Art— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be careful with grammar (tense and subject-verb agreement) and avoid redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers within 3–4 sentences and use varied vocabulary (e.g., painting, sketching, crafts).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy drawing. When I was a child my parents enrolled me in drawing classes, where I learned painting and simple crafts with classmates. Because the teacher was very supportive, I developed basic skills and a love for art.

Gợi ý: Use natural phrasing and more precise vocabulary; avoid vague phrases like "some beautiful art" and informal emphatics like "super terrific." Use linking words to expand briefly (reason and example).

Ví dụ: Yes, I often visit art galleries in my free time because I enjoy being surrounded by different styles of work. For example, I like contemporary exhibitions for their bold colors and installations, which inspire my own sketches.

Gợi ý: Correct conditional and vocabulary use: say "if I didn't have work-related pressures" and avoid awkward phrasing. Give a concise topic sentence, explain the reason with a linking word, and mention a concrete plan or example.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to study art at university if I weren't under so much work-related pressure. Because I needed to start earning, I chose a practical major, but I still take evening art classes to continue learning.

Gợi ý: Fix tense and word choice (e.g., "I showed great interest," "my parents sent me"). Use linking words (so, because) and add one specific detail about what you learned to make the answer more informative.

Ví dụ: Yes, I showed a strong interest in drawing as a child, so my parents sent me to after-school art classes. There we practiced sketching, color mixing and perspective, which really improved my skills over time.

× when I was a child I go to the drawing class and I enjoy the time there.

✓ When I was a child I went to drawing class and I enjoyed the time there.

The sentence refers to past time 'when I was a child' so verbs must be in the past tense. 'go' and 'enjoy' are present tense; change to 'went' and 'enjoyed'. Also article 'the' before 'drawing class' is optional; 'drawing class' is fine without 'the'. Suggestion: Use past simple for actions completed in the past: 'I went', 'I enjoyed'.

× and the teacher teach us well.

✓ and the teacher taught us well.

The subject 'the teacher' is third person singular and the sentence describes a past action, so the verb must be 'taught' (past of 'teach'). Using 'teach' is present tense and mismatches time reference. Suggestion: Use 'taught' for past events.

× Yes, I always go to the gallery in my free time because I like to immerse the atmosphere of some beautiful art in.

✓ Yes, I always go to galleries in my free time because I like to immerse myself in the atmosphere of beautiful art.

Problems: 'go to the gallery' is acceptable, but 'immerse the atmosphere of some beautiful art in' is incorrect word order and missing reflexive pronoun. Use 'immerse myself in the atmosphere of beautiful art'. Also 'some' is unnecessary; 'galleries' plural sounds more natural for habitual visits. Suggestion: Use 'immerse myself in the atmosphere of beautiful art' and pluralize 'galleries' for habitual action.

× It's super terrific.

✓ It's terrific.

'Super' and 'terrific' are both intensifiers; combining them is informal and redundant. Use one intensifier or a single adjective. Suggestion: Use 'It's terrific' or 'It's really terrific' for emphasis depending on formality.

× Yes, and if I haven't any other pressure on the workforce, I would like to study about art in my college but I give up because I have the pressure of workforce.

✓ Yes. If I didn't have other work pressures, I would like to study art at college, but I gave it up because of work pressure.

Multiple issues: 'haven't any other pressure on the workforce' is ungrammatical; use 'didn't have other work pressures' for unreal present conditional. 'Study about art' should be 'study art'. 'In my college' → 'at college'. 'I give up' should be past 'I gave it up' to match reason in past. 'the pressure of workforce' → 'work pressure'. Suggestion: Use correct conditional structure 'If I didn't have...' and improve noun phrases: 'work pressure'.

× Yes, I show a great interested interest in drawing, so my parents send me to the drawing class.

✓ Yes, I showed a great interest in drawing, so my parents sent me to drawing class.

The actions refer to the past, so verbs should be past simple: 'showed' and 'sent'. 'Interested interest' is redundant; use 'great interest'. 'the drawing class' → 'drawing class' is acceptable either way. Suggestion: Use past simple and avoid repeating similar words.

× We learn different lesson every day after school and it's really practice my drawing skill.

✓ We learned different lessons every day after school, and it really helped practice my drawing skills.

Problems: tense should be past 'learned' and plural 'lessons' for 'different'. 'It's really practice my drawing skill' is ungrammatical: use 'it really helped practice my drawing skills' or 'it really improved my drawing skills'. Also plural 'skills' is natural. Suggestion: Use past tense and correct verb phrase 'helped practice' or 'improved' and pluralize count nouns where needed.