Websites— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct, accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence naming the main types of websites you visit (e.g., learning sites and sports sites). Use correct verbs and vocabulary (e.g., "visiting" not "wasting", "skills" not "eyes skills"). Add one or two specific details using linking words (for example, "for practicing all four skills") but keep to a maximum of 3–4 short sentences. Work on pronunciation and avoid filler words like "uh".

Ví dụ: I often visit two kinds of websites: English-learning sites and football sites. For English, I use sites that help me practice speaking, writing, reading and listening. I also visit a football site called FlicksCase to read match summaries and news.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear topic sentence stating the website and why you like it. Use correct grammar for present simple ("publishes" not "publish") and avoid repetition. Provide one or two specific features (e.g., live scores, club info) and use linking words such as "also" or "moreover" to connect ideas. Keep sentences short and fluent.

Ví dụ: My favorite website is footmob.com because it provides live scores and match results. It also has detailed information about clubs and players, which helps me follow games closely.

Gợi ý: Answer directly: say whether there have been changes and give specific examples. Use correct tense and vocabulary ("There have been several changes recently"). Avoid unclear phrases like "they're hard" and "smoke". Use linking words ("for example", "also") and give concrete details about new features. Limit to 2–3 sentences and remove fillers.

Ví dụ: Yes, there have been several changes recently to the sites I use. For example, FlicksCase redesigned its layout and added features like player maps and career statistics, which make it easier to track players' progress.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear, concise statement about popular websites (e.g., "news sites are most popular"). Avoid repetition and use correct expressions ("latest information" not "getting latest information"). Support your answer with a specific reason and one short example. Use a linking word like "because" to show cause.

Ví dụ: In my country, news websites are the most popular because people want quick access to the latest information about developments and government decisions. For example, many people visit local news portals to follow political and economic updates.

Gợi ý: Give a direct preference (websites or books) in the first sentence. Use correct grammar and avoid repetition ("I would I would"). Explain one strong reason and, if possible, add a short contrast with the other option using a linking word like "although". Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer getting information from websites because they are updated in real time and easier to search. Although books are more reliable for in-depth study, I use websites when I need quick, recent information.

Gợi ý: Answer clearly "Yes" or "No" first and then describe the purpose and main features of your website. Use correct vocabulary and simple, coherent sentences. Explain one or two concrete features (e.g., AI tracking, live stats) and link them with words like "so" or "for example". Avoid unclear phrases and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to create a website combining football and AI. For example, it would provide live match data and use AI-powered cameras to analyze player movements and statistics, helping fans and coaches track performance.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence about a specific thing you learned online. State one or two concrete examples (e.g., Excel functions, study strategies) and explain briefly how they helped you, using linking words like "for example" or "as a result". Remove fillers and unclear fragments, and keep to 2–3 clear sentences.

Ví dụ: I have learned useful study strategies and Excel techniques from websites. For example, I learned how to use Excel formulas to organize data, which saved me time on assignments, and I discovered reading methods that improved my comprehension.

× In the last month, I have been wasting websites for learning English, practicing my eyes skills like speaking, writing, reading and listening.

✓ In the last month, I have been visiting websites for learning English, practicing my language skills like speaking, writing, reading and listening.

The student used 'wasting websites' which is incorrect; 'visit' in present perfect continuous takes the present participle 'visiting'. Also 'eyes skills' is wrong collocation; correct is 'language skills'. Use 'have been visiting' to indicate continuous action over the last month.

× Other than that, I would often uh open website named Flick's case and that website is for releasing.

✓ Other than that, I often open a website called Flick's Case, which is for releases.

Use of 'I would often' is unnecessary modal here; 'often' alone is sufficient. 'website named' should be 'a website called'. 'that website is for releasing' is ungrammatical; 'which is for releases' or 'which publishes releases' conveys intended meaning. Also add the indefinite article 'a' before 'website'.

× My favorite website isfootmob.com. It even features an app for it.

✓ My favorite website is footmob.com. It even has an app.

