Websites— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答能传达意思，但句子结构较松散，缺少明确主题句和连接词；内容较冗长且有重复（"online"重复）。建议先一句直接回应（I often visit video-sharing websites），然后用一到两句具体说明原因并用连接词衔接，控制在不超过5句内，注意时态和冠词使用。

Ví dụ: I often visit video-sharing websites. Because I can't travel everywhere myself, I like watching travel and lifestyle videos to see other people's experiences, which gives me ideas and inspiration.

Gợi ý: 表达含义清楚但不够流畅，有重复与语法问题（如句子碎片、时态和冠词错误）。建议先给出明确回答（My favourite website is Bilibili），然后用两句说明原因和功能，使用连接词如 because / so / for example，并注意句子完整性。

Ví dụ: My favourite website is Bilibili. Because YouTube is not easily accessible here, Bilibili serves as a legal alternative. It offers communities for ACG and daily life content, so I can discuss interests with others.

Gợi ý: 回答结构较好但部分句子有冗长或不自然表达（"catching on the trends" 用法不准）。建议用一到两句对比过去和现在，使用连接词（e.g. however, now）并把动词时态与意图表述清楚。

Ví dụ: Yes. When I was a child I mainly watched long movies on traditional streaming sites like Tencent Video. However, now I follow current trends and use Bilibili to watch short videos and share my opinions online.

Gợi ý: 意思明确但表达有重复和语法错误（复数、冠词和句子连贯性）。建议先总述（Video platforms are popular），接着说明原因并给具体细节或数据，如果说年龄群体要注意复数形式和更自然的连词。

Ví dụ: Video-sharing platforms are very popular in my country. Many teenagers post both long and short videos to share their daily lives, so sites like Bilibili attract a large number of users.

Gợi ý: 观点清晰，但存在语法错误（重复“the the”、informations不可数）、表达可更简洁。建议先直接回答，然后用because和while分别给出两点支持，注意名词不可数形式和句子流畅。

Ví dụ: I prefer getting information from websites because they provide up-to-date news and the latest developments. However, I still use books for historical or academic topics because they are more formal and reliable.

Gợi ý: 回答直接且内容具体，但有少量语法和词汇选择问题（"the buses" 不需要定冠词，"that I shot" 可更自然）。建议一开始肯定回答，然后具体说明网站内容和目标用户，用连接词补充目的或功能。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. I make videos about trains and buses, so I want to create a website to share my photos and videos. The site would also include a public forum where viewers can discuss and give feedback.

Gợi ý: 回答包含信息但表达有些笨拙与语法错误（如时态、搭配和冗长句子）。建议先概括收获（I learned practical skills and academic knowledge），再举一两个具体例子并用连接词说明效果或频率，句子不超过5句。

Ví dụ: I have learned both practical skills and academic knowledge from experts online. For example, I take weekend online lessons in math, chemistry, and physics, which help me improve my grades and understand difficult topics better.

× Video website I think I like watching videos online to see other people's life and traveling with them online as I can't get to every corner of the world only by myself.

✓ I like watching videos online to see other people's lives and travel with them virtually, because I can't go to every corner of the world by myself.

原句中存在動名詞及動詞形式使用不當問題：" Video website I think" 是片語堆疊且影響句子結構；"people's life" 應為複數 "people's lives"；"traveling with them online" 在語境上更自然的表達是動詞不定式或原形 "travel with them virtually"。建議：把句子主語和動作清晰化，使用正確的名詞複數形式，將動名詞/動詞形式調整為與語境一致的表達。

× Billy Billy. It is also called the YouTube version in China. Since we can't use YouTube, YouTube under a legal way in China, Bilibili is a good alternative. Offer us a platform to talk about ACG or our daily lives.

✓ Bilibili. It's often called the Chinese version of YouTube. Since we can't use YouTube legally in China, Bilibili is a good alternative. It offers us a platform to talk about ACG or our daily lives.

