Dreams— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并用现在或过去时统一时态，句子要简洁且有逻辑连接。补充具体细节（例如什么时候、哪类科学、受谁影响）并减少语法错误。练习使用1-2个连接词（because, so, when）来组织句子。

Ví dụ: Yes. When I was a child, I wanted to be a scientist because my mother is a doctor and my grandfather taught biology at high school. Growing up in that environment, I learned a lot about biology and became fascinated by experiments.

Gợi ý: 注意时态和拼写（secondary school, future），避免重复表达。先给主题句，再用一到两个具体细节说明（何时、和谁、怎么讨论）。使用连词（when, so, and）让句子流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes. In secondary school I often shared my dreams with my best friends when we planned our future. We discussed our goals and supported each other so that we could achieve them later.

Gợi ý: 句子结构混乱，语法错误多（it/they, motivated，people's）。先给直接回答，然后用1-2个清晰具体的理由或例子说明不同看法。使用连接词（for example, however, because）使观点清楚。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think dreams can be symbols of our goals because they often reflect our ambitions and desires. However, some people have ordinary dreams that are just reflections of daily life rather than long-term goals.

Gợi ý: 回答清楚但可以更简洁有力。把时态统一，减少重复（skills and some experiments），并给出更具体的学习内容或未来计划（例如哪类实验、想从事什么工作）。使用连接词（so, because, by）增强逻辑。

Ví dụ: Definitely. That's why I chose Biotechnology as my university major, because the courses teach practical laboratory skills and experimental techniques. By learning molecular biology and lab methods, I hope to pursue a research career in biomedical science.

× Yes, I want to be a scientist while I was a child because my mother is a doctor and my grandparent is a biological teacher in high school, so I learn a lot of knowledge about.

✓ Yes, I wanted to be a scientist when I was a child because my mother was a doctor and my grandparent was a biology teacher in high school, so I learned a lot of related knowledge.

错误类型：过去时使用不当。说明：句子描述的是过去的愿望和背景，应使用过去时。例如 want → wanted，is/are → was（母亲和祖父母在过去的情境中），learn → learned。另有词汇搭配问题：’biological teacher’ 不自然，应为 ‘biology teacher’；‘a lot of knowledge about’ 不完整，改为 ‘a lot of related knowledge’。建议：当叙述过去发生的事情或过去状态时，统一使用过去时态，注意固定搭配。

× I share my dream with my besties in secondary school. That time we talk about our dream because we want to plan our features. We hope all can achieve our dreams when we grow up.

✓ I shared my dream with my best friends in secondary school. At that time we talked about our dreams because we wanted to plan our futures. We hoped everyone could achieve their dreams when we grew up.

错误类型：主谓一致与时态混用。说明：叙述的是过去的经历，应使用过去时（share → shared，talk → talked，want → wanted）。名词和代词搭配问题：besties 非正式且复数最好用 'best friends'；dream（单复数）需一致，用 'dreams'；'features' 用法错误，应为 'futures'；'all' 用法不当，改为 'everyone'；时态一致性也要保持（hope → hoped，can → could，grow up → grew up）。建议：叙述过去事件时，把句子中的动词都改为过去式，检查名词单复数和合适词汇。

× Definitely a dream is a symbol of your goals and sometimes it can make our have more motivated to achieve it and in some peoples dream is just their daily dream and it's a.

✓ Definitely, a dream is a symbol of your goals, and sometimes it can make us more motivated to achieve them; for some people, a dream is just their daily thought and nothing more.

错误类型：现在时和代词使用问题。说明：句子中存在主语代词和动词结构混乱：'make our have more motivated' 不符合语法，应为 'make us more motivated'；代词一致性：前面用 'your goals' 而后文用 'our' 或 'them' 要统一。拼写和省略也有问题：'peoples' 应为 'people'；句尾 'and it's a.' 不完整。建议：使用清晰的主语代词（you/ us/ them）并保持一致，修正动词短语结构（make + 人 + 形容词/过去分词），并把不完整的句子补全。

× Definitely. So I choose Biotechnologies for my major in university. I hope the class and this experience can help me to achieve my dream. I can learn some skills and some experiments in my classes.

✓ Definitely. So I chose Biotechnology as my major at university. I hope the classes and this experience can help me achieve my dream. I can learn some skills and do some experiments in my classes.

错误类型：现在时与过去时不一致、名词形式问题。说明：说话者在表述已做的选择时应使用过去时（choose → chose）。专业名称用单数形式更自然（Biotechnology 而非 Biotechnologies）；'major in university' 更自然为 'major at university' 或 'major in university studies'；'help me to achieve' 可简化为 'help me achieve'；'learn some skills and some experiments' 中 'learn experiments' 不恰当，应为 'do some experiments'。建议：谈及已做决定用过去式，注意学科名称的常用形式，动词搭配要符合常用表达（do experiments，而不是 learn experiments）。