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Part 1

Giám khảo

What kinds of websites do you often visit?

Thí sinh

Social media websites such as write notes and Douyin because I can research everything on it. I think it is useful than the suffering and Baidu and I can also change with my friend on it. We share some videos and some post.

Giám khảo

What is your favourite website?

Thí sinh

The website of Xiaohongshu, because I think it is a useful website, I can browse any informations on it. I think it's more useful than search engines like Baidu, and I can share some posts with my friend. I think it's.

Giám khảo

Are there any changes to the websites you often visit?

Thí sinh

No, there are not any changes in this website. It is similar to the previous one and I think it did it. Don't need any big update, I think it's good for me.

Giám khảo

What kinds of websites are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I think the websites are WeChat and because we use the WeChat in our daily life and the Doughy is a entertainment website for everyone that we often share some funny videos to each other.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer getting information from websites or books?

Thí sinh

I prefer website because it more quickly and the environment. I can search and browse in the information on the website anywhere and anytime. But maybe I think the book is more correctly and exactly.

Giám khảo

Would you like to have your own website?

Thí sinh

I don't want to have my own website because I think I would spend a lot of time on maintain it and update it and I think it's stressful for me.

Giám khảo

What have you learned from websites that help with your life or studies?

Thí sinh

I use the website to study my languages test such as YouTube, I can find the native speakers, videos and blogs and I can learn a lot of oral expression on it and I also studied some cooking life skills on the website.

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Part 1

What kinds of websites do you often visit?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并且语法更准确;避免重复信息和不清晰的词语(例如“write notes”、“suffering”、“change”)。可以先给出主题句,然后用一两句具体细节说明常看哪类内容或与朋友如何互动。使用连接词使表达连贯。

Ví dụ: I often visit social media sites like Xiaohongshu and Douyin. I use them to find product reviews, watch short videos and keep up with friends. For example, I follow cooking and study accounts and often share interesting posts with my classmates.

What is your favourite website?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答应包含明确的主题句并提供具体原因。避免句子不完整或重复“I think”。可以比较并给出一两个具体用途作为支持细节。

Ví dụ: My favourite website is Xiaohongshu because it has user reviews and practical tips. For instance, I often read beauty and travel posts there, which are more personal and helpful than search results on Baidu.

Are there any changes to the websites you often visit?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答太模糊且语法错误较多。应该先直接回答“有”或“没有”,然后提供具体原因或例子来说明为什么没有变化或期待的变化。使用连接词使逻辑更清楚。

Ví dụ: Not really — the websites I use have stayed the same because they already meet my needs. For example, Xiaohongshu and Douyin keep providing short videos and reviews, so I don't expect major updates.

What kinds of websites are popular in your country?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答需要更准确地列举网站并说明受欢迎的原因。注意发音相似词拼写(Douyin),并使用连接词解释用途或功能。可以给出一两个例子说明人们如何使用这些网站。

Ví dụ: Popular websites in my country include WeChat and Douyin. People use WeChat for messaging, payments and news, while Douyin is popular for short entertaining videos that users share with friends.

Do you prefer getting information from websites or books?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答要先给出明确偏好,然后用具体比较支持意见。注意语法(comparative forms、articles)和用词准确(e.g. more quickly → faster; more correctly → more accurate)。尽量用一两句举例说明场景。

Ví dụ: I prefer getting information from websites because they are faster and available anytime on my phone. However, books are more reliable for in-depth study, so I use them for serious research.

Would you like to have your own website?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰,但可以用更自然的表达并给出具体理由或替代方案。注意动词形式和冠词(maintain it → maintaining it)。可以说明如果有网站会做什么或者如何减少负担。

Ví dụ: I wouldn't like to have my own website because maintaining and updating it would take a lot of time and stress me out. Instead, I prefer using social media where I can post quickly without managing a whole site.

What have you learned from websites that help with your life or studies?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容不错但需要更简洁并更有条理。先给主题句,再用连接词列举两三个具体学习内容或例子,避免长句中语法错误。

Ví dụ: Websites like YouTube have helped me improve my language skills because I can watch native speakers and learn common expressions. I have also learned cooking skills from tutorial videos, which saved me time and improved my daily life.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of verbs / sentence structure

× Social media websites such as write notes and Douyin because I can research everything on it.

Social media websites such as Xiaohongshu and Douyin, because I can find everything on them.

错误类型:句子结构与动词使用不当(26/8)。原句缺少主句谓语结构,且“write notes”用法不当,应使用具体网站名或“note-writing apps”。代词“it”与复数“websites”不一致,应使用“them”。建议把从句与主句连接成完整句子,并使主谓一致。

Incorrect use of comparison / adjectives

× I think it is useful than the suffering and Baidu and I can also change with my friend on it.

I think it is more useful than Sogou and Baidu, and I can also chat with my friends on it.

错误类型:比较错误与词汇使用不当(25/13)。比较级结构应为“more useful than”。原句“the suffering”应为“Sogou”(搜狗)或其他搜索引擎名;“change with my friend”应为“chat with my friends”。建议使用正确的比较结构和合适动词,并注意复数形式。

Incorrect use of plurality and articles

× We share some videos and some post.

