Part 1
Giám khảo
What kinds of websites do you often visit?
Thí sinh
I usually visit educational website especially online learning platforms that are offer useful materials for improving my English such as grammar, exercise and listening practice. So I use day almost every day.
Giám khảo
What is your favourite website?
Thí sinh
My favorite website is Billy Billy. It has a lot of useful materials for me improving English such as listening practice and grammar exercise, so I use it almost everyone.
Giám khảo
Are there any changes to the websites you often visit?
Thí sinh
It's the websites I visited have changed recently. They updated layout and I did the recommendations because they want to keep her users engaged and for example my new search now suggests articles based on what I read.
Giám khảo
What kinds of websites are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
The media platforms are widely used in my country since people can message or make a verse in video calls to stay in touch. It also popular because it offers extra service like a pay, mobile payment and mini program.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer getting information from websites or books?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I prefer getting information from websites because they are fast and easy to search. For example, I need online articles when I need a quick facts.
Giám khảo
Would you like to have your own website?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have my own website. I usually use it to post my daily life and to document my travels. For example, recently I uploaded photos in a shorter travel diary from a trip to Yunnan.
Giám khảo
What have you learned from websites that help with your life or studies?
Thí sinh
I usually used it to learn English. They have a lot of useful materials for improving my English, such as grammar, essays and listening practice.
What kinds of websites do you often visit?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、语法准确并且简洁。开头直接点明类型,然后用一到两句具体说明并用连接词衔接。注意单复数、时态和冠词错误,并避免冗长重复。
Ví dụ: I often visit educational websites, especially online learning platforms. They offer useful materials for improving my English, such as grammar explanations, exercises and listening practice, so I use them almost every day.
What is your favourite website?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要更准确并避免错误短语。先给出直接回答,然后用一到两句具体理由支持。注意代词和频率表达("almost everyone" 应为 "almost every day" 或类似)。
Ví dụ: My favourite website is Billy Billy. It provides many resources for improving English, such as listening exercises and grammar practice, so I visit it almost every day.
Are there any changes to the websites you often visit?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 句子结构混乱且有代词错误。先明确回答(有或没有),然后具体列举变化并用连接词说明原因或举例。注意时态一致和代词(their/users)正确使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, the websites I visit have changed recently. They updated their layout and algorithms to keep users engaged; for example, my search now suggests articles based on what I read.
What kinds of websites are popular in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 表达应更自然并使用恰当词汇。先给出总体类别,再具体说明流行原因并举例。注意词汇选择("social media platforms", "video calls", "payment services")和语法一致性。
Ví dụ: Social media platforms are very popular in my country because people can message, make video calls and share content. They are also popular due to extra services like mobile payments and mini-programs.
Do you prefer getting information from websites or books?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答直接明了,可以加入比较和具体例子。注意小错误(a quick facts -> quick facts / a quick fact)并把句子控制在几句内。
Ví dụ: I prefer getting information from websites because they are faster and easier to search than books. For example, I often look up online articles when I need quick facts for a project.
Would you like to have your own website?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答清晰但可更自然地表达用途并注意搭配。保持简洁并用1-2个具体例子说明内容类型和频率。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have my own website where I post about my daily life and document my travels. For example, I recently uploaded photos and a short travel diary from a trip to Yunnan.
What have you learned from websites that help with your life or studies?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要用现在时并更具体地说明学到的技能或成果。先直接回答,然后举一两个具体例子说明如何帮助学习或生活。
Ví dụ: I use websites to learn English, which has helped me improve my grammar and listening skills. For instance, online listening exercises and essay samples have made my writing clearer and my comprehension better.
× I usually visit educational website especially online learning platforms that are offer useful materials for improving my English such as grammar, exercise and listening practice. So I use day almost every day.
✓ I usually visit educational websites, especially online learning platforms that offer useful materials for improving my English, such as grammar exercises and listening practice. So I use them almost every day.
问题类型:数量词/复数使用错误。原因:名词“website”和“exercise”在泛指复数时应使用复数形式“websites”和“exercises”;从句中多余的助动词“are”应删除;代词“them”用于替代前面的复数名词“websites”;短语“use day almost every day”顺序和词选择错误,改为“use them almost every day”。建议:注意可数名词的单复数一致,当说泛指多种网站或练习时用复数;检查多余或错误的助动词;用恰当的代词指代前文名词。
× My favorite website is Billy Billy. It has a lot of useful materials for me improving English such as listening practice and grammar exercise, so I use it almost everyone.
