Websites— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答内容明确但有重复与语法问题。注意避免冗余（如 “and also chat on and also having chats”），使用更自然的表达并限制在最多五句内；可以增加具体例子或频率来丰富内容，同时使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I often visit social media sites such as Bilibili and YouTube because I can share interesting videos with my friends and comment on trending topics. I usually check them every day, especially in the evening, to relax and find short clips or tutorials.

Gợi ý: 表达有些不流畅，词汇使用不准确（例如“bilingually”应为网站名或类别），有重复（“I can I use it”）。应该先给出直接回答，然后用一两句具体原因或例子说明，使用连接词如“because”或“so”。

Ví dụ: My favourite website is YouTube because it hosts both long and short videos on many topics. I often use it like a search engine to learn new skills, such as cooking techniques or software tutorials.

Gợi ý: 观点清晰且有比较，但表达有小错误（“attention spending”应为“attention spans”），可以用更自然的连接词并补充具体例子说明“blending together”如何体现，例如直播带货或内嵌购买链接。

Ví dụ: Yes. Videos on social media are becoming shorter because people's attention spans are shrinking. Also, social platforms and shopping sites are merging—for example, livestream shopping and in-app product links make content more commercial.

Gợi ý: 内容合理但有重复和小语法错误（多余的“in here”），可更具体地列举几个平台并解释原因，用一两句概括并用连接词衔接。

Ví dụ: In China, social media apps like Douyin (TikTok) and short-video platforms are very popular, as well as big online shopping sites like Taobao. This is because fast delivery and convenient online payments suit busy lifestyles.

Gợi ý: 回答内容重复且有太多填充词（"you know", "umm"）。需要更精炼地表达偏好并给出一两个具体优点或例子，控制在五句内，避免口语化填充词。

Ví dụ: I prefer getting information from websites because they offer quick, visual explanations. For example, I learn new skills on YouTube or Bilibili through tutorial videos, which are faster to grasp than reading long chapters.

Gợi ý: 回答直接但语法不准确（“I haven't think”应为“I haven't thought”），内容重复（多次强调不擅长编码）。建议先直接回答，然后给出一两个具体原因并可提出替代方案（例如使用现成平台或请人帮忙）。

Ví dụ: I haven't thought about it, and I don't plan to create my own website because I study economics and lack coding skills. If I needed an online presence, I would use blogging platforms or hire a developer.

Gợi ý: 答案具体且有实例，但有语法和用词问题（“tuition fee”用于课程费可更自然，“skating skill like slalom and backwards”表达不够准确）。建议更流畅地描述学到的技能并说明具体效果或结果。

Ví dụ: I learned how to skate from online videos, which helped me save on expensive lessons. Before classes I watch tutorials on slalom and skating backwards so I can practice the basic moves at home.

× I usually visit social media websites like Bilibili or YouTube because I can share some interesting memes or videos with my friends and also chat on and also having chats on there.

✓ I usually visit social media websites like Bilibili or YouTube because I can share some interesting memes or videos with my friends and also chat there.

原句中出现“and also chat on and also having chats on there.”结构重复且混用了动词不定式/动名词短语。根据信息意图，应使用并列的动词不带介词：'chat there'。建议简化为'and also chat there'，避免重复和多余的介词。

× My favorite website, I think it's bilingually, it's a website like YouTube.

✓ My favorite website, I think it's Bilibili, it's a website like YouTube.

原句将'bilingually'误用为网站名称，且拼写/词类错误。应使用专有名词'Bilibili'（中文称哔哩哔哩）。同时保持句子主语一致。建议核对专有名词并直接使用正确名称。

× Everybody can share long videos or short videos. So I can I use it like a search engine and I can learn some educational or useful skills from that.

✓ Everybody can share long or short videos, so I can use it like a search engine and learn some educational or useful skills from it.

原句有冗余（'long videos or short videos'、'I can I use'）和代词不一致（最后用'that'指网站，但更自然用'it'）。合并并简化并列名词，删除重复的'I can'，保持并列动词形式一致。建议练习省略冗余词和保持代词一致。

× Yes, I often visit social media platforms and I think the videos are getting shorter because people's attention spending are getting shorter too.

✓ Yes, I often visit social media platforms and I think the videos are getting shorter because people's attention spans are getting shorter too.

原句中'noun phrase'错误：'attention spending'不自然，正确表达为'attention span(s)'。此外，主谓一致应使用'attention spans are'。建议记住固定搭配'attention span'并注意复数形式与谓语一致。

× Also, I think the online shopping websites and social media websites are blending together and it's becoming more commercial.

✓ Also, I think online shopping websites and social media websites are blending together and becoming more commercial.

原句中'it's becoming'多余且造成指代不明。直接用复数主语与复数谓语'are becoming'或省略主语用现在分词'becoming'都更自然。建议保持主语谓语一致或用并列结构简洁表达。

× I think in China, social media platforms like Tiktok are popular in here and also I think the online shopping websites are also massive in here because people are used to fast delivery and online payment.

✓ I think in China, social media platforms like TikTok are popular here, and online shopping websites are also very popular because people are used to fast delivery and online payment.

原句重复使用'in here'不自然；正确用法是'here'或'in my country'。另外'TikTok'拼写需注意，'massive'用来形容网站不合适，用'very popular'更自然。建议避免重复介词，使用合适形容词并注意专有名词拼写。

× I prefer getting information from websites, you know, because we are Generation Z. We are used to umm, searching information in YouTube or Bilibili because there are massive videos, umm, with accessible information that we can learn from skills or info.

✓ I prefer getting information from websites, you know, because we are Generation Z. We are used to searching for information on YouTube or Bilibili because there are many videos with accessible information that we can learn skills or useful information from.

原句中'searching information in YouTube'搭配错误，正确为'search for information on YouTube'；'massive videos'不地道，改为'many videos'或'a large number of videos'；'learn from skills or info'语序混乱，改为'learn skills or useful information'更清晰。建议记住动词search的搭配：search for ... on ...。

× Honestly, I haven't. I haven't think about it before, but I think I wouldn't like to have my own website because I major in the economy and I don't have a good skill at the coding. I'm not good at coding.

✓ Honestly, I haven't. I haven't thought about it before, but I don't think I'd like to have my own website because I major in economics and I don't have good coding skills. I'm not good at coding.

原句中'haven't think'时态错误，应为'haven't thought'（现在完成时的过去分词）；'major in the economy'搭配错误，应为'major in economics'；'a good skill at the coding'不自然，改为'good coding skills'。建议注意现在完成时需要过去分词，学科名词用复数形式或不可数形式，技能用复数名词并去掉多余冠词。

× I have learned skating from websites that helps me a lot.

✓ I have learned skating from websites that help me a lot.

原句中'relative clause'的动词与先行词不一致：'websites'为复数，关系从句谓语应为'help'而不是'helps'。建议注意主从句主语的人称数一致。

× You know the skating is expensive in tuition fee so I usually search the skating skill like slalom and backwards before I get ready to the class.

✓ You know skating lessons are expensive, so I usually search for skating skills like slalom and skating backwards before I get ready for class.

原句用词和介词多处不当：'expensive in tuition fee'不自然，改为'skating lessons are expensive'；'search the skating skill'应为'search for skating skills'；'backwards'用于动词搭配时应为'skating backwards'；'get ready to the class'改为'get ready for class'或'before class'。建议学习常用搭配：search for, get ready for, skating lessons, skating backwards。