housewarmings or holidays, especially small potted plants for friends or colleagues.

× Yes I do, I keep MMM a small tree in my room and I usually look at it when I have free time because it makes me feel relaxed and comfortable. Comfortable.

✓ Yes, I do. I keep a small tree in my room and I usually look at it when I have free time because it makes me feel relaxed and comfortable.

The phrase 'I keep MMM a small tree' contains an extra token 'MMM' and misuses articles. Use 'a small tree' to indicate one tree. Add commas and sentence separation for clarity. Remove redundant repeated word 'Comfortable.' Suggestion: read aloud and remove filler tokens and repetitions.

× When I was young I planted rose in my small garden.

✓ When I was young, I planted roses in my small garden.

'Rose' as a countable noun requires plural 'roses' when referring to more than one or the general category. Also include a comma after the introductory phrase. If you planted a single plant, use 'a rose'.

× I watered rose in the morning and usually remove dead leaves because I I love to seeing flowers bloom.

✓ I watered the roses in the morning and usually removed dead leaves because I loved seeing the flowers bloom.

Multiple issues: 'rose' should be plural or use 'the' for specific plants; tense must be past to match 'When I was young' (past: watered, removed, loved). 'I I' is a duplication. 'Love to seeing' is incorrect: use 'loved seeing' or 'love to see'. Suggestions: keep tense consistent and remove duplicated words.

× Yes I do. Uh, I know it from my father who really love plants.

✓ Yes, I do. Uh, I learned it from my father, who really loves plants.

The original mixes tenses and has subject-verb agreement error: 'who really love plants' should be 'who really loves plants' because 'who' refers to singular 'father'. 'I know it from my father' is awkward; 'I learned it from my father' is clearer when referring to knowledge acquired in the past. Add commas for clarity.

× He taught me how to check the the quality of soil and what water plants to keep it stay healthy.

✓ He taught me how to check the quality of the soil and how to water plants to keep them healthy.

Remove duplicate 'the the'. 'Quality of soil' needs the definite article 'the soil' when talking about soil in general in context. The clause 'what water plants' is incorrect; use 'how to water plants'. 'To keep it stay healthy' is ungrammatical—use 'to keep them healthy' (plural pronoun 'them' for plants) and drop extra verb 'stay'.

× I'm not sure about that because I'm I have not seen a Chinese sand plants as a gifts before, but maybe some pupils they'll plan until still stand plants as a gift.

✓ I'm not sure about that because I have not seen Chinese people send plants as gifts before, but maybe some people do.

This sentence has many problems: duplicated 'I'm I'; 'a Chinese sand plants' is garbled and should be 'Chinese people send plants'; 'as a gifts' mixes singular/plural—use 'as gifts' or 'as a gift'; 'some pupils they'll plan until still stand plants' is unintelligible. Provide a simple, grammatical alternative: 'maybe some people do.' Recommend speaking slowly and organizing ideas before answering.