原句中多處句子片段化且冠詞與句子結構混亂："the YouTube version in China" 更自然為 "the Chinese version of YouTube"；"YouTube under a legal way in China" 結構錯誤，應表達為 "use YouTube legally in China"。另外句子"Offer us..." 缺少主語。建議：使用完整句子並將名詞短語改為常用的介詞搭配（"the ... of ..."），補上主語。

× Yes, when I was a child, I tended to watch videos, especially long videos or movies on traditional streaming platforms like Tencent Videos. But now as I am catching on the trends so I will use Bilibili to share my points and opinions online.

✓ When I was a child, I tended to watch videos, especially long videos or movies on traditional streaming platforms like Tencent Video. But now, as I'm following trends, I use Bilibili to share my opinions online.

原句時態與習慣表達有不一致：開頭描述過去使用過去時正確，但後半句從"as I am catching on the trends so I will use" 使用了不自然的現在進行和未來式混合。更合適的是用一般現在時表達現在的習慣（"I use"）。另外服務名稱應為單數形式如 "Tencent Video"。建議：描述現在的常規行為使用一般現在時，避免在一句話中不必要地混合多種時態。

× Just like Bilibili offers streaming services and uh, both long and short videos in my country because teenager likes to share their daily things online and in our country teenager accounts for a larger proportion. So there are many users of Bilibili.

✓ Bilibili offers streaming services, both long and short videos, in my country because teenagers like to share their daily lives online, and teenagers make up a large proportion of the population. So there are many Bilibili users.

原句中介詞和詞語搭配不當："accounts for a larger proportion" 需要表達"佔較大比例"，常用動詞短語為 "make up a large proportion"；"teenager likes" 主謂不一致且單複數錯誤，應為 "teenagers like"；"daily things" 不自然，應為 "daily lives" 或 "daily activities"。建議：注意複數形式和常用搭配，選擇自然的名詞短語。

× I prefer getting information from websites because it tells us some current news and the the most cutting edge informations, while I also get some historic information from books because it is more formal and scientific.

✓ I prefer getting information from websites because they provide current news and the most cutting-edge information, while I get historical information from books because they are more formal and reliable.

原句中形容詞/副詞及名詞形式使用不當："it tells us" 指代不明，website 應使用複數或用 "they"；"the the" 有重複；"informations" 為不可數名詞應為 "information"；"cutting edge" 作為形容詞時需用連字符 "cutting-edge"；"historic" 表示有歷史意義，應用於表示"歷史相關的"時用 "historical"，而書籍作為複數應用 "they are"。建議：注意不可數名詞的用法、代詞指代一致以及形容詞連字符。

× Yes, I would. Honestly speaking, I am a video producer that shares videos about trains and the buses. I want to create a platform that can share my photos and the videos that I shot online and create an open chat atmosphere.

✓ Yes, I would. Honestly, I am a video producer who makes videos about trains and buses. I want to create a platform to share my photos and videos that I shoot online and to create an open, chatty atmosphere.

原句中情態動詞使用本身無誤，但其他動詞和關係詞使用不當："that shares" 應改為關係代詞 "who" 指人；"the buses" 冠詞不必要；"that I shot" 時態可用現在式描述經常性行為 "that I shoot"；"create an open chat atmosphere" 語序與詞選較生硬，可改為 "open, chatty atmosphere"。建議：用"who"指人，保持動詞時態一致以表達習慣性動作，並用自然的形容詞搭配。

× Actually there are many professionals in the fields like study, technology and some parts of our daily lives. I learned a lot of knowledge from them such as I even can have online math, chemistry and physics lessons and that help my study when in weekends.

✓ Actually, there are many professionals in fields like education and technology who cover parts of our daily lives. I have learned a lot from them; for example, I can even take online math, chemistry, and physics lessons, and that helps my studies on weekends.

原句時態與用詞混用不當："I learned" 用過去式可能暗示一次性事件，但句意是持續性的學習，應用現在完成時 "I have learned"；"study" 作為名詞時複數通常用 "studies"；"when in weekends" 為不正確介詞搭配，應為 "on weekends"；"I even can have" 語序不自然，應為 "I can even take"。建議：描述持續性經驗用現在完成時，注意正確的介詞搭配和詞序。