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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like drawing?

Thí sinh

Yes I do. In my childhood. I like to draw the things I see and I like using color pens to paint out the different colors in the world.

Giám khảo

Do you like to go to the gallery?

Thí sinh

Yes I do, because in the gallery I can see many beautiful paintings by a lot of famous painters, but when I go to the gallery I may look the very quickly.

Giám khảo

Do you want to learn more about art?

Thí sinh

No I don't because I only see a painting as my hobby. I think when I learn more about art I may not love the love it anymore.

Giám khảo

Did you learn drawing when you were a kid?

Thí sinh

Yes I do. I learned drawing because I want to go to primary school with my drawing. Drawing skills but it didn't success.

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Part 1

Do you like drawing?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更连贯,避免断句和语法错误;先给主题句,然后用1–2句具体细节支持,使用连接词使句子流畅;注意时态一致(过去与现在区分)。建议多用丰富但贴切的词汇描述绘画的内容和工具。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I have enjoyed drawing since childhood, especially sketching things I see around me. For example, I often use colored pens to capture the bright colors of flowers and buildings, which helps me remember small details.

Do you like to go to the gallery?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并具体说明原因和习惯;避免模糊或语法错误(例如“look the very quickly”)。先给直接回答,再用连接词(because, but, however)补充细节,说明你喜欢看什么以及参观时通常的行为和原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy visiting galleries because I can study beautiful works by famous painters. However, I often walk through quickly due to time constraints, so I usually focus on a few pieces that interest me most.

Do you want to learn more about art?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答理由要更清晰、逻辑更强;避免重复和语病(如“love the love it”)。可以先回答,然后用一两句解释原因并举例说明你担心的变化,或提供替代选择(比如保持兴趣的方式)。

Ví dụ: No, I don't intend to study art formally because I prefer to keep painting as a relaxing hobby. I'm worried that studying it professionally might turn my enjoyment into pressure, so I prefer to learn informally from books and visits to galleries.

Did you learn drawing when you were a kid?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 注意时态(过去式)和句子完整性,避免破碎句。先用一词回答(Yes, I did),然后简洁说明原因和结果,并提供具体细节(谁教的、学了多久、学到什么)。这样更符合考试要求。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a child I took drawing lessons because I hoped my art would help me get into a better primary school. I practiced basic skills like shading and proportions, but I didn't achieve the results I hoped for.

Ngữ pháp

6: Present tense issue

× Yes I do. In my childhood. I like to draw the things I see and I like using color pens to paint out the different colors in the world.

Yes, I do. In my childhood I liked to draw the things I saw, and I liked using colored pens to paint the different colors of the world.

问题类型:现在时/过去时使用不当(应使用过去时描述童年)。说明:原句在谈论“my childhood(我的童年)”时却用了现在时“like / see / like using”,时态不一致,应使用过去时(liked, saw)。另外“color pens”更自然为“colored pens”,“paint out the different colors”改为“paint the different colors”。建议:谈论过去经历时把动词改为过去式,注意形容词形式。

6: Present tense issue

× Yes I do, because in the gallery I can see many beautiful paintings by a lot of famous painters, but when I go to the gallery I may look the very quickly.

Yes, I do, because in the gallery I can see many beautiful paintings by many famous painters, but when I go to the gallery I often look very quickly.

问题类型:现在时使用与情态词不当。说明:句中“a lot of famous painters”可简化为“many famous painters”;“may look the very quickly”不符合英语表达,'may' 暗示可能性但语境应表达频率,用副词 often 更合适;另外去掉多余的定冠词“the”。建议:表示经常性动作用频率副词(often, usually),注意词序(look very quickly)。

6: Present tense issue

× No I don't because I only see a painting as my hobby. I think when I learn more about art I may not love the love it anymore.

No, I don't because I only see painting as my hobby. I think if I learn more about art I may not love it anymore.

问题类型:现在时/情态与代词使用错误。说明:'see a painting as my hobby' 不自然,应为 'see painting as my hobby';'when I learn more' 可以保留现在时或改为条件 'if I learn more' 更合适;原句 'may not love the love it anymore' 有重复 'love' 且代词使用多余,改为 'may not love it anymore'。建议:注意不可数名词用法(painting用作泛指可不加冠词),避免重复词,正确使用代词 it。

5: Past tense issue

× Yes I do. I learned drawing because I want to go to primary school with my drawing. Drawing skills but it didn't success.

Yes, I did. I learned drawing because I wanted to get into primary school with my drawing skills, but it wasn't successful.

问题类型:过去时使用不当与句子结构错误。说明:问及过去时(Did you learn...)应答用过去时 'Yes, I did.';'I learned drawing because I want' 的动词时态应为 wanted;'to go to primary school with my drawing' 表达不自然,改为 'get into primary school with my drawing skills' 更通顺;'Drawing skills but it didn't success' 语法错误,'success' 是名词,应使用形容词 'successful' 或被动 'it didn't succeed'。建议:回答过去事件使用过去时,注意名词/形容词选择与句子完整性。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BeautifulAttractive
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
FamousWell known
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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