Missing space after 'is'. 'features an app for it' is awkward; simply say 'has an app'. No article needed before the domain name. Keep sentences concise.

× It usually publish it publish the results of latest matches, football matches.

✓ It usually publishes the results of the latest football matches.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it' requires third person singular 'publishes' not 'publish'. Also remove redundant repetition and add the definite article 'the' before 'latest'.

× Moreover, you can search more information about football clubs or plays on the website.

✓ Moreover, you can search for more information about football clubs or players on the website.

Use 'search for' rather than 'search' alone when followed by 'information'. 'plays' is incorrect noun; correct word is 'players'.

× Of course they're hard.

✓ Of course they are there.

Original 'they're hard' makes no sense in context. Likely intended 'there are' to indicate existence of changes: 'Of course, there are' or simply 'Of course, there have been changes.' Use proper pronoun/verb forms.

× There have been multiple change changes in the last months and on the website I visit mostly, for example, flex case change.

✓ There have been multiple changes in the last months on the website I visit most; for example, Flick's Case changed its design.

Pluralization: 'change' should be 'changes'. 'last months' is acceptable but consider 'the last few months'. 'flex case change' is unclear; likely meant 'Flick's Case changed'. Use past tense 'changed' for completed change.

× This whole site design and smoke added new features like, uh, the map of the player or the career.

✓ The whole site design was updated and they added new features like a player map and career statistics.

Original is ungrammatical and unclear. Use passive 'was updated' or active 'they updated the site design' and clarify 'smoke' is wrong word; likely 'also' or 'site' added features. Use parallel nouns 'player map and career statistics'.

× Most popular sites I would say are news news sites as people use it for getting latest information about our country, what type of developments and changes have been made.

✓ The most popular sites, I would say, are news sites because people use them to get the latest information about our country and the developments that have taken place.

Missing articles 'the most popular'; repeated 'news'. Pronoun agreement: 'sites... use them' not 'it'. Use infinitive 'to get' not 'for getting'. Use 'the latest' and rephrase 'what type of developments and changes have been made' to 'the developments that have taken place'.

× Is the technology develops more and more people start to use websites and mobile devices more and I would I would also use websites more because you can track recent news easily and.

✓ As technology develops more and more, people start to use websites and mobile devices more, and I also use websites more because you can track recent news easily.

Sentence fragment and word order issues. Begin with 'As technology develops' not 'Is the technology develops'. Remove repeated 'I would'. Eliminate trailing conjunction and complete the sentence.

× Then cover some Sudan are probable crater upside in the future.

✓ It might cover some Sudanese content or probable crater updates in the future.

Original sentence is unintelligible and has many structural errors. 'Sudan' should be adjective 'Sudanese' if describing content. 'Probable crater upside' is unclear; suggested 'probable crater updates' but author should clarify intended meaning.

× I would say it will consist of con combination of football and AI itself.

✓ I would say it will consist of a combination of football and AI.

Typo 'con combination' should be 'a combination'. Remove redundant 'itself' after 'AI'. Include indefinite article 'a' before 'combination'.

× You can keep track of recent data about football matches while the camera observes everything on the pitch.

✓ You can keep track of recent data about football matches while cameras observe everything on the pitch.

'the camera observes' is acceptable but 'cameras observe' sounds more natural for continuous monitoring; adjust if singular camera intended. Ensure subject matches intended meaning.

× As umm, who's I also exercise lately, I would say the things I learned from the websites are the.

✓ As I have also been exercising lately, I would say the things I learned from websites are the following:

Original contains 'who's' which is incorrect pronoun. Use present perfect continuous 'have been exercising' to express recent activity. End with a colon or continue with list; avoid trailing 'the'.

× Strategies I could use in Excel or theories. Moreover scheme of methods that use in readings.

✓ Strategies I could use in Excel and theories. Moreover, schemes of methods used in reading.

Fragmented phrases. 'Strategies I could use in Excel' is fine; 'or theories' is vague. 'scheme of methods that use in readings' should be 'schemes of methods used in reading' or better rephrase for clarity. Ensure verbs agree and nouns are plural where needed.