Websites— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然、结构更清晰，并减少冗余。先给主题句然后用一两句具体细节支持，使用连词使句子连贯，注意词汇与语法（如复数、时态、冠词）正确。比如把“about others, beautiful pictures and the daily life”改为更具体的内容，并避免重复“share”和“happy”。

Ví dụ: I usually visit TikTok. It has many short videos about travel, cooking and everyday life, which I find entertaining and inspiring. I often save or share my favorite clips with friends so we can talk about them later.

Gợi ý: 回答冗长且有重复。应先直接回答，然后给一到两点具体原因并用连词连接。注意简洁表达和语法（如“not only... but also”结构、动词形式和短语搭配）。

Ví dụ: My favourite website is TikTok. Not only does it offer entertaining short videos, but it also has educational clips where I can learn new skills. I sometimes share useful or funny videos with friends.

Gợi ý: 表达含糊且有语法错误。应先直接回答有变化，然后举出具体变化并用连词（e.g. because, as a result）说明原因。注意用词准确（例如“long teaching videos”改为“longer educational videos”）并把拼写纠正。

Ví dụ: Yes, they have changed. Previously TikTok mainly had short clips about daily life, but now, because of better technology and demand for learning, many users upload longer educational videos and tutorials.

Gợi ý: 回答有观点但组织不够清晰，重复“think”。应先给主题句，然后用一两条具体原因支持，并注意逻辑连词与句子通顺。把“the education”改为“education websites”或删除不相关短语。

Ví dụ: Entertainment websites are the most popular in my country. Many people use them to relax after work, and short humorous videos help reduce stress. Educational websites are also used, but less for relaxation.

Gợi ý: 总体表达清楚但句子冗长且有语法问题。应先直接回答，然后给两点明确理由并用连词连接。避免重复表述并注意名词搭配（e.g. “finding information from books”）。

Ví dụ: I prefer websites. They are more convenient and faster to search than books, especially now with AI-powered tools that help me find up-to-date information quickly.

Gợi ý: 回答直接但有语法和表达错误（如“seem funding”）。应先回答然后给具体原因，用连词连接并尽量精简。可以给出替代方案或条件（e.g. if I had help）。

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't. Building and maintaining a website would take a lot of time and technical skill, which I currently lack. I might consider it in the future if I could get professional help.

Gợi ý: 内容具体但有多处语言错误（如网站名应为 Bilibili、‘men's skills’不合适、时态不一致）。应先回答主题句，再给具体学习内容与效果，使用正确词汇和过去时态描述已发生的事。

Ví dụ: When I was at university, I often watched educational videos on Bilibili. I learned study techniques and subject knowledge from those tutorials, which helped me perform better on exams.

× I often visit the website named TikTok because there are a lot of interesting short videos on it about others, beautiful pictures and the daily life.

✓ I often visit the website TikTok because there are a lot of interesting short videos on it about other people, beautiful pictures, and daily life.

句中“about others”用法不当，应改为“about other people（关于其他人）”。另外“the daily life”中定冠词“the”不需要，改为“daily life”。建议多用固定搭配：about other people / about daily life。

× I also share them with my friends so that I can feel happy.

✓ I also share them with my friends so that I can feel happy.

原句语法上基本正确，但“so that I can feel happy”在口语中可简化为“to make me happy”。这里提示代词用法没有错误，仅建议更自然的表达：I also share them with my friends to make me happy。

× Actually my favorite website is named Tiktok because I not only can watch some short interesting videos on it and I also can watch some learning videos to learn knowledge and sometimes I also share the interesting videos with my friends to keep with other.

✓ Actually my favorite website is TikTok because not only can I watch short interesting videos on it, but I can also watch educational videos to learn, and sometimes I share interesting videos with my friends to stay in touch with them.

原句存在句子结构混乱（not only ... and ... 应与 but 结构配对），词汇使用不当（learning videos to learn knowledge → educational videos / learn），以及短语错误（keep with other → stay in touch with them）。建议掌握固定结构：not only ... but also ...；使用正确搭配：educational videos / stay in touch with someone。

× Yes, of course in the past there are just some short videos on the TikTok about People's Daily life vilored and others.

✓ Yes, of course in the past there were only some short videos on TikTok about people's daily lives and other topics.

句中谈论过去情形，应使用过去时态“were”而不是现在时“are”；“just”位置和“only”更自然；“People's Daily life vilored”是错误拼写和用法，改为“people's daily lives and other topics”。建议注意时态一致性和拼写正确。

× But with the development of technology there are more long teaching videos about learnings so.

✓ But with the development of technology there are more long instructional videos for learning now.

原句“about learnings”不自然，应为“for learning”或“about learning”；句尾的“so”多余。时态为现在完成的趋势，用现在时描述现状可以，但要用合适名词和修饰语：instructional videos / for learning / now。建议学习名词搭配和句尾连词用法。

× I think the most popular website in my country is about entertainment because I think under too much pressure people want to watch some interesting videos after work and the education, it will make them happy.

✓ I think the most popular websites in my country are about entertainment because when people are under too much pressure they want to watch interesting videos after work, and educational content can also make them happy.

原句形容词、副词和结构使用混乱：主语应为复数“websites”或改写为“types of websites”；“under too much pressure”需要完整从句“when people are under too much pressure”；“the education”用法不当，应为“educational content”。建议注意主谓一致和形容词/名词搭配（educational content）。

× I prefer getting information from the website because I think it is very convenient and the finding information from the books will cost me a lot of time and with the development of AI I can find information more quickly and easily.

✓ I prefer getting information from websites because I think it is very convenient; finding information in books would take me a lot of time, and with the development of AI I can find information more quickly and easily.

原句时态和表达需调整：比较现在偏好与假设耗时用“would take”；“the finding information from the books”不自然，改为“finding information in books”。建议区分一般现在（prefer）和对过去/假设情况的描述（would）。

× Actually I wouldn't because I seem funding my own website will cost me a lot of time and efforts and I think I'm not good at computer skills so I think it is difficult for me to have my own website.

✓ Actually I wouldn't because I feel founding my own website would cost me a lot of time and effort, and I don't think I'm good at computer skills, so I think it would be difficult for me to have my own website.

原句中“seem funding”用法错误，应该是“I feel founding”或“I think founding”；时态与情态动词不一致，使用“would”更符合假设语气；“efforts”在此处用单数“effort”更自然；“good at computer skills”应为“good at computer skills”或更自然的“good with computers”。建议学习感受动词用法和虚拟/假设结构。

× When I was in university, I always watched some learning videos on the website named Billy Billy.

✓ When I was at university, I always watched some learning videos on the website called Bilibili.

“in university”在英式英语常用“at university”；网站名拼写错误“Billy Billy”应为“Bilibili”。此句本身过去习惯用过去时“watched”正确。建议注意固定搭配和专有名词拼写。

× I learn a lot of men's skills and knowledge on it, so it helped me a lot to pass by the examination.

✓ I learned a lot of practical skills and knowledge on it, so it helped me a lot to pass the exam.

原句时态不一致（前半句用一般现在“learn”，后半句用过去“helped”），应统一为过去时“learned”；“men's skills”用法错误，改为“practical skills”或“useful skills”；“pass by the examination”不正确，应为“pass the exam”。建议注意时态一致、词汇搭配和固定短语（pass an exam）。