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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you wear a watch?

Thí sinh

Not really. I seldom wear my watch. It is because wearing watch makes me feel uncomfortable, so I preferred not very much.

Giám khảo

Have you ever got a watch as a gift?

Thí sinh

Not really. In Chinese culture, seldom people want to receive the watch because it represents the bad situation.

Giám khảo

Why do some people wear expensive watches?

Thí sinh

Most people wear expensive watch. It is because they need to show their social status. It is important for budgetary people.

Giám khảo

Do you think it is important to wear a watch? Why?

Thí sinh

I think it is important because in the particular occasions such as interview or online text, it necessary to varying watch because we can control the schedule and be on time.

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Part 1

Do you wear a watch?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 回答需更自然且句子更简洁,避免语法和用词错误。先直接回答,然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支持,运用连接词使句子流畅。例如将“I preferred not very much”改为“I prefer not to”或“I don’t like wearing one.” 注意时态和冠词(a watch)。

Ví dụ: Not really. I rarely wear a watch because I find it uncomfortable on my wrist. For example, when I work on a computer all day, a watch can get in the way, so I usually rely on my phone for the time.

Have you ever got a watch as a gift?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更准确自然并提供具体文化解释。先直接回答,然后用一两句说明原因并举例。避免语法错误(use "got"→"received" or "been given","seldom people"→"few people"或"people seldom"). 用连接词如“because”或“for example”。

Ví dụ: No, I haven’t been given a watch as a gift. In Chinese tradition, giving a watch is often avoided because it can symbolize the end of a relationship or bad luck; for example, some people believe it implies counting down someone’s time.

Why do some people wear expensive watches?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 需要更准确表述并用具体理由支持。先直接回答,然后用连接词扩展两到三个具体原因(status, craftsmanship, investment)并避免不清楚的词如“budgetary people”。可用词汇如“status”, “prestige”, “quality”.

Ví dụ: Many people wear expensive watches to signal social status and good taste. Besides status, some value the craftsmanship and long-term investment—luxury watches can also be seen as collectible items.

Do you think it is important to wear a watch? Why?

Điểm: 64.0

Gợi ý: 答案需要更清晰有条理,先给直接观点,再用一两条清楚的支持理由并用连接词。改正语法错误(例如“online text”不明确,应为“online tests”或“meetings”;“varying watch”不合适)。提供具体场景说明。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think wearing a watch can be useful in certain situations, such as job interviews or exams, where checking the time discreetly is important. For instance, during an interview a wristwatch lets you manage your answers without constantly looking at your phone.

Ngữ pháp

8: Verb + -ing form

× It is because wearing watch makes me feel uncomfortable, so I preferred not very much.

It is because wearing a watch makes me feel uncomfortable, so I prefer not to very often.

句中“wearing watch”缺少冠词,應為“wearing a watch”。另外原句“preferred”是過去式,但說的是一般持續的喜好,應使用現在式“prefer”。建議:使用正確冠詞並將動詞改為一般現在時表述習慣(例如:"I prefer not to very often" 或更自然地說 "so I don't wear it very often")。

22: Article errors

× Not really. In Chinese culture, seldom people want to receive the watch because it represents the bad situation.

Not really. In Chinese culture, few people want to receive a watch because it represents something bad.

句中“seldom people”用法不正確,應改為“few people”或“seldom do people”。此外“the watch”在此處不是特指某一隻錶,應使用不定冠詞“a watch”。“represents the bad situation”片語不自然,改為“represents something bad”更通順。建議:使用正確的量詞或句型(few people 或 seldom do people),並注意冠詞用法和更自然的表述。

1: Singular and plural issue

× Most people wear expensive watch. It is because they need to show their social status. It is important for budgetary people.

Most people wear expensive watches. It is because they need to show their social status. It is important for budget-conscious people.

“expensive watch”應為複數形式“expensive watches”,因為主語是“Most people”。另外“budgetary people”用法錯誤,應為“budget-conscious people”或“people concerned about budget”。建議:主語為複數時,名詞也要用複數;用更自然的形容詞短語表達“在乎預算的人”。

6: Present tense issue

× Most people wear expensive watch. It is because they need to show their social status.

Most people wear expensive watches because they need to show their social status.

原句將兩個句子分開並使用“It is because”顯得冗長。更自然的現在時表達是將原因連接為一個句子。注意保持現在時態以描述普遍事實(wear / need)。建議:用現在簡單時描述一般事實,並用because連接原因。

6: Present tense issue

× I think it is important because in the particular occasions such as interview or online text, it necessary to varying watch because we can control the schedule and be on time.

I think it is important because on particular occasions, such as interviews or formal meetings, it is necessary to wear a watch so we can keep to a schedule and be on time.

原句時態和動詞形式混亂:“in the particular occasions”應為“on particular occasions”;“interview or online text”不清楚,應改為“interviews or formal meetings”更符合語境;“it necessary to varying watch”錯誤,應為“it is necessary to wear a watch”;“varying”用法不對。整體需用現在時描述習慣或一般情況。建議:使用正確介詞(on occasions)、名詞複數(interviews)、以及正確的動詞不定式(to wear)。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× I think it is important because in the particular occasions such as interview or online text, it necessary to varying watch because we can control the schedule and be on time.

I think it is important because on particular occasions, such as interviews or formal meetings, it is necessary to wear a watch so we can keep to a schedule and be on time.

“in the particular occasions”介詞使用錯誤,應為“on occasions”;“such as interview”缺少複數和冠詞,應為“such as interviews”;“online text”語義不明,可能想說“online meetings”或“formal online events”。建議:檢查介詞搭配和名詞單複數,並選用準確表達。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× It is because wearing watch makes me feel uncomfortable, so I preferred not very much.

It is because wearing a watch makes me feel uncomfortable, so I don't wear it very much.

原句中缺少代詞“it”來指代“a watch”,且使用過去式“preferred”與上下文不符,應使用現在式“don't wear”。建議:在替代先行詞時使用正確的代詞(it),並保持時態一致。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BadSubstandard; Harmful; Unpleasant; Inauspicious; Severe
ExpensiveCostly
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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