Dreams— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は意図が伝わるが、文法的誤り、冗長さ、論理のまとまりに改善が必要です。具体的には時制の一致（過去の経験と夢の説明を分ける）、繋ぎ言葉の追加、余分な繰り返しの削減を行ってください。例：まず主題文で“yes”に続けて一文で夢の内容を説明し、その後理由や背景を1～2文で補足すると自然に聞こえます。

Ví dụ: Yes, I can. When I was in junior high school I dreamed of becoming a basketball player because I used to play on the school team. I practiced a lot and enjoyed competing, which is why the dream felt so vivid to me.

Gợi ý: 意味は推察できるが語彙の選択ミス（pray→play?）、文法（主語動詞一致）、重複、論理の明確さが欠けています。まず簡潔な主文を作り、理由をつなぎ語（for example, because, so）で補足してください。友人の支援や具体的な状況を一つ挙げると説得力が上がります。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I often tell my friends about my goals because they encourage me and help me stay motivated. For example, my teammates gave me advice and practiced with me when I wanted to improve my shooting.

Gợi ý: 回答は混乱しており、多くの語句が不適切または意味不明です。まず簡潔に意見の主張（Yes/No + 主題文）を言い、その後理由を1～2文で具体的に述べてください。専門用語を避け、具体例（目標としての夢や達成のための計画）を使うと良いです。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe dreams can be meaningful because they show our hopes and goals for the future. For instance, if someone dreams of becoming an athlete, that dream can motivate them to train and set specific targets.

Gợi ý: 意図は伝わるが文法、語順、語彙の選択が不正確で、論理の流れが不明瞭です。まず明確な主張をし、その後に具体的な行動や根拠を述べてください。過去の習慣（practiced daily）と現在の意志（still working towards it）を区別して表現すると良いです。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I practice basketball every day and set small goals, such as improving my shooting accuracy, so I can gradually achieve my dream. Many people who support me also help keep me motivated.

× I remember my dream was a basketball player because I used to play basketball in junior high school.

✓ I remember my dream: I was a basketball player because I used to play basketball in junior high school.

The sentence mixes memory description and identity; use past continuous or a clause with 'I was' to describe the dream. Keep past reference consistent. Suggestion: separate the memory and the content of the dream with a colon or 'that'.

× So I played hard basketball.

✓ So I practiced basketball hard.

'Played hard basketball' is awkward in English; the adverb 'hard' should modify the verb 'practiced' or 'trained'. Use 'practiced basketball hard' or 'trained hard' for clarity.

× Yes, I do because Because when we shared dreams with my friends they encouraged me to pray basketball and they makes me stay motivated to do my dreams

✓ Yes, I do because when I shared my dreams with my friends they encouraged me to pursue basketball and they made me stay motivated to follow my dreams.

Pronoun usage and agreement are inconsistent: 'we shared dreams with my friends' should be 'I shared my dreams with my friends'. 'pray basketball' is incorrect verb choice; use 'pursue basketball'. 'they makes' is wrong subject-verb agreement and tense; use 'they made'. Also 'do my dreams' is unnatural; use 'follow my dreams'.

× Yes, I think so. Dreams well dream dreams are the best things I want to be in the future future.

✓ Yes, I think so. Dreams are the best things I want to pursue in the future.

The original contains repetition and ungrammatical phrases 'well dream dreams'. Use present simple 'Dreams are' to state a general belief and 'pursue in the future' to express intention. Remove duplicate word 'future'.

× Many people are kogilu to the dream.

✓ Many people are committed to their dreams.

'kogilu' appears to be a non-English word or typo. Replace with appropriate adjective such as 'committed' or 'devoted'. Use the preposition 'to' with 'committed to'.

× Yes, I always want to come through my dreams because I played basketball every day still steer so many people believe my dreams come true.

✓ Yes, I always want to make my dreams come true because I play basketball every day and many people still believe my dreams will come true.

Tense and word choice errors: 'come through my dreams' should be 'make my dreams come true'. Maintain present simple 'I play basketball every day' for ongoing action. 'still steer so many people believe' is ungrammatical; replace with 'many people still believe'. Use 'will come true' for future expectation.

× It's barely present for me.

✓ It is barely possible for me.

'Barely present' is incorrect collocation. Likely intended meaning is that achieving the dream is unlikely or difficult: use 'barely possible' or 'hardly possible'.