Dreams— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a direct topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Correct verb forms and articles (e.g., 'I really enjoyed planting' and 'becoming an artist'). Keep responses under five sentences and use a linking phrase when adding details (e.g., 'for example').

Ví dụ: I don't remember most of my childhood dreams, but I do recall one clearly: I wanted to be an artist who works with plants. For example, I used to spend hours arranging flowers and growing small potted gardens, which made me think of a creative career.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid contradictions. Use correct tense and articles ('I share' or 'I shared', 'an artist'). Explain briefly why you share or why you think it's impossible using one linking word (e.g., 'because' or 'although').

Ví dụ: Yes, I share my dreams with my best friends because we all enjoy gardening. Although we would like to become plant artists, we think it might be difficult due to limited job opportunities in our town.

Gợi ý: Clarify and correct vocabulary and grammar. Start with a direct opinion ('Yes' or 'No') and then give a clear reason. Replace unclear words ('drink') with 'dreams' and use linking words ('because' or 'for example'). Provide a specific explanation of what meaning you think dreams hold.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe dreams can have special meanings because they often reflect our talents and interests. For example, dreaming about gardening might show that you enjoy nurturing plants and have a creative side.

Gợi ý: Be concise and use correct verb forms and word order. Start with a clear topic sentence ('Yes, I do') and then give a specific example of what you do to achieve your dream. Use linking words like 'so' or 'for example' and keep it to one or two supporting sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I am learning practical gardening skills and reading books about plant care, so I can improve my abilities and gradually turn my hobby into a career.

× To be honest, I don't have clear memory about my dream in my childhood, but I still remember that when I was a child.

✓ To be honest, I don't have clear memories of my childhood dreams, but I still remember that when I was a child I enjoyed planting.

The original has tense/number and wording problems: 'memory' should be plural 'memories' (singular/plural issue) and 'about my dream in my childhood' is awkward; use 'of my childhood dreams'. Also 'I really enjoying planting' in the next clause is a verb form error; change to 'I enjoyed planting' to match past tense 'when I was a child'. Ensure sentence has a main verb and parallel structure. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I really enjoying planting so maybe becoming a artist is my childhood.

✓ I really enjoyed planting, so maybe becoming an artist was my childhood dream.

'I really enjoying' is ungrammatical; use simple past 'I really enjoyed' to match 'when I was a child'. 'Becoming a artist' needs article 'an' before vowel sound and 'a artist' -> 'an artist'. Also 'is my childhood' is incomplete; use 'was my childhood dream' to convey past interest. Grammar problem type ID:8

× Yes, I shared my dreams with my best friends because we have the same dream.

✓ Yes, I shared my dreams with my best friends because we had the same dream.

The sentence mixes past 'shared' with present 'have'. Keep tense consistent: use past tense 'had' to match 'shared'. Grammar problem type ID:5

× We all like planting, so we all want to be a artist, but that's an impossible thing for us.

✓ We all like planting, so we all want to be artists, but that's impossible for us.

Use 'an artist' before vowel sound, but here plural 'artists' fits better since 'we all want to be artists'. Also 'that's an impossible thing' is awkward; 'that's impossible for us' is natural. Grammar problem type ID:22

× Of course, drink have special meanings is not only a symbol of your talents, but also hobby.

✓ Of course, dreams have special meanings: they are not only a symbol of your talents but also a reflection of your hobbies.

Original is confused: 'drink' is likely a typo for 'dreams', and 'have special meanings is not only...' is ungrammatical. Fix subject 'dreams', use plural verb 'have', and restructure into two clauses connected properly. Use 'a symbol of your talents' and 'a reflection of your hobbies' to be clearer and parallel. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Actually, I really want to make my dreams come true, so I put many efforts I try to learn to how to plant.

✓ Actually, I really want to make my dreams come true, so I put in a lot of effort and I try to learn how to plant.

'Put many efforts' is incorrect English; use 'put in a lot of effort' or 'make many efforts'. Also 'I try to learn to how to plant' has extra 'to' and wrong verb form; correct to 'I try to learn how to plant' or 'I am trying to learn how to plant'. Ensure parallel structure and correct use of gerund/infinitive. Grammar problem type ID:10