We share some videos and some posts.

错误类型:单复数问题(1)。名词“post”在此应为复数“posts”。建议检查可数名词的单复数形式。

Incorrect use of articles and plurality

× The website of Xiaohongshu, because I think it is a useful website, I can browse any informations on it.

Xiaohongshu, because I think it is a useful website; I can browse information on it.

错误类型:冠词/词形(22/14)。“informations”为不可数名词,应用“information”。句子断裂,需用分号或连词使之完整。建议使用不可数名词形式并调整标点和句子结构。

Sentence structure / fragment

× I think it's more useful than search engines like Baidu, and I can share some posts with my friend. I think it's.

I think it's more useful than search engines like Baidu, and I can share some posts with my friends. I think so.

错误类型:句子结构与代词使用(26/12)。原句末尾“I think it's.”是残句,含义不完整。应改为“I think so”或补全内容。此外“my friend”应为复数“my friends”若指多位。建议避免残句并使代词指代清晰。

There be / negation and sentence structure

× No, there are not any changes in this website.

No, there are no changes to this website.

错误类型:There be/否定结构与介词使用(3/11)。通常用“there are no changes to”或“in”也可,但更常见搭配是“changes to this website”。建议使用更自然的否定结构并注意介词搭配。

Sentence structure / tense inconsistency

× It is similar to the previous one and I think it did it.

It is similar to the previous one and I think it doesn't need any big updates.

错误类型:句子结构与时态错误(26/6/7)。“I think it did it”不合语境,时态和表达不正确。应说明“不需要大更新”,用现在时“doesn't need”。建议根据语境使用合适时态并重写不清楚的短语。

Sentence fragment / pronoun usage

× Don't need any big update, I think it's good for me.

It doesn't need any big updates; I think it's good for me.

错误类型:句子无谓语/结构错误与单复数(23/1)。原句“Don't need any big update”缺主语。应补主语“It doesn't need...”。“update”用复数“updates”更自然。建议每句都包含主语和谓语,并注意名词复数。

Incorrect use of conjunctions / sentence structure

× I think the websites are WeChat and because we use the WeChat in our daily life and the Doughy is a entertainment website for everyone that we often share some funny videos to each other.

I think popular websites are WeChat and Douyin, because we use WeChat in our daily life. Douyin is an entertainment website where we often share funny videos with each other.

错误类型:连词使用不当与句子结构(16/26)。原句连词混乱且信息堆砌,应拆成两句或多句。注意冠词“a entertainment”应为“an entertainment”或更自然地删去。建议将复杂句拆分并使用正确连词与介词短语。

Article and adverb placement

× I prefer website because it more quickly and the environment.

I prefer websites because they are faster and more convenient.

错误类型:冠词/代词与副词位置(22/12/20)。“prefer website”应为复数或加冠词;“it more quickly and the environment”语法混乱,应该表达“更快、更方便”。建议使用形容词“faster, more convenient”并保持主谓一致。

Sentence structure and article use

× I can search and browse in the information on the website anywhere and anytime.

I can search for and browse information on websites anywhere and anytime.

错误类型:介词与句子结构(11/26)。不要说“browse in the information”;正确说法是“search for”或直接“browse information”。将“the website”改为复数或去冠词更自然。建议搭配正确动词短语并保持一致。

Adjective use / word choice

× But maybe I think the book is more correctly and exactly.

But I think books are more accurate and precise.

错误类型:形容词/副词用法错误(13)。“more correctly and exactly”用副词形式错误,应使用形容词“accurate”和“precise”来修饰名词“books”。建议用形容词并把名词改为复数以匹配语境。

Modal verb and gerund usage

× I don't want to have my own website because I think I would spend a lot of time on maintain it and update it and I think it's stressful for me.

I don't want to have my own website because I think I would spend a lot of time maintaining and updating it, and that would be stressful for me.

错误类型:情态动词与动名词(4/8)。“spend time on maintain it”应用动名词“maintaining”,且不需要“on”。句子过长,建议用逗号分开并用“that would be”引导结果。

Verb tense and article use

× I use the website to study my languages test such as YouTube, I can find the native speakers, videos and blogs and I can learn a lot of oral expression on it and I also studied some cooking life skills on the website.

I use websites to study for language tests, for example YouTube. I can find native speakers, videos and blogs and learn a lot of spoken expressions on them. I have also learned some cooking and life skills from websites.

错误类型:时态/冠词/复数与结构(6/22/1/26)。需用复数“websites”,搭配“study for language tests”。“oral expression”更自然为“spoken expressions”。句子中“studied”与上下文时态不一致,改为现在完成时“have learned”更合适。建议将长句拆分,使用一致时态并注意可数/不可数形式。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BigLarge; Elder; Important; Ambitious
FunnyAmusing; Strange; Suspicious
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
UsefulFunctional; Beneficial
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