Dreams— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your reply more natural and grammatically correct, give a clear topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid fragments and unclear phrasing (e.g. “the impressive 1”, “Hope someday if I could make it”). Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I can remember some of my dreams. The most memorable one is about studying abroad, and I still think about it often because I want to experience a different education system and culture. For example, I dream of living in the UK to improve my English and meet students from many countries.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence and correct basic grammar (prepositions and verb forms). Give a brief reason why you share only with close friends and use linking words for coherence. Replace vague phrases like “starting abroad” with precise wording.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do, but only with close friends. I prefer to tell people I trust because they support me and give useful advice. For instance, my close friend hopes to get an accounting license, while I dream of studying abroad to broaden my career options.

Gợi ý: Make sentences grammatically correct and more concise. Use linking words (“because”, “so”, “therefore”) and give a concrete example or reason to explain the meaning of dreams. Avoid repetition of the word “dreams” in a short space.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think dreams can have special meanings because they often reveal our goals and motivate us. For example, having a dream to study abroad pushed me to study harder and save money, so I now have a clear plan to achieve it.

Gợi ý: Use a clearer structure: state your position, explain briefly why, and give a realistic example or plan. Correct grammar and remove repetitions (e.g. “dreams may just dreams”, “that that”). Use conditional phrasing correctly.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. I want my dreams to come true because they give my life direction, but I know it takes hard work and planning. For instance, to achieve studying abroad I plan to apply for scholarships, improve my language skills, and gain relevant experience.

× I still dream of it right now.

✓ I am still dreaming about it right now.

The original uses simple present 'dream' while referring to a current ongoing feeling; present continuous ('am dreaming') better expresses an ongoing present action or state. Use 'about' after 'dream' when referring to the topic. Suggestion: use present continuous for ongoing states and include the correct preposition.

× Hope someday if I could make it.

✓ I hope that someday I can make it.

The original sentence omits the subject and uses an incorrect conditional structure. Use 'I hope that' as the main clause and 'can' for ability/possibility in the future. Avoid 'if' here because it creates an unnecessary conditional. Suggestion: include the subject and use 'can' or 'will' depending on nuance.

× I only share my dreams to my close friend and we share our dreams together.

✓ I only share my dreams with my close friend, and we share our dreams together.

The verb 'share' takes the preposition 'with' when indicating the person you share something with; 'to' is incorrect. Also a comma improves readability between clauses. Suggestion: use 'share ... with someone.'

× Her dream is to get the accountant's license and my dream is starting abroad.

✓ Her dream is to get an accountant's license, and my dream is to study abroad.

Two issues: 1) article: use 'an accountant's license' (indefinite article) rather than 'the' unless a specific license is meant. 2) verb form: 'my dream is starting abroad' is ungrammatical; use infinitive 'to study abroad' to express intended action. Suggestion: use correct article and the infinitive after 'dream is'.

× It could make you more motivate to go get your dreams.

✓ It could make you more motivated to pursue your dreams.

'Motivate' is a verb; the correct adjective form is 'motivated' after 'more'. Also 'go get your dreams' is informal and awkward; use 'pursue your dreams.' Suggestion: use participial adjective 'motivated' and a natural verb phrase like 'pursue.'

× Like I have a dream, so there's a thing I need to put effort to.

✓ For example, because I have a dream, there is something I need to put effort into.

Casual 'Like' is informal; 'there's a thing' is vague. Use 'something' and correct preposition is 'put effort into' (not 'to'). Also reorder for clarity: 'because I have a dream' explains the reason. Suggestion: use 'because' or 'for example' and 'put effort into'.

× I think everyone wants to make their dream come true, but dreams may just dreams like last people didn't make it come true.

✓ I think everyone wants to make their dreams come true, but sometimes dreams remain just dreams because many people do not achieve them.

Multiple issues: plural agreement ('dreams' with 'everyone' acceptable as generic) and ungrammatical phrase 'may just dreams like last people didn't make it come true.' Use 'sometimes' and 'remain just dreams' plus correct negative 'do not achieve them.' Suggestion: simplify and use correct verb forms and plurality.

× But I hope I was the one that that could have the dreams come true.

✓ But I hope I will be the one who can make my dreams come true.

The original mixes past 'was' with hope about the future and has duplicated 'that'. Use future-oriented 'will be' or 'can' and correct relative pronoun 'who.' Also 'make my dreams come true' is the natural collocation. Suggestion: match tense to the intended future meaning and correct pronoun and verb choice.