Dreams— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (tense and articles) and avoid repetition. Try to keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I can usually remember my dreams. For example, when I was a child I often recalled vivid dreams the next morning, and even now I can sometimes remember what I dreamed last night. However, I tend to forget bad dreams soon after waking because they make me feel upset.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence and one clear reason with a linking word. Avoid fillers and repetition; use correct noun forms and concise language. Provide a brief example or exception to enrich the answer.

Ví dụ: No, I usually don't share my dreams with others because I consider them private. For example, if a friend asked about a personal dream, I would probably decline, although I might share a harmless, funny dream with close friends.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear opinion and follow with one or two specific reasons using linking words. Fix grammar (verb forms, word order) and be specific about how dreams relate to daily life. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe dreams can have meaning because they often reflect recent experiences or worries. For instance, if I study for an exam all week, I might dream about tests, which suggests my brain is processing that stress.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give a clear reason with a linking phrase. Correct grammar and use natural phrasing (e.g., 'realize' or 'come true'). Provide a concrete example to illustrate preference between dreaming and real experience.

Ví dụ: It depends on the dream: if it is a positive goal, I would like to make it come true, but not ordinary or strange dreams. For example, I would aim to turn a dream of traveling into reality by booking a trip, rather than simply dreaming about it.

× Uh yes for sure.

✓ Yes, for sure.

The sentence is a fragment but spoken fillers 'Uh' are unnecessary in corrected text. Use simple present 'Yes, for sure.' to answer the question directly.

× Especially when I was still a kid.

✓ Especially when I was a kid.

Use simple past 'was a kid' is correct; remove 'still' which is informal and redundant here. The clause should attach to previous sentence; as a standalone response use 'Especially when I was a kid.'

× I can always remember what I dreamed last night and when I wake up I can still record it and it it feels good sometime.

✓ I can usually remember what I dreamed last night, and when I wake up I can still recall it, and it sometimes feels good.

Multiple issues: inconsistent adverbs and verb choice. Use 'usually' instead of 'always' for realistic frequency; 'dreamed' (past) is correct with 'last night'; 'record' is replaced by 'recall' for remembering; duplicate 'it it' removed; adverb 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' and placed before 'feels'. Maintain present ability with simple present/modal wording.

× But when I have a bad dream it probably not.

✓ But when I have a bad dream, it probably does not feel good.

Missing auxiliary for negation: in present simple negative about feeling, use 'does not' + verb. Add comma and complete predicate 'feel good' to make sentence grammatical.

× No, I, I don't share my dreams with somebody I know, umm, and I'm not interested in others dream as well because I think it's kind of private thing and uh, if you ask them, it's kind, it's a kind of, uh, offensive.

✓ No, I don't share my dreams with people I know, and I'm not interested in other people's dreams either because I think it's a private matter, and if you ask them it can be offensive.

Pronoun and noun form errors: use plural 'people' instead of 'somebody' for general statement; possessive 'other people's dreams' required; 'as well' -> 'either' for negative agreement; 'private thing' -> 'private matter' idiomatic; 'it's a kind of, uh, offensive' -> 'it can be offensive' corrects grammar and register.

× So I don't do it.

✓ So I don't.

Short answer more natural: 'So I don't.' Alternatively 'So I don't share them.' Avoid repeating 'do it' when referent is clear. Keep present simple negation.

× Well, I, I do think so, umm, well, because I think the dream is, can reveal something, uh, that you have experienced in your daily life when you wake up and when you slept in and your brain is keeping think about it.

✓ Yes, I do think so, because dreams can reveal something that you experienced in your daily life; when you wake up your brain continues to think about it.

Verb tense and structure errors: 'the dream is, can reveal' is ungrammatical—use 'dreams can reveal'; 'have experienced' can be simplified to past 'experienced' when referring to past events; 'when you slept in' is incorrect in this context—use 'when you sleep' or omit; 'your brain is keeping think about it' should be 'your brain continues to think about it.' Use clearer clause structure and correct verb forms.

× So they are relevant to.

✓ So they are relevant.

Sentence ended with stray preposition 'to' making it incomplete. Remove 'to' and finish as 'So they are relevant.'

× Well it depends, is a good dreams or a bad one? Umm.

✓ Well, it depends: is it a good dream or a bad one?

Pronoun and article errors: missing subject 'it' in the question and incorrect article/plural 'a good dreams' should be 'a good dream.' Proper question word order 'is it' required.

× And most of the time I I don't want my dream to come true in my daily life.

✓ Most of the time I don't want my dreams to come true in my daily life.

Plural consistency: use 'dreams' to match general reference; remove duplicate 'I'. The structure 'want ... to come true' is correct; keep present simple for habitual preference.

× And uh I'm more preferred to travel myself instead of dream it so I don't want it.

✓ And I prefer to travel myself instead of just dreaming about it, so I don't want that to happen.

Incorrect verb/adjective usage: 'I'm more preferred' is wrong—use 'I prefer.' 'Dream it' should be 'dreaming about it.' Clarify pronoun 'it' and use 'that' for the event. Maintain present simple preference.