Art— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your response more coherent and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence (do or don't like drawing), then provide 1–2 specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Also correct tense and word choice (e.g., "when I was a child", "I used to enjoy drawing", "I paint the view from my window").

Ví dụ: Yes, I like drawing. When I was a child I used to draw every day and often painted the view from my window. However, my parents encouraged me to focus on my studies, so I stopped drawing regularly while I was studying. Now I only draw occasionally in my free time.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer, then support it with specific examples and clear linking words. Avoid hesitations and incomplete sentences. Mention one or two concrete visits or famous paintings you saw and how they affected you. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy going to galleries. I have visited several museums around the world and was lucky enough to see some famous paintings, such as Van Gogh's works at the Van Gogh Museum. Seeing those originals inspired me and helped me appreciate different painting styles.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and organize your points with linking words (for example, "because" and "and"). Be specific about what you want to learn (e.g., art history, techniques like oil glazing or brushwork) and state a clear plan or hope. Reduce fillers like "uh" and avoid repeating words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to learn more about art because I want to understand the stories behind famous paintings and the techniques artists use. For example, I want to learn oil painting techniques and brushwork so that I can eventually start painting regularly again.

Gợi ý: Respond clearly with a topic sentence and specific supporting details. Explain how you learned (self-taught, classes, copying books) with linking words like "so" or "therefore". Use correct phrases (e.g., "I taught myself", "I copied sketches from books"). Avoid fillers and unclear words.

Ví dụ: I didn't take formal drawing classes as a child, but I taught myself by studying art books and copying sketches from famous paintings. This self-study helped me improve my skills even though I never had professional training.

× I used to like drawing deeply when I was child.

✓ I used to like drawing a lot when I was a child.

Errors: missing article before 'child' and awkward adverb 'deeply'. Use 'a child' for correct noun phrase. Replace 'deeply' with 'a lot' (or 'very much') to express intensity. Suggestion: use 'a child' and natural adverb phrases like 'a lot' or 'very much'. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I like painting every day.

✓ I paint every day.

Present simple 'I paint every day' is more natural for habitual actions. 'I like painting every day' is acceptable but slightly different; original is not ungrammatical but changing to 'I paint every day' fits context and concision. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I paint the same out the window.

✓ I paint the same view out of the window.

Missing preposition 'out of' and missing noun 'view' to complete meaning. 'The same' requires a noun: 'the same view'. Use 'out of the window' or 'from the window' to show perspective. Grammar problem type ID:11

× But my parents said I need to study a lot so I quit and now I just work have.

✓ But my parents said I needed to study a lot, so I quit. Now I just work.

Several tense and word-order issues: 'need' should be past 'needed' to match 'said' (reported speech). 'I quit and now I just work have' is ungrammatical; 'have' misplaced. Split into two sentences: 'I quit.' and 'Now I just work.' Use past for the reported advice and simple present for current state. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I visited a lot of gallery at the museum around the world.

✓ I visited a lot of galleries and museums around the world.

Use plural 'galleries' and 'museums' for countable nouns. 'At the museum' is too specific; use 'and museums' or 'in museums'. 'Around the world' is fine at end. Also 'visited a lot of galleries and museums' is natural. Grammar problem type ID:1

× I think I'm lucky because some umm, painting, uh, I famous painting.

✓ I think I'm lucky because I saw some famous paintings.

Original has broken word order and missing verbs. Rearrange to 'I saw some famous paintings' with past tense 'saw' for completed visits. 'Some famous paintings' uses plural and correct adjective placement. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I saw it uh, I.

✓ I saw them, I think.

Original is a fragment with repeated pronoun. Clarify pronoun: if referring to paintings use 'them'. Add 'I think' if uncertain. Ensure sentence contains subject and verb. Grammar problem type ID:23

× I want to name uh, the story about famous painting and uh, I want to know, uh, how they painted paint, the skill they painted painting.

✓ I want to learn the stories behind famous paintings and understand the techniques they used to paint them.

Use 'learn the stories behind' instead of 'name the story about'. 'How they painted' should be 'the techniques they used to paint them' for clarity and correct noun use. Avoid repeating 'paint'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I hope one day I will paint again.

✓ I hope that one day I will be able to paint again.

Add 'be able to' to express ability in future more naturally. Alternatively 'I hope to paint again one day.' Ensure future hope is expressed clearly. Grammar problem type ID:7

× Uh, I can paint.

✓ I can still paint.

Add 'still' to indicate retained ability after hiatus. Original is grammatical but adding 'still' clarifies context. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I didn't name drawing in former ways, but uh, I uh, lame join by myself when I was a kid, uh, I uh, watched a lot of textbooks and uh, I copy many famous uh, draw drawing.

✓ I didn't learn drawing in formal classes, but I taught myself when I was a kid. I studied many textbooks and copied many famous drawings.

Multiple errors: 'name' should be 'learn'; 'former ways' wrong — 'formal classes' fits; 'lame join by myself' is unintelligible—'taught myself' is correct. Use past tense 'studied' and 'copied' for completed actions. Use plural 'drawings'. Ensure verbs match past-tense narrative. Grammar problem type ID:5