Part 1
Giám khảo
What kinds of websites do you often visit?
Thí sinh
I usually visit shopping website and social media for chatting with friends and I also follow fashion blogs and stay style inspiration size because they can give me outfits, ideas and help me decide what to wear.
Giám khảo
What is your favourite website?
Thí sinh
Yes.
Giám khảo
Are there any changes to the websites you often visit?
Thí sinh
I think the website of it now are quite different from before because they are many more ads like pop ups and sponsors post on fashion styles and the social media. For example I often see targeted ads and that follows my.
Giám khảo
What kinds of websites are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I think social media is the most popular type of the most popular website in my country because everyone use it to stay in touch with families and members for example. Then people use very WeChat to check and companies also use social platforms to organize virtual.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer getting information from websites or books?
Thí sinh
I think it depends on the situation. For breaking news, breaking news I pre breaking news. I prefer getting information on websites because they are fast and up to date so I can catch the last developments. But for some in depth in depth understanding or background information I prefer books because they are always.
Giám khảo
Would you like to have your own website?
Thí sinh
Yes, I would if I know how to start a website. I pray. I pray properly greeted, personal, uh, shows my project and blog, umm.
Giám khảo
What have you learned from websites that help with your life or studies?
Thí sinh
Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah.
What kinds of websites do you often visit?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 答题要更自然、句子更完整并注意语法和连贯性。可先用主题句直接回答,然后用一两句具体说明网站类型和原因,避免重复和拼写/语法错误(例如 shopping websites, stay → get)。多使用连接词如 because, for example 来组织信息。
Ví dụ: I often visit shopping websites and social media. For example, I use online stores to browse clothes and follow fashion blogs to get outfit ideas, because they help me decide what to wear.
What is your favourite website?
Điểm: 10.0Gợi ý: 回答应直接回应问题并给出具体理由。不要只说单词或简短回答,要给出主题句并补充一两个支持细节,使用连接词使答案连贯。
Ví dụ: My favourite website is Instagram because it combines social interaction and fashion inspiration. I follow designers and influencers there, which gives me fresh style ideas and product links.
Are there any changes to the websites you often visit?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 注意语法和表达的完整性,避免句子碎片。先给出总体观点,然后用具体例子说明变化(例如弹窗广告、定向广告、赞助内容)。使用连接词如 because, for example, so 来增强连贯性。
Ví dụ: Yes, websites have changed a lot because there are more ads and sponsored posts. For example, I now see targeted pop-up ads on fashion blogs and social media, which can be distracting when I browse.
What kinds of websites are popular in your country?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答需更有条理并注意词汇搭配(例如 everyone uses, stay in touch with family members)。先给结论,再用具体例子(WeChat, news sites, e-commerce)说明用途。避免重复和句子不完整。
Ví dụ: Social media websites are the most popular in my country because people use them to keep in touch and get news. For example, many use WeChat for messaging and payments, while companies use social platforms to host virtual events.
Do you prefer getting information from websites or books?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 总体结构不错,但要避免重复和未完成句子。先给条件性回答,然后分别说明网站和书的优点,使用连接词(for example, because, however)并补充完整结论。
Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. For breaking news I prefer websites because they are fast and up to date; however, for in-depth background information I prefer books because they provide more reliable and detailed explanations.
Would you like to have your own website?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答要更有条理且语言清晰。先明确愿望,然后具体说明想要的网站类型和用途(例如展示项目、写博客)。避免填充词(uh, umm)并用连词连接想法。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to have my own website if I learned how to build one. It would be a personal portfolio that showcases my projects and includes a blog to share my ideas.
What have you learned from websites that help with your life or studies?
Điểm: 5.0Gợi ý: 不要只重复词语。应先给出主题句,接着用一两个具体例子说明通过网站学到的技能或知识(例如在线课程、研究资料、实用技巧),并用连接词增强条理。
Ví dụ: I've learned many practical skills from websites, such as coding basics from online tutorials and study techniques from educational blogs, which have helped me improve my schoolwork.
× I usually visit shopping website and social media for chatting with friends and I also follow fashion blogs and stay style inspiration size because they can give me outfits, ideas and help me decide what to wear.