✓ My favorite website is Billy Billy. It has a lot of useful materials to help me improve my English, such as listening practice and grammar exercises, so I use it almost every day.
问题类型:代词和短语使用错误。原因:短语“for me improving English”不自然,需改为“不定式结构”或“to help me improve my English”;“grammar exercise”应为复数“grammar exercises”;“almost everyone”错误地使用指人词,应为时间短语“almost every day”。建议:用不定式表达目的或结果;可数名词复数一致;区分指人(everyone)和指时间(every day)。
× It's the websites I visited have changed recently. They updated layout and I did the recommendations because they want to keep her users engaged and for example my new search now suggests articles based on what I read.
✓ The websites I visit(Have)/visited have changed recently. They updated the layout and made recommendations because they want to keep their users engaged. For example, my new search now suggests articles based on what I read.
问题类型:句子结构错误/时态与指代混乱。原因:原句“It’s the websites I visited have changed recently”结构不通顺,改为“The websites I visited/have visited have changed recently”;“They updated layout”缺少定冠词“the layout”;“I did the recommendations”应为“made recommendations”且主语应是网站(they),而不是“I”;代词“her users”错误,应为“their users”;句子过长需分句并用连接词或举例标注。建议:保持主语一致,注意时态一致性(visited vs have visited),使用正确动词短语(make recommendations),代词与先行词性数一致,并将长句拆分为更清晰的句子。
× The media platforms are widely used in my country since people can message or make a verse in video calls to stay in touch. It also popular because it offers extra service like a pay, mobile payment and mini program.
✓ Media platforms are widely used in my country since people can message or make voice or video calls to stay in touch. They are also popular because they offer extra services like online payment, mobile payment and mini programs.
问题类型:介词和词汇使用错误。原因:“make a verse in video calls”词不当,应为“make voice or video calls”;“It also popular”缺少系动词,应为“They are also popular”;“offers extra service like a pay”表达不准确,改为“offer extra services like online payment, mobile payment and mini programs”;原因代词与主语数不一致,需用复数形式。建议:注意固定搭配(voice call/video call),主系表结构中使用系动词,复数名词与动词一致,以及使用恰当名词表示服务类型。
× Yeah, I prefer getting information from websites because they are fast and easy to search. For example, I need online articles when I need a quick facts.
✓ Yeah, I prefer getting information from websites because they are fast and easy to search. For example, I use online articles when I need quick facts.
问题类型:现在时态和冠词使用。原因:“I need online articles when I need a quick facts”结构重复且冠词错误,“a quick facts”应为“quick facts”或“a quick fact”;同时更自然的表达是“use online articles when I need quick facts”;保持现在时态一致。建议:注意不可数或复数名词的冠词使用,避免重复相同词(need ... need),改用更自然的动词如“use”。
× Yes, I have my own website. I usually use it to post my daily life and to document my travels. For example, recently I uploaded photos in a shorter travel diary from a trip to Yunnan.
✓ Yes, I have my own website. I usually use it to post about my daily life and to document my travels. For example, recently I uploaded photos in a short travel diary from a trip to Yunnan.
问题类型:There be/短语用法及形容词顺序问题。原因:“post my daily life”更自然为“post about my daily life”;“a shorter travel diary”中“shorter”比较级无对比对象,改为“a short travel diary”;介词“in a short travel diary”可接受,但更自然的是“as a short travel diary”或“in a short travel diary”都可。建议:避免不必要的比较级,选择恰当介词并使用习惯搭配,如“post about”。
× I usually used it to learn English. They have a lot of useful materials for improving my English, such as grammar, essays and listening practice.
✓ I usually use it to learn English. It has a lot of useful materials for improving my English, such as grammar, essays and listening practice.
问题类型:时态与代词一致性问题。原因:开头“I usually used it”使用了过去式“used”而句子语境为习惯性现在,应为“I usually use it”;后句中代词应与单数网站一致,用“It has”而不是“They have”。建议:根据语境区分一般现在时和过去时;保持代词与先行词在数上的一致性(单数用 it/has,复数用 they/have)。