Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you wear a watch?
Thí sinh
No, I don't wear a watch because our school don't allow students to put up some. Decoration on your bodies.
Giám khảo
Have you ever got a watch as a gift?
Thí sinh
No I haven't got any watch as a gift because to be honest, no. People always use phone to check the temps which is not very useful and even useless.
Giám khảo
Why do some people wear expensive watches?
Thí sinh
Because I think this behavior can show their social status and it also can represent his these people was or is a a a rich.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is important to wear a watch? Why?
Thí sinh
I don't think it is important to wear a watch because now you have a smartphone, it have a very good function to check the time and take your watch is not comfortable on your ankle.
Do you wear a watch?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答应更自然、语法正确并直接回应问题。提供一至两句具体原因并用连接词衔接。例如指出学校规定和个人偏好。注意动词单复数、冠词和标点。尽量控制在最多五句内。
Ví dụ: No, I don't wear a watch. My school rules forbid visible body decorations, so I can't wear one, and I also prefer using my phone to check the time.
Have you ever got a watch as a gift?
Điểm: 42.0Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁、逻辑清晰并用正确表达。直接说没有并给出简短原因,避免重复和不准确的词(如 "temps")。可用连接词引出原因,并给出具体情境。注意时态和词汇。
Ví dụ: No, I've never received a watch as a gift. People around me usually use their phones to check the time, so watches aren't common presents.
Why do some people wear expensive watches?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 需要更自然和准确地表达观点,并使用连接词扩展理由或举例。修正语法错误(人称、时态和多余填词),并使用更恰当的词汇如 “status” 或 “wealth”。控制在三到四句内。
Ví dụ: Some people wear expensive watches to show their social status and wealth. Additionally, a high-end watch can be seen as a fashion statement or a symbol of success in certain professions.
Do you think it is important to wear a watch? Why?
Điểm: 46.0Gợi ý: 要给出更清晰的主句并用连接词支持理由。修正语法(主谓一致、词汇选择)并避免奇怪的短语(如“on your ankle”)。可以提到场景比较(如运动或正式场合)以丰富内容。
Ví dụ: I don't think wearing a watch is necessary because smartphones let you check the time easily. However, some people still prefer watches for convenience during sports or because they like the style.
× No, I don't wear a watch because our school don't allow students to put up some. Decoration on your bodies.
✓ No, I don't wear a watch because our school doesn't allow students to put them on their bodies.
错误类型:单复数问题和主谓一致。原句中 “our school don't” 主语是单数,动词应为 does not;“put up some. Decoration on your bodies.” 结构混乱且复数代词使用不当,应把意思连成完整句并用复数代词 them 指代复数的装饰物。建议:使用 does not 与主语保持一致,并把零散的片段合并成完整句,使用复数代词对应复数名词。
× Have you ever got a watch as a gift?
✓ Have you ever gotten a watch as a gift?
错误类型:时态/动词形式(这里归类为“there be issue”替代不完全,但根据列表只更正符合项)。该句在英式英语可用 'got',但在美式英语中常用 'gotten'。如果以美式英语为准,建议使用 'gotten'。建议:根据考试采用的英语变体统一动词形式。
× No I haven't got any watch as a gift because to be honest, no. People always use phone to check the temps which is not very useful and even useless.
✓ No, I haven't got any watch as a gift because, to be honest, people always use phones to check the time, which is not very useful and is even useless.
错误类型:时态和名词单复数、词汇选择问题。原句中 “use phone” 应为复数或加定冠词/不定冠词(use phones / use a phone),“temps” 应为 time(法语 'temps' 不适用),从句缺少连贯性且需要主语一致。建议:使用複数形式或加冠词,使用正确单词 time,保持时态为现在完成/现在时一致,并用完整从句连接。
× Because I think this behavior can show their social status and it also can represent his these people was or is a a a rich.
✓ Because I think this behavior can show people's social status and it can also show that these people are rich.
错误类型:代词使用和句子结构错误。原句混用了 their、his、these,造成代词指代不明;“was or is a a a rich” 词序与词类错误,应使用形容词 rich 并与复数主语 these people 用 are 一致。建议:统一使用适当的代词(如 people 的所有格 people's),并用从句或简单句清楚表达“显示某人是富有的”。
× I don't think it is important to wear a watch because now you have a smartphone, it have a very good function to check the time and take your watch is not comfortable on your ankle.
✓ I don't think it is important to wear a watch because now you have a smartphone; it has a very good function for checking the time, and wearing a watch on your wrist is not comfortable.
错误类型:第三人称单数、词汇与搭配错误。原句中 'it have' 应为 'it has'(第三人称单数);'function to check the time' 更自然为 'function for checking the time' 或 'can check the time';'take your watch is not comfortable on your ankle' 结构错误且词汇不当(手表通常戴在手腕 wrist,而非脚踝 ankle),应改为 'wearing a watch on your wrist is not comfortable'。建议:注意第三人称单数动词变形,使用正确动名词/不定式搭配,并选择合适的词汇(wrist)。