Dreams— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cavabınız mövzunu işıqlandırır, amma ifadə qarışıq və təkrarlı hissələr var. Daha aydın struktur (mövzu cümləsi → səbəb → qısa nümunə) və düzgün fel-mövzu uyğunluğu istifadə edin. Həmçinin “um” kimi dolğu sözlərdən çəkinin və bəzi sözləri daha dəqiq seçin (məsələn, “I had many dreams” əvəzinə).

Ví dụ: Yes, I had many dreams as a child. For example, I wanted to become a teacher, and now I am one, which makes me very happy because I enjoy teaching students.

Gợi ý: Cavabın əsas ideyası aydındır, amma danışıq çox qısa və qarışıqdır; bir cümlədə ziddiyyət yaranıb. Fikri düz və ardıcıl formada təqdim edin: əvvəlcə bəli/xeyr deyin, sonra qısa səbəb və bir nümunə verin. Qısa və sadə cümlələrdən istifadə edin.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually share my dreams with close friends and family because they support me and give advice. For example, I often tell my sister about my career plans and she helps me plan steps to achieve them.

Gợi ý: Fikir aydın olsa da, qrammatika və dəqiqlik tələb olunur. Fel-mövzu uyumuna diqqət yetirin və ümumi ifadələri konkretləşdirin. Əlavə olaraq uyğun keçid sözlərindən istifadə edin (for example, because) və 2-3 cümləyə sığdırın.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe dreams often have special meanings because they reflect a person's background and daily experiences. For example, someone who is stressed at work might dream about being chased, which shows their anxiety.

Gợi ý: Cavabınızda məntiqi əlaqə var, amma ifadələr qeyri-dəqiq, təkrarlamalar ("our our") və qrammatik səhvlər mövcuddur. Daha konkret olun: kimin xəyallarından danışdığınızı dəqiqləşdirin və səbəbi qısa şəkildə verin. 2-3 cümlə təşkil edin və təkrarı aradan qaldırın.

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to make my dreams come true because achieving them brings a great sense of fulfilment and happiness. For instance, becoming a teacher was my dream, and now that I have achieved it, I feel very satisfied.

× Yes, I had a lot of dreams when I was a child and I, uh, came through my summer dreams.

✓ Yes, I had a lot of dreams when I was a child and I used to have vivid dreams during the summer.

The original sentence uses 'came through my summer dreams' which is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Used to have' correctly expresses a past habitual action. Replace the unclear clause with 'had vivid dreams during the summer' to convey meaning clearly and grammatically.

× For example, when I was a child, I wanted to be a teacher, but now I'm a teacher and it makes me happy because I really like teaching students.

✓ For example, when I was a child I wanted to be a teacher, and now I am a teacher, which makes me happy because I really enjoy teaching students.

Tense sequence is mostly correct, but wording and connector choice need adjustment. Use 'which makes me happy' to link the clauses smoothly and 'enjoy' is a more natural verb than 'like' in this context.

× - Lakin cavab qısa, qarışıq cümlələrlə verilib və bir yerində əks məna yaranıb (“They don't like me to be happy.

✓ - However, the answer is short and expressed in mixed sentences, and in one place it creates the opposite meaning (for example, 'They don't like me to be happy').

This fragment mixes languages and punctuation and lacks a closing parenthesis. Rephrase to English for clarity and add parentheses correctly. Maintain original meaning while correcting sentence structure.

× - Bir səbəb vermisən — insanların fərqli həyat tərzi/aparıcı təcrübələri xəyallara təsir etdiyini demisən.

✓ - You gave a reason — you said that people's different lifestyles or daily experiences affect their dreams.

Translate to English and use present tense 'affect' to state a general truth. Use plural 'people's' and the noun phrase 'daily experiences' for clarity.

× - Qrammatika: fel və mövzu uyğunluğuna diqqət et. Məsələn, "dreams depends" deyil, "dreams depend" olmalıdır.

✓ - Grammar: pay attention to verb-subject agreement. For example, say 'dreams depend' rather than 'dreams depends'.

Provide the correction in English and explain subject-verb agreement. 'Dreams' is plural so the base verb 'depend' (not 'depends') is required.

× - Aydınlıq və əlaqəlilik: fikirləri qısa və məntiqli ardıcıllıqla ver — əvvəlcə fikir, sonra səbəb və qısa nümunə.

✓ - Clarity and cohesion: present ideas in short and logical order — idea first, then reason, then a short example.

Translate guidance to English and use proper nouns and structure. No grammatical error in translation beyond language consistency.

× Because people live differently

✓ Because people live differently,

Add a comma if used as a clause starter. The phrase itself is grammatically acceptable but needs punctuation when leading a sentence.

× Yes, I believe dreams often have special meanings because they reflect a person's background and daily experiences.

✓ Yes, I believe dreams often have special meanings because they reflect a person's background and daily experiences.

Sentence is already correct; article use 'a person's' is appropriate to generalize about individuals. No change needed.

× Of course, I think that old people want to make their dreams come true because we live for our dreams.

✓ Of course, I think that people want to make their dreams come true because many of us live for our dreams.

'Old people' is likely an unintended specificity; use 'people' for generalization. Use consistent viewpoint: replace 'we' with 'many of us' to avoid mismatch between speaker and referenced group.

× If our our dreams come true, we can achieve our feelings and they make us so happy and that's why people try to come through their dreams for.

✓ If our dreams come true, we feel fulfilled and very happy, and that's why people try to make their dreams come true.

Remove duplicated word 'our'. 'Achieve our feelings' is incorrect — use 'feel fulfilled' or 'achieve our goals'. 'Come through their dreams for' is ungrammatical; replace with 'make their dreams come true'. Ensure present simple for general truths.