Art— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your response more natural and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and grammar (e.g., use past when referring to childhood). Avoid redundancy and keep to under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoyed drawing a lot when I was young because it helped me express my ideas and relax. For example, I used to sketch characters and scenes from my imagination, which improved my creativity. I still draw occasionally now, especially when I want to unwind.

Gợi ý: Provide a clearer, grammatically correct answer and add a specific example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to explain reasons. Fix common errors (e.g., 'go to the gallery', 'in my free time', 'watch exhibitions' or 'see new works').

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy going to galleries in my free time because I like to see different styles of art. For example, I sometimes visit exhibitions with friends to learn about new artists and get inspiration for my own drawings.

Gợi ý: Be direct and consistent in your opinion. Use correct adverbs ('not really') and give a clear reason with one specific detail or example. Avoid contradictory phrases. Keep it concise and grammatical.

Ví dụ: Not really. I enjoy drawing as a hobby, but I don't want to study art formally because I find the theory and history quite challenging. For example, I prefer practicing sketches at home rather than taking structured art classes.

Gợi ý: Clarify the timeline and correct grammar. Give one clear supporting detail about what you learned and how the teacher helped. Avoid unclear or incorrect phrases (e.g., 'she really cry'). Use linking words like 'for example' properly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. In primary school I learned drawing from my teacher, who showed us basic techniques like shading and mixing colors. For example, she taught me how to draw simple figures such as a chef or animals, which made drawing fun and easier to learn.

× Yes I do when I was young I really enjoy drawing is tell me experience, create my creativity idea and relax.

✓ Yes I do. When I was young, I really enjoyed drawing; it helped me express my experiences, develop my creativity, and relax.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. Use past tense 'enjoyed' for activities in the past ('when I was young'). Also split into clearer clauses and use verbs that fit the intended meaning ('helped me express', 'develop my creativity'). Add punctuation and articles for clarity.

× And I also still draw.

✓ I still draw.

Redundant conjunction and incorrect word order. Use simple present 'I still draw' to state a habitual action. Remove 'also' or place it as 'I also still draw' if emphasizing, but 'I still draw' is more natural.

× Yes I do. I enjoy go to the gallery when I have a free time.

✓ Yes, I do. I enjoy going to galleries when I have free time.

Use the gerund 'going' after 'enjoy' (verb + -ing). 'Gallery' should be plural for the general activity, and 'free time' does not need an article. Add commas and correct word forms.

× I sometime I go out to gallery with my friend for wash exhibition and learn new.

✓ Sometimes I go to galleries with my friends to see exhibitions and learn new things.

Use plural forms 'galleries' and 'friends' for general statements. 'Sometimes' is the correct adverb form. Use 'to see exhibitions' rather than 'wash exhibition', and 'learn new things' to complete the idea.

× Not fairly, I enjoy drawing and handwriting but I however I don't want to learn more about art because I think it's very difficult and I can.

✓ Not really. I enjoy drawing and handwriting, but I don't want to learn more about art because I think it's very difficult and I can't.

'Not fairly' is incorrect; use 'not really'. Remove redundant 'however'. The sentence ends with 'I can' which is incomplete; context requires negation 'I can't'. Also punctuation and conjunction placement improved.

× Yes I did as primary school I learned drawing with my teacher.

✓ Yes, I did. In primary school I learned drawing from my teacher.

Add comma and split into sentences. Use preposition 'in primary school' and 'learned drawing from my teacher' is the natural phrasing.

× She really cry and she helped me draw drawing chef something for example she.

✓ She often cried and she helped me draw things, for example drawings of a chef.

'Really cry' is incorrect; for habitual past use 'often cried' or 'used to cry' depending on meaning. 'Draw drawing chef something' is ungrammatical; clarify as 'draw things' and give a concrete example 'drawings of a chef'. Improve word order and specificity.