✓ I usually visit shopping websites and social media to chat with friends, and I also follow fashion blogs and style inspiration sites because they can give me outfit ideas and help me decide what to wear.
错误类型为可数名词单复数问题。原句中“shopping website”应为复数“shopping websites”因为说的是一般经常访问的多类网站。“stay style inspiration size”明显是拼写和名词错误,应改为“style inspiration sites”。另外“for chatting with friends”更地道的表达为“to chat with friends”。建议注意可数名词在泛指多项时使用复数,检查拼写并用不定式表目的。
× What is your favourite website? Student: Yes.
✓ What is your favourite website? Student: I don't have a single favourite, but I often use WeChat and Taobao.
原句学生回答“Yes.”与问题不匹配,属于代词/回答不当问题,应提供与问题相关的完整答案。建议回答时直接说明具体网站或解释没有特别喜欢的单一网站。
× I think the website of it now are quite different from before because they are many more ads like pop ups and sponsors post on fashion styles and the social media.
✓ I think websites now are quite different from before because there are many more ads, like pop-ups and sponsored posts about fashion styles on social media.
错误类型为“There be”结构使用错误。原句“they are many more ads”语序错误且代词使用混乱,正确结构为“there are many more ads”。同时需要将“sponsors post”改为“sponsored posts”。建议学习并使用固定结构“there is/there are”来描述存在。
× For example I often see targeted ads and that follows my.
✓ For example, I often see targeted ads that follow me around.
原句代词和结构混乱,“that follows my”不符合英语语法。应改为“targeted ads that follow me around”或“ads targeted at me”。建议使用正确的关系从句并使用宾格代词“me”。
× I think social media is the most popular type of the most popular website in my country because everyone use it to stay in touch with families and members for example.
✓ I think social media is the most popular type of website in my country because everyone uses it to stay in touch with family members, for example.
这是句子结构和主谓一致的问题。原句重复“the most popular”并且“everyone use”动词形式错误,应为“everyone uses”。“families and members”结构不自然,应为“family members”。建议精简表达并确保主语和动词一致。
× Then people use very WeChat to check and companies also use social platforms to organize virtual.
✓ People use WeChat a lot to check messages, and companies also use social platforms to organize virtual events.
原句中“use very WeChat”词序和副词位置错误,应为“use WeChat a lot”。“to organize virtual”不完整,需要补全为“virtual events”。建议注意副词位置和句子成分的完整性。
× For breaking news, breaking news I pre breaking news. I prefer getting information on websites because they are fast and up to date so I can catch the last developments.
✓ For breaking news, I prefer getting information from websites because they are fast and up to date, so I can catch the latest developments.
原句重复并且词汇使用不当。“prefer getting information on websites”较常用但更自然是“from websites”。“they are fast and up to date”指代“websites”可以,但“last developments”应为“latest developments”。建议注意用词搭配并避免重复。
× But for some in depth in depth understanding or background information I prefer books because they are always.
✓ But for some in-depth understanding or background information, I prefer books because they are more reliable and comprehensive.
原句重复“in depth in depth”且句尾不完整“because they are always.”需补全理由,如“more reliable and comprehensive”。建议避免重复,并给出完整的句子和理由。
× Yes, I would if I know how to start a website. I pray. I pray properly greeted, personal, uh, shows my project and blog, umm.
✓ Yes, I would if I knew how to start a website. I would like it to be properly designed, personal, and show my projects and blog.
条件句中时态错误,应在虚拟条件句使用过去时“if I knew”。原句“I pray”用词不当,应该使用“would like”或“want”。句子还需要整理为更明确的愿望表达。建议学习条件句的时态规则和使用恰当的情态动词表达愿望。
× What have you learned from websites that help with your life or studies? Student: Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah.
✓ What have you learned from websites that help with your life or studies? Student: I've learned useful study techniques and time-management tips from educational websites, and I also find practical life hacks and tutorials online that help me in daily life.
原句学生只重复“Yeah”不能回答问题,属于句子结构/回答内容缺失。需要提供具体学习内容作为回答。建议在回答时直接列举从网站学到的具体技能或知识,使用完整句子。