Websites— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (countable/uncountable, verb forms), and give one or two specific examples using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases like “maintenance to.”

Ví dụ: I often visit YouTube. I use it mainly to watch language lessons and cooking or travel videos. For example, I follow an English channel to practice listening, and a chef’s channel to learn simple recipes.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, fix grammar and phrasing (e.g. “learn to play an instrument”, “people share”). Use linking words to organize reasons and a concrete example.

Ví dụ: My favourite website is YouTube because it offers a wide range of tutorials and vlogs. For instance, I watch channels that teach English and guitar lessons, and I also enjoy travel vlogs that inspire my trips.

Gợi ý: Be specific and correct grammar: use comparative forms, plural/singular, and more precise vocabulary (ads, intrusive). Add a consequence or opinion with linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes. Recently YouTube has more ads than before, so I often have to wait through several short advertisements before a video starts, which can be annoying and interrupts my learning.

Gợi ý: Start with a topic sentence and use correct punctuation and grammar. Use linking words to list examples and give a brief reason why they are popular (e.g. convenience, content variety).

Ví dụ: Streaming and video platforms are very popular in Taiwan. For example, many people use YouTube, Netflix, and Disney+ because they offer on-demand movies and shows for relaxing in their free time.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer (I prefer websites), correct articles and phrasing, and provide one clear, specific example. Avoid incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer getting information from websites because they are faster and more convenient. For example, when I had a problem with my smartphone’s BIOS settings, I quickly found step-by-step guides online instead of searching in books.

Gợi ý: Be concise and correct grammar (articles, word order). Give brief, specific reasons and maybe one condition that could change your mind. Use linking words to structure points (firstly, secondly, however).

Ví dụ: No, I probably would not. Firstly, I’m not an engineer and I don’t know how to manage a site. Secondly, maintaining a website seems time-consuming. However, I might consider it if I had technical help.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence, fix grammar and sentence endings, and give a specific example of a resource or channel and a clear result. Use linking words like “for example” and “as a result.”

Ví dụ: I’ve learned practical ways to improve my English writing from websites. For example, I watched YouTube lessons on common grammar mistakes, and as a result I now avoid several typical errors in my sentences.

× It provides different types of video for people such as learning a language, how to cooking and travel.

✓ It provides different types of videos for people, such as language lessons, cooking tutorials, and travel videos.

Countable noun 'video' must be plural when referring to multiple items. Also use parallel noun phrases: 'language lessons', 'cooking tutorials', 'travel videos' for clarity and grammatical consistency.

× But it make it bring different types of maintenance to.

✓ But it also brings different types of maintenance issues.

Subject 'it' (singular) requires the verb form 'brings' (third person singular). The original phrase 'make it bring different types of maintenance to' is ungrammatical and unclear; revise to 'also brings different types of maintenance issues' for meaning and correct agreement.

× My favorite website is YouTube because YouTube website provides different types of video including how to learn English or how to learn by themselves for instrument and also people they share their travel experience on YouTube website.

✓ My favorite website is YouTube because it provides different types of videos, including lessons on learning English, tutorials for learning to play instruments, and people sharing their travel experiences.

Use plural 'videos' for multiple items. Make gerund phrases parallel and natural: 'lessons on learning English', 'tutorials for learning to play instruments', and 'people sharing their travel experiences'. Remove redundant repetition of 'YouTube website'.

× I often visit YouTube website and I have found there are many advertisement than before.

✓ I often visit the YouTube website and I have found that there are more advertisements than before.

Use definite article 'the' with 'YouTube website'. 'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' when comparing quantity. Use comparative structure 'more ... than before' and include conjunction 'that' after 'found' for clarity.

× I have to watch several advertisement before start which is noisy.

✓ I have to watch several advertisements before it starts, which is noisy.

Use plural 'advertisements'. 'Before start' needs a subject and verb: 'before it starts'. The clause 'which is noisy' refers to the interruptions; consider revising to 'which is noisy and annoying' for clarity.

× such as YouTube or Netflix, Disney Plus people can choose their favorite platform to watch movie or video for relaxing their free time.

✓ such as YouTube, Netflix, or Disney Plus; people can choose their favorite platform to watch movies or videos to relax in their free time.

Add commas and conjunctions for correct list punctuation. Use plural 'movies'/'videos'. Use preposition 'to' with 'relax' and phrase 'in their free time' for natural English.

× Yes, I prefer getting information from website rather than books because it is convenient especially when I search BIOS smartphone.

✓ Yes, I prefer getting information from websites rather than books because it is convenient, especially when I search for smartphone BIOS information.

Use plural 'websites' for general reference. Include 'for' with 'search' ('search for'). Clarify noun phrase 'BIOS smartphone' to 'smartphone BIOS information'.

× For example when I was studying English, if I got some problem I can search from.

✓ For example, when I was studying English, if I had a problem I could search for a solution online.

Mix of tenses and missing object. Use past tense 'had' to match 'was studying'. Use modal 'could' for ability in past context or 'can' if present; include object 'for a solution' and specify 'online' for clarity.

× I don't think on my website it's very difficult and complicated.

✓ I don't think having my own website would be easy; it seems very difficult and complicated.

Original 'I don't think on my website it's...' misuses preposition and pronoun. Express opinion about owning a website with 'having my own website would be...' and contrast with 'would be easy'.

× Firstly, I am not a engineer.

✓ Firstly, I am not an engineer.

Use the indefinite article 'an' before words starting with a vowel sound ('engineer'), not 'a'.

× Secondly, I have no idea about how to manage a website.

✓ Secondly, I have no idea how to manage a website.

Remove unnecessary preposition 'about' after 'idea' when followed by an infinitive; 'idea how to' is the correct structure.

× I don't think it that is a easy way to maintain or do that.

✓ I don't think that is an easy way to maintain or manage a website.

Remove extraneous pronoun 'it' and use 'an' before vowel sound 'easy'. Clarify 'do that' to 'manage a website' for meaning.

× I learned some practical skill how to improve my English writing.

✓ I learned some practical skills on how to improve my English writing.

Use plural 'skills' for plural idea. Add preposition 'on' and 'how to' to form natural noun phrase 'skills on how to improve...'. Alternatively: 'I learned practical techniques for improving my English writing.'

× For example, I am struggling in some grammar problem.

✓ For example, I struggle with some grammar problems.

Use simple present 'I struggle' for habitual difficulty or 'I am struggling with some grammar problems' present continuous with 'with'. Use plural 'problems' and preposition 'with' instead of 'in'.

× However, I can do some research on YouTube website which can help me to improve my English skills and.

✓ However, I can do some research on YouTube, which can help me improve my English skills.

Remove trailing conjunction and redundant 'website'. Use 'which can help me improve' (no 'to' needed before verb 'improve'). Ensure sentence is complete and concise.