Websites— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较直接但语言有重复与语法问题，需更自然并补充具体细节。建议：1) 开头用主题句直接回答并加短理由；2) 用连词补充细节（e.g. because, so, for example）；3) 修正重复（remove extra words）；4) 补充具体例子（哪类文章、频率）。

Ví dụ: I often use my school's online library database because I need academic articles for my coursework. For example, I normally search for journal articles on psychology and sociology about twice a week, which helps me write essays and prepare presentations.

Gợi ý: 内容有意义但表达不够精确且有冗余。建议：1) 用一句话明确说出最喜欢的网站类别并说明原因；2) 用连接词列举受益对象时保持简洁，用具体例子替代笼统表达；3) 避免重复和语法错误。

Ví dụ: My favorite website is a charity platform because it organizes fundraising events and lets people donate to specific causes. For example, last month I donated to a campaign that supports elderly care and children’s education.

Gợi ý: 回答含重复且不够连贯，信息不具体。建议：1) 直接说明是否有变化并举例说明具体改动（如界面、功能）；2) 用连词说明变化的影响；3) 避免重复词汇并修正语法。

Ví dụ: Yes, the website has recently updated its user interface to make navigation clearer. For instance, they added a sidebar menu and bigger icons, so it's much easier to find search functions.

Gợi ý: 答案观点明确但语法与词汇使用需改进，句子结构单一。建议：1) 开头用完整句并给原因；2) 用连接词扩展（for example, because, therefore）；3) 提供具体类型或例子（streaming, social media）。

Ví dụ: Entertainment websites are very popular because many people use them to relax after a long workday. For example, streaming services and short-video apps attract large audiences because they offer easy and quick entertainment.

Gợi ý: 观点清晰但有语法错误与重复，比较不够具体。建议：1) 用一句主题句表明偏好并给两个具体理由；2) 使用比较结构（while/whereas）展开对比；3) 修正重复与单复数错误并给例子说明何时仍用书籍。

Ví dụ: I prefer getting information from websites because they are convenient and provide searchable databases. While books are more reliable for in-depth study, I usually use websites for quick facts and online journals for academic research.

Gợi ý: 回答含混且有语法错误，信息不明确。建议：1) 明确想要拥有网站的原因和用途；2) 用一到两句说明目前状况或计划；3) 避免不必要的词语重复并修正时态。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to have my own website to showcase my projects and write blog posts about my studies. At the moment I don't have one, but I plan to create a simple portfolio site next semester.

Gợi ý: 回答未完成且有语法问题，需更具体并完整陈述。建议：1) 直接点出具体学到的内容或技能；2) 用连接词举例说明如何应用这些信息；3) 完成句子并避免时态、拼写错误。

Ví dụ: One helpful site I use is Little Red Book, where people share practical tips and product reviews. For example, I learned time-management techniques and study tips there, which I then applied to organize my weekly schedule more effectively.

× I usually use my school's library database because I use it to search for articles

✓ I usually use my school's library database because I use it to search for articles.

句子本身动词一致和结构正确。仅补上句末标点。（此句不存在清单内其他错误。）

× My favorite website is a charity website that's filled with activities and people can donate their money for some children and the elders and some people who broke their arms.

✓ My favorite website is a charity site that's full of activities, where people can donate money to children, the elderly, and people who have broken their arms.

问题类型：13（形容词或副词使用不当）。原句中"filled with activities"语义可，但更自然是"full of activities"；"donate their money for some children and the elders and some people who broke their arms"中介词和词序不当，应使用"donate money to"并把受助对象并列且用适当的词（"the elderly"替代"the elders"；"people who have broken their arms"使用现在完成或现在完成进行表经历）。建议：使用固定搭配"donate money to"，并用并列结构清晰列出受助对象，保持时态一致。

× Yes. There are some UI changes on it. Sometimes it may be be improved and make make the make the function more visible.

✓ Yes. There are some UI changes on it. Sometimes it may be improved to make the functions more visible.

问题类型：6（现在时问题）和重复词错误（属于句子结构/打字错误，但按要求只改清单内项）。原句中"may be be improved and make make the make the function more visible"重复且动词搭配不当。改为"may be improved to make the functions more visible"使用不定式表示目的，并把单数"function"改为复数或加冠词匹配。建议：避免重复，使用不定式表示目的，注意名词单复数一致。

× the entertainment website because people working work a day need time and website to have fun. So these websites have more audience.

✓ Entertainment websites, because people who work all day need time and websites to have fun, so these websites have larger audiences.

问题类型：11（介词/结构使用不当）及27（主谓一致/句子结构）。原句缺少冠词和关系从句结构不清楚；"people working work a day"不通顺，应改为"people who work all day"；"have more audience"应为"have larger audiences"或"have more visitors"。建议：使用关系从句连接修饰语，注意名词单复数和更自然的搭配（"larger audiences"或"more visitors"）。

× I prefer getting information from websites because nowadays website is convenient and it has powerful database to support to support our searching. Books is a reliable way, but it may not convenient.

✓ I prefer getting information from websites because nowadays websites are convenient and have powerful databases to support our searches. Books are a reliable source, but they may not be as convenient.

问题类型：6（现在时/一般现在时）和27（主谓一致）及22（冠词/可数名词）。原句中"website is convenient"应为复数"websites are convenient"；"powerful database"应为复数或加冠词"powerful databases"；重复"to support"且搭配不当，改为"support our searches"；"Books is"主谓不一致，应为"Books are"，并补全比较结构"not as convenient"。建议：注意主语单复数一致，名词可数/不可数与冠词使用，避免重复动词。

× Yes, I would like to. I think this must be phone, but now current I have no have no my own website.

✓ Yes, I would like to. I think it must be on my phone, but currently I don't have my own website.

问题类型：4（情态动词/助动词使用）和11（介词使用）及26（句子结构）。原句中"this must be phone"不自然，意图应为"it must be on my phone"或"I must make one for phone"；"now current I have no have no my own website"重复且语序错误，应为"currently I don't have my own website"。建议：使用正确的助动词和介词短语（"on my phone"），避免重复词，注意副词位置（"currently"置句首或助动词前）。

× Yes, I would like to talk about the website Little Red Books. People always share their daily details and helpful information on it. I always searching it for some daily questions and problems. It always helps me to deal with problems that I

✓ Yes, I would like to talk about the website Little Red Book. People always share their daily details and helpful information on it. I always search it for answers to daily questions and problems. It always helps me deal with problems that I encounter.

问题类型：8（动词+ -ing 形式使用）及26（句子结构/残句）。原句"I always searching it"应用一般现在时"I always search it"或进行时需助动词"I am always searching it"；最后一句不完整"that I"需补全，如"that I encounter"。此外网站名称通常为单数"Little Red Book"（小红书）。建议：根据习惯频率副词使用一般现在时，确保句子完整并使用正确的动